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Moonlight's beams109 total reviews
Comment from Walu Feral
G'day Roy. Spot on once again mate. Another sweet piece with perfect flow and rhymes and the clearest of messages painted with your beautiful descriptive words. I love your words cobber. Well done again, cheers Fez
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2015
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G'day Roy. Spot on once again mate. Another sweet piece with perfect flow and rhymes and the clearest of messages painted with your beautiful descriptive words. I love your words cobber. Well done again, cheers Fez
Comment Written 02-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2015
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Thank you Fez, for your great encouragement, lovely words and generosity, my gratitude, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Dr. Ron
You know what...I'm going ahead and giving six stars for this one! Your writing is charged with vivid imagery, beauty, and imagination. Its eloquence hints that you see something beyond what most of us can see. May God continue to guide your pen and your heart!
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You know what...I'm going ahead and giving six stars for this one! Your writing is charged with vivid imagery, beauty, and imagination. Its eloquence hints that you see something beyond what most of us can see. May God continue to guide your pen and your heart!
Comment Written 02-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2015
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Thank you so much Dr. Ron, delightful comments, review and exceptional rating you have made my day, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Dawn Munro
Oh, Roy, how very beautiful! I think this has to be one of my favourites if not THE favourite of all your poems! Its imagery is spectacular! "...on golden looms with shining seams..." ...sigh... How wonderfully romantic!
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2015
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Oh, Roy, how very beautiful! I think this has to be one of my favourites if not THE favourite of all your poems! Its imagery is spectacular! "...on golden looms with shining seams..." ...sigh... How wonderfully romantic!
Comment Written 01-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2015
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Thank you, for your great encouragement, lovely words and generosity, my gratitude, blessings, Roy.
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You're most welcome.
Comment from visionary1234
Well I just heard that two old friends of mine, a mother and 15 year old daughter, were both killed in a horrible car accident today Roy ... so I'm struggling for both hope and love here. Your piece is extraordinarily well timed!
Best wishes
Sharyn
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2015
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Well I just heard that two old friends of mine, a mother and 15 year old daughter, were both killed in a horrible car accident today Roy ... so I'm struggling for both hope and love here. Your piece is extraordinarily well timed!
Best wishes
Sharyn
Comment Written 01-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2015
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The horizontal world is sometimes lousy, but the vertical, wow! Turned when I was 41. No regrets. Thanks Sharyn for the wonderful review and comments,, blessings, Roy.
Comment from N.K. Wagner
A lovely expression of faith and of the poet's longing to perfect his craft beyond human ability. Something to consider: one weaves on a loom but may sew on fabric within a frame. The distinction is important to needleworkers and weavers. :) Nancy
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2015
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A lovely expression of faith and of the poet's longing to perfect his craft beyond human ability. Something to consider: one weaves on a loom but may sew on fabric within a frame. The distinction is important to needleworkers and weavers. :) Nancy
Comment Written 01-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2015
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Thank you Nancy, for your great encouragement, lovely words and generosity, my gratitude, blessings, Roy.
Comment from I am Cat
Beautifully said words of sentiment, Roy... I love the lilting
poetic words in the first three stanzas... lovely...
I think you're probably still able to bring joy and make
hearts sing doing other things... like writing poetry,
so you'll be ok. :)
well done, beautifully crafted.
CAt
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2015
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Beautifully said words of sentiment, Roy... I love the lilting
poetic words in the first three stanzas... lovely...
I think you're probably still able to bring joy and make
hearts sing doing other things... like writing poetry,
so you'll be ok. :)
well done, beautifully crafted.
CAt
Comment Written 01-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2015
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Thank you Cat, for your great encouragement, lovely words and generosity, my gratitude, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Mary H-W
Such lovely words to honour God. The rhyme and meter are spot on. It reads like a dream, or a healthy fantasy.
i'm so glad you shared this
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2015
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Such lovely words to honour God. The rhyme and meter are spot on. It reads like a dream, or a healthy fantasy.
i'm so glad you shared this
Comment Written 01-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2015
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Thank you Mary, for your great encouragement, lovely words and generosity, my gratitude, blessings, Roy.
Comment from GWHARGIS
Though I have read a lot of 6 star worthy thing I held one back. Now I know why. This was probably one of the most beautiful poems I have ever read. Your imagery and emotion was awe inspiring. I thoroughly enjoyed this one.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2015
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Though I have read a lot of 6 star worthy thing I held one back. Now I know why. This was probably one of the most beautiful poems I have ever read. Your imagery and emotion was awe inspiring. I thoroughly enjoyed this one.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2015
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Thanks Gretchen, for these most encouraging words, delightful comments, and generous rating, imm so grateful, blessings, Roy.
Comment from rmj09
I'm still waiting for six stars, but that happen after 2300.
The poem focus we are not God.
The poem storyline development capture moonbeams paved of gold to catch love's dream, then ride lightnings shaft and speak like thunder. Scribe writes like a gem, if I could grant all dreams come true, then truest love I'd brew. If I could weave love's spell, sew worthwhile dreams. But I'm not God, my God is love.
The rhythm is a steady beat and punctuates every few words.
Keep on writing.
Roy, you may not to God but you are his child and you shine with his love. Have a great weekend. ^J^Rita
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2015
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I'm still waiting for six stars, but that happen after 2300.
The poem focus we are not God.
The poem storyline development capture moonbeams paved of gold to catch love's dream, then ride lightnings shaft and speak like thunder. Scribe writes like a gem, if I could grant all dreams come true, then truest love I'd brew. If I could weave love's spell, sew worthwhile dreams. But I'm not God, my God is love.
The rhythm is a steady beat and punctuates every few words.
Keep on writing.
Roy, you may not to God but you are his child and you shine with his love. Have a great weekend. ^J^Rita
Comment Written 01-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2015
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Thank you Rita, for your great encouragement, lovely words and generosity, my gratitude, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Janet Foor
A wonderful scripture to inspire this thoughtful poem Roy. Beautiful picture to capture to message. I wish for you the peace that passes all understanding.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2015
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A wonderful scripture to inspire this thoughtful poem Roy. Beautiful picture to capture to message. I wish for you the peace that passes all understanding.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 01-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2015
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Thank you Janet, for you support, most generous words my humble gratitude, blessings, Roy.
