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Moonlight's beams109 total reviews
Comment from judiverse
I love your "If" thoughts. No matter what a human being dreams of doing, it is for God to accomplish those things. This does require a certain amount of humility. No matter how hard a person might try to write perfect poems or make dreams come true, it's through God that does it. Excellent wording, and great AABB rhyme. The flow is also great--very smooth. judi
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2015
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I love your "If" thoughts. No matter what a human being dreams of doing, it is for God to accomplish those things. This does require a certain amount of humility. No matter how hard a person might try to write perfect poems or make dreams come true, it's through God that does it. Excellent wording, and great AABB rhyme. The flow is also great--very smooth. judi
Comment Written 01-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2015
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Thank you Judy, for your great encouragement, lovely words and generosity, my gratitude, blessings, Roy.
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You're very welcome. judi
Comment from Jacob Collins
I think that we must always trust in God and trust in the plan he has for us all. I thought that your poem clearly demonstrated that message, Roy, I liked the imagery you used throughout and I thought that your writing was well written. I couldn't find any faults. Thanks for sharing...Jacob
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2015
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I think that we must always trust in God and trust in the plan he has for us all. I thought that your poem clearly demonstrated that message, Roy, I liked the imagery you used throughout and I thought that your writing was well written. I couldn't find any faults. Thanks for sharing...Jacob
Comment Written 01-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2015
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Thank you Jacob, for your great encouragement, lovely words and generosity, my gratitude, blessings, Roy.
Comment from clsandau
Another beautiful poem from your very talented pen. I love your descriptions, the rhyming and also making our wonderful God the focus. Thanks for such joyous writing; the setup was perfect too. Blessings, Carol
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2015
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Another beautiful poem from your very talented pen. I love your descriptions, the rhyming and also making our wonderful God the focus. Thanks for such joyous writing; the setup was perfect too. Blessings, Carol
Comment Written 01-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2015
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Thank you Carol, for your great encouragement, lovely words and generosity, my gratitude, blessings, Roy.
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You are so welcome
Comment from Linda Kay
This poem had a sweet tone and natural feel to the rhyme while giving a good message that God is love. It had very nice imagery and good word choice to make it flow so well. Nice word, as usual!
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2015
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This poem had a sweet tone and natural feel to the rhyme while giving a good message that God is love. It had very nice imagery and good word choice to make it flow so well. Nice word, as usual!
Comment Written 01-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2015
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Thank you Linda, for your great encouragement, lovely words and generosity, my gratitude, blessings, Roy.
Comment from MelB
Another fantastic poem with wonderful flow, rhythm, rhyme and imagery. Good use of alliteration. A most enjoyable and uplifting poem.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2015
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Another fantastic poem with wonderful flow, rhythm, rhyme and imagery. Good use of alliteration. A most enjoyable and uplifting poem.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2015
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Thank you Melissa, for your great encouragement, lovely words and generosity, my gratitude, blessings, Roy.
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You're welcome, Roy!
Comment from TAB_that's me
This is a lovely poem Roy, full of love, beauty, hope, dreams and God (which all come from God). Your rhyme and meter are perfect for a smooth flow.
teresa
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2015
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This is a lovely poem Roy, full of love, beauty, hope, dreams and God (which all come from God). Your rhyme and meter are perfect for a smooth flow.
teresa
Comment Written 01-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2015
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Thanks Teresa for this great review and comments, much appreciated, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Leineco
Compelling meter; excellent voice, great aabb rhyming and an uplifting message - - -what more could one ask from a poem :-)
Nicely done :-)
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2015
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Compelling meter; excellent voice, great aabb rhyming and an uplifting message - - -what more could one ask from a poem :-)
Nicely done :-)
Comment Written 01-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2015
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Thanks, for this great review and comments, much appreciated, blessings, Roy.
Comment from ameen786
Simply beautiful! The essence of humanity-God and love; you captured that extremely well with such eloquence/grace reflected through out the lovely poem; superb flow in excellent rhymes; a true treat sir, thank you very much.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2015
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Simply beautiful! The essence of humanity-God and love; you captured that extremely well with such eloquence/grace reflected through out the lovely poem; superb flow in excellent rhymes; a true treat sir, thank you very much.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2015
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Thanks, for this great review and comments, much appreciated, blessings, Roy.
Comment from inside echo
Such a beautiful, peaceful poem. It begins talking of fantasies and dreams, love and peace. Then goes on to tell us that God is all that and more. All our dreams and desires can be fulfilled once we let Jesus lead our lives. It rhymes and flows exceptionally. Wonderfully written, and certainly worth of my last 6.
Well done and thank you for sharing.
tgc
echo
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2015
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Such a beautiful, peaceful poem. It begins talking of fantasies and dreams, love and peace. Then goes on to tell us that God is all that and more. All our dreams and desires can be fulfilled once we let Jesus lead our lives. It rhymes and flows exceptionally. Wonderfully written, and certainly worth of my last 6.
Well done and thank you for sharing.
tgc
echo
Comment Written 01-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2015
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Thanks Echo, for these wonderful words, encouraging review and exceptional rating and the last one, blessings, Roy.
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You are welcome Roy.
tgc
echo
Comment from cercie
What an amazing poem. I loved the words. the flow and the rhythm.
There was no need for a picture because your words painted a perfect picture for me.
Thank you for sharing this lovely piece.
hugs
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2015
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What an amazing poem. I loved the words. the flow and the rhythm.
There was no need for a picture because your words painted a perfect picture for me.
Thank you for sharing this lovely piece.
hugs
Comment Written 01-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2015
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Thanks Chris, for this great review and comments, much appreciated, blessings, Roy.
