A cat ruined.
A short story about our dog, Smokey24 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was a wonderfully enjoyable post about your dog. Funny too! I would suggest going into more detail. Perhaps show this using a story. Write what the walk (for example) is like and introduce these details. Great job overrall - very enjoyable.
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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2015
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I thought this was a wonderfully enjoyable post about your dog. Funny too! I would suggest going into more detail. Perhaps show this using a story. Write what the walk (for example) is like and introduce these details. Great job overrall - very enjoyable.
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Comment Written 01-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed Sunday.
Comment from MizKat
Hi Ine,
It's too bad Smokey ruined the cat that he liked to play with. I have some questions. What is a spare lead? What do you mean when you wrote "he eats the wooden floor at the sites? Then you say: Fortunately he does not eat it too. What does that mean? As I get older and am always in daily pain I don't understand things as easily as I once did. Sorry.
Kat
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2015
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Hi Ine,
It's too bad Smokey ruined the cat that he liked to play with. I have some questions. What is a spare lead? What do you mean when you wrote "he eats the wooden floor at the sites? Then you say: Fortunately he does not eat it too. What does that mean? As I get older and am always in daily pain I don't understand things as easily as I once did. Sorry.
Kat
Comment Written 01-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed Sunday. See corrected version.
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I still don't understand part of it. First you say he eats the wooden floor at the sites, then you say Fortunately he does not eat it too. How can he eat it and not eat it?
Comment from pharp
I love the picture of Smokey, he just a beautiful dog. It seems like he really enjoyed playing with his little toy cat. So he got more toys I am sure he is going to have the play time of his life. Thanks for sharing. Portia
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2015
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I love the picture of Smokey, he just a beautiful dog. It seems like he really enjoyed playing with his little toy cat. So he got more toys I am sure he is going to have the play time of his life. Thanks for sharing. Portia
Comment Written 01-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed Sunday.
Comment from judiverse
What a cute doggie. Smokey knows his enemy, the cat. He appreciates a wide variety of toys, I'm sure, so won't be too disappointed about not getting the same cat toy. Just be careful that his toys don't have something that he could swallow and possibly choke on. Clarify your last paragraph. You say he eats the wooden floor and then say "fortunately, he does not eat it too." Maybe he licks it? judi
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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2015
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What a cute doggie. Smokey knows his enemy, the cat. He appreciates a wide variety of toys, I'm sure, so won't be too disappointed about not getting the same cat toy. Just be careful that his toys don't have something that he could swallow and possibly choke on. Clarify your last paragraph. You say he eats the wooden floor and then say "fortunately, he does not eat it too." Maybe he licks it? judi
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Comment Written 01-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed Sunday. See changed version.
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You're very welcome. judi
