Tiny Tales of Terror
Viewing comments for Chapter 10034 "Nina: A 100 Word Horror"Multi-authored book of flash/micro horror fiction
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Comment from Gert sherwood
First Dean,
so good to see you Back
Now you wrote a honor story that would of freaked me out of what you described in the last part of your horror water dripping scare.
Gert
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First Dean,
so good to see you Back
Now you wrote a honor story that would of freaked me out of what you described in the last part of your horror water dripping scare.
Gert
Comment Written 14-Sep-2015
Comment from jpduck
Undoubtedly a clever story, particularly in light of the exactly one hundred word limitation. But I'm afraid your multitudes of pictures do nothing for me. And as for the sound track -- whatever next? Smellies? Feelies?
This is a WRITERS' site.
Adrian
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Undoubtedly a clever story, particularly in light of the exactly one hundred word limitation. But I'm afraid your multitudes of pictures do nothing for me. And as for the sound track -- whatever next? Smellies? Feelies?
This is a WRITERS' site.
Adrian
Comment Written 14-Sep-2015
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Well it's about time you return. You are due a severe tongue lashing. We missed you. Well this would scare anybody that is a scardy cat but that's not me, Not me, not me. LOL Well done Dean. Welcome back. Hugs. Nancy
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Well it's about time you return. You are due a severe tongue lashing. We missed you. Well this would scare anybody that is a scardy cat but that's not me, Not me, not me. LOL Well done Dean. Welcome back. Hugs. Nancy
Comment Written 14-Sep-2015
Comment from robina1978
Excellent photos that complement your 100 word horror story perfectly. You are so good at this, I should not have read it just before going to the bedroom. Your main character gets many calls asking for Nina, then Nina phones and sounds as if she has been water-boarded. Turns out she drowned a year ago. Best wishes for the prompt.
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Excellent photos that complement your 100 word horror story perfectly. You are so good at this, I should not have read it just before going to the bedroom. Your main character gets many calls asking for Nina, then Nina phones and sounds as if she has been water-boarded. Turns out she drowned a year ago. Best wishes for the prompt.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2015
Comment from Megalips
Dean, where in the world have you been? I love all your stuff (as you know) but this one is particularly fabulous to me, and I really can't give you a specific explanation beyond it just 'works'...you do so much in such a small space with so few words. The name "Nina" has a scary quality to it (I think I remember it in a Dracula movie or something). Your first paragraph with the hyphens really work great to create pause and thought. The picture is perfect...love the faucet too, and it's the perfect ending with the tub running. Hey, go back and check spelling on 'facet' first line, second paragraph.
~Meg
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Dean, where in the world have you been? I love all your stuff (as you know) but this one is particularly fabulous to me, and I really can't give you a specific explanation beyond it just 'works'...you do so much in such a small space with so few words. The name "Nina" has a scary quality to it (I think I remember it in a Dracula movie or something). Your first paragraph with the hyphens really work great to create pause and thought. The picture is perfect...love the faucet too, and it's the perfect ending with the tub running. Hey, go back and check spelling on 'facet' first line, second paragraph.
~Meg
Comment Written 14-Sep-2015
Comment from I am Cat
Yikes! Alright... He's baaaaack! ;)
Creepy... very creepy, Dean! It's always good to see you...
I hope you'll stay and keep your spot up there!
Seriously. And I AM serious.
I thought this, and that damn phone ringing, was really
creepy. Seem the rest has done your muse well.
I only saw one little nit (as Rama would say)
'every fa(u)cet in my recently rented flat has now developed a steady drip.'
(unless of course, you did mean facet instead of faucet, and then... my bad) lol
Well done... I swear I'm going to write one of these... dammit! ;)
Cat
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Yikes! Alright... He's baaaaack! ;)
Creepy... very creepy, Dean! It's always good to see you...
I hope you'll stay and keep your spot up there!
Seriously. And I AM serious.
I thought this, and that damn phone ringing, was really
creepy. Seem the rest has done your muse well.
I only saw one little nit (as Rama would say)
'every fa(u)cet in my recently rented flat has now developed a steady drip.'
(unless of course, you did mean facet instead of faucet, and then... my bad) lol
Well done... I swear I'm going to write one of these... dammit! ;)
Cat
Comment Written 14-Sep-2015
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello Handsome,
It is good to see your tiny tale of horror again. I missed you.
I like this flash fiction tale, starting with the phone ring and the faucet drip drops to the end. Kept under 100 words to adhere to a contest you were not allowed to enter, I've been there and I know how frustrated it is. I hope to see more of your writing. Well done!
~your friend, Gypsy
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Hello Handsome,
It is good to see your tiny tale of horror again. I missed you.
I like this flash fiction tale, starting with the phone ring and the faucet drip drops to the end. Kept under 100 words to adhere to a contest you were not allowed to enter, I've been there and I know how frustrated it is. I hope to see more of your writing. Well done!
~your friend, Gypsy
Comment Written 14-Sep-2015
Comment from doggymad
Loved this one. Shame you couldn't enter the contest. Nina certainly wasn't going to let herself be forgotten.
It left me wondering if the new home owner obliged and stepped into the bath to join her.
best wishes
Freda
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Loved this one. Shame you couldn't enter the contest. Nina certainly wasn't going to let herself be forgotten.
It left me wondering if the new home owner obliged and stepped into the bath to join her.
best wishes
Freda
Comment Written 14-Sep-2015
Comment from Linda Engel
OK Dean, now you have me frightened of drippy faucets! Creepy and uncomfortable. I am always hesitant of being in the shower when I know I am alone in the house. It seams we have more and more restrictions on the site. Today I questioned why my to be reviewed list deleted after three days instead of the thirty days as stated on site.
Back to your story: We have missed our fix for horror plasma from you and are so happy to see you again.
You always bring the best chills to run and down my spine. quivers and shakes.
I know you are busy with catching up but please read my "Old Man Dink" it is a murder piece.
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OK Dean, now you have me frightened of drippy faucets! Creepy and uncomfortable. I am always hesitant of being in the shower when I know I am alone in the house. It seams we have more and more restrictions on the site. Today I questioned why my to be reviewed list deleted after three days instead of the thirty days as stated on site.
Back to your story: We have missed our fix for horror plasma from you and are so happy to see you again.
You always bring the best chills to run and down my spine. quivers and shakes.
I know you are busy with catching up but please read my "Old Man Dink" it is a murder piece.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2015
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Dean - Welcome back! Wondered where you were, as you always post so regularly. Anyway you are back in full swing. This is a good one and up to your usual standard. A good ending. Those last 3 lines freak the reader out. Very good. Warm regards Dorothy x
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Hi Dean - Welcome back! Wondered where you were, as you always post so regularly. Anyway you are back in full swing. This is a good one and up to your usual standard. A good ending. Those last 3 lines freak the reader out. Very good. Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 14-Sep-2015
