Tiny Tales of Terror
Viewing comments for Chapter 10034 "Nina: A 100 Word Horror"Multi-authored book of flash/micro horror fiction
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Comment from sandra roth
you came up with a good story with so few words. I liked it and it is well written, but the idea is well used so that's the only thing; in my opinion, that took away from it.
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you came up with a good story with so few words. I liked it and it is well written, but the idea is well used so that's the only thing; in my opinion, that took away from it.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2022
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
I enjoyed your eerie little tale. It's well written and gave me a shiver. I think it's an art form in and of itself to be able to tell a complete story in 100 words, but you did just that. I'm just beginning my writing journey and I LOVE creepy thrillers. So I tried my hand at 100 words and learned how challenging it can be. Where did you learn to create such beautiful writing? The way you build tension and then release it at the end is exhilarating.
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I enjoyed your eerie little tale. It's well written and gave me a shiver. I think it's an art form in and of itself to be able to tell a complete story in 100 words, but you did just that. I'm just beginning my writing journey and I LOVE creepy thrillers. So I tried my hand at 100 words and learned how challenging it can be. Where did you learn to create such beautiful writing? The way you build tension and then release it at the end is exhilarating.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2022
Comment from w.j.debi
A spooky story. Not a lot of gore, but the kind of scary I like--a psychological thriller that gives goose bumps and makes you start at the sounds in the other room-- what you are really hearing. And what is there in the shadows that you cannot quite see? Don't think about it too much you you might find out....
Well done.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2015
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A spooky story. Not a lot of gore, but the kind of scary I like--a psychological thriller that gives goose bumps and makes you start at the sounds in the other room-- what you are really hearing. And what is there in the shadows that you cannot quite see? Don't think about it too much you you might find out....
Well done.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2015
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Thanks, debi. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
~Dean
Comment from Lighthouse Keeper
Well played, sir! I quick and witty romp into darkness. I've been off site for quite some time so it was nicety return to such a pleasant message that this was here to enjoy. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2015
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Well played, sir! I quick and witty romp into darkness. I've been off site for quite some time so it was nicety return to such a pleasant message that this was here to enjoy. Nicely done.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2015
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Well, I sincerely appreciate you taking the time to stop by and give me a review, Lighthouse Keeper. Thank you, very much!
~Dean
Comment from DALLAS01
What a shame. I was recently disqualified from a contest because I misread and posted a free verse in a blank verse contest. Asked if it could be reentered but was too late. I loved this because it was psychologically thrilling. Did not need graphic spillage. lol.
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What a shame. I was recently disqualified from a contest because I misread and posted a free verse in a blank verse contest. Asked if it could be reentered but was too late. I loved this because it was psychologically thrilling. Did not need graphic spillage. lol.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2015
Comment from rod007
This is not the kind of company I want. I better get a priest in to exorcise her spirit from the tap and phone so I don't receive any horrific messages, then I can sleep well and be at peace. Well done, Dean.
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This is not the kind of company I want. I better get a priest in to exorcise her spirit from the tap and phone so I don't receive any horrific messages, then I can sleep well and be at peace. Well done, Dean.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2015
Comment from Tpa
An ingenious creative work. An amazing feat I have never read nor HEARD on this site before. It was chilling and entertaining. I wish you luck in the contest. As far as I'm concern, you are a winner.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015
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An ingenious creative work. An amazing feat I have never read nor HEARD on this site before. It was chilling and entertaining. I wish you luck in the contest. As far as I'm concern, you are a winner.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015
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Hey, thanks for dropping by to read and review the story for me, Tpa. I really appreciate the positive feedback and exceptional rating.
Unfortunately, I never got to enter my contribution in the contest. My hands were tied because I'd already posted twice, and even though I completely deleted a post just to get in, I was still denied. Oh well, it was fun to write just the same.
I'm very happy you enjoyed it.
~Dean ;)
Comment from giraffmang
Hi Dean,
Very nice chapter added to the 'Tiny Tales' anthology? Your touch has been missed greatly, my friend.
A good atmospheric, spooky rendition here. Back on a good footing it seems.
Nicely done
G
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015
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Hi Dean,
Very nice chapter added to the 'Tiny Tales' anthology? Your touch has been missed greatly, my friend.
A good atmospheric, spooky rendition here. Back on a good footing it seems.
Nicely done
G
Comment Written 17-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015
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Thanks, Gareth. I'd intended to list it as one of the chapters in the book but I'd forgotten all about doing so.
I really appreciate the positive review.
~Dean
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
It's gone in the contest now, hasn't it? Only
the contest heading shows on this.
Glad to see you back- your creepy stories/poems
keep me alert - good luck with the contest, Dean
Margaret
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015
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It's gone in the contest now, hasn't it? Only
the contest heading shows on this.
Glad to see you back- your creepy stories/poems
keep me alert - good luck with the contest, Dean
Margaret
Comment Written 17-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015
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It never made it to the contest, Margaret. I explained why in my author's notes.
It's good to be back, thanks for giving this tiny tale a once-over. I do appreciate it.
~Dean
Comment from Janet Foor
Creepy for sure. I haven't taken a shower while alone in the house since "Psycho". Haha So sorry you couldn't enter the contest - this is perfect for the 100 word horror contest. I don't like some of FanStory rules.
Janet
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015
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Creepy for sure. I haven't taken a shower while alone in the house since "Psycho". Haha So sorry you couldn't enter the contest - this is perfect for the 100 word horror contest. I don't like some of FanStory rules.
Janet
Comment Written 17-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015
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I don't like a LOT of FanStory's rules, Janet, LOL. But, there's no better site in which to receive constructive feedback (and at times, not so constructive, if you get my meaning) from readers on the internet. I know, I belong to several other writing sites.
Thanks very much for the positive comments.
~Dean
