Oh to capture.
Moonlight's beams109 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
If only. It would be a lovely world if all your dreams could come true. What a lovely poem, Roy, smooth rhyme and rhythm, absolutely beautiful words with a message of hope. A pleasure to read. :) xsx Sandra
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2015
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If only. It would be a lovely world if all your dreams could come true. What a lovely poem, Roy, smooth rhyme and rhythm, absolutely beautiful words with a message of hope. A pleasure to read. :) xsx Sandra
Comment Written 01-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2015
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Thanks Sandra, for this wonderful review, the excellent comments and great rating, blessings, Roy.
Comment from MizKat
Hi Roy,
This is another nice poem that is written really well. I always enjoy what you write. I am so tired, as it's a little after two o'clock, so I'd better get off here soon so I don't fall asleep. One more message and I'm done.
Kat
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2015
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Hi Roy,
This is another nice poem that is written really well. I always enjoy what you write. I am so tired, as it's a little after two o'clock, so I'd better get off here soon so I don't fall asleep. One more message and I'm done.
Kat
Comment Written 01-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2015
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Thanks Kat, You go to bed, dear friend, thanks for this wonderful review, the excellent comments and great rating, blessings, Roy.
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I had a nice nights sleep and I'm ready to go again. I so appreciate your caring friendship. Thanks!
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Well done,
Comment from nomi338
Because we are indeed made in His Holy image, we can imitate Him by smiling on those in need of one, offering a helping hand whenever possible. Showing true agape love to all, even those who act in a hateful manner. Remember every heart can be touched, (remember Saul/Paul?) Speak words of comfort and whenever possible praise God's holy name, His ho;y truth and encourage all you meet to honor Him by worshiping Him in spirit and truth. In this way you can do the thing you wish that you could. Lovely poem.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2015
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Because we are indeed made in His Holy image, we can imitate Him by smiling on those in need of one, offering a helping hand whenever possible. Showing true agape love to all, even those who act in a hateful manner. Remember every heart can be touched, (remember Saul/Paul?) Speak words of comfort and whenever possible praise God's holy name, His ho;y truth and encourage all you meet to honor Him by worshiping Him in spirit and truth. In this way you can do the thing you wish that you could. Lovely poem.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2015
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Thanks, for this wonderful review, the excellent comments and great rating, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Dean Kuch
None of us--no mere mortal--is either God, nor a god. Even the mighty Hercules was not a true god, just the son of one. And like that mythical hero, we are sons of The God, and made mightily in His own image. So if we, as the noblest of bardic scribes, were to be able to harness the forces of nature through our poetry alone, would our words have greater impact than they already do now? Or, would extraordinary things seen and witnessed in nature lose their luster somewhat and become commonplace, or rendered ordinary and passe? For that's usually what occurs when man gets his grubby grasp on anything he touches.
Wonderfully rhymed, Roy. Excellent work. ~Dean
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2015
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None of us--no mere mortal--is either God, nor a god. Even the mighty Hercules was not a true god, just the son of one. And like that mythical hero, we are sons of The God, and made mightily in His own image. So if we, as the noblest of bardic scribes, were to be able to harness the forces of nature through our poetry alone, would our words have greater impact than they already do now? Or, would extraordinary things seen and witnessed in nature lose their luster somewhat and become commonplace, or rendered ordinary and passe? For that's usually what occurs when man gets his grubby grasp on anything he touches.
Wonderfully rhymed, Roy. Excellent work. ~Dean
Comment Written 01-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2015
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Thanks Dean, if only eh, thanks for this wonderful review, the excellent comments and great rating, blessings, Roy.
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Always a pleasure, Roy. And yes, if only...:)
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Aaah!
Comment from scd41
This is yet another nice spiritual poem from your pen. It is simple and rhymes well. In several religions, Nature is treated as God. In the last stanza, you say 'But I'm not God' but you have full faith in His blessings. God blesses those who have faith in Him.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2015
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This is yet another nice spiritual poem from your pen. It is simple and rhymes well. In several religions, Nature is treated as God. In the last stanza, you say 'But I'm not God' but you have full faith in His blessings. God blesses those who have faith in Him.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2015
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Thanks, for this wonderful review, the excellent comments and great rating, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
Beautiful poetry. There is so many things we would like to do to make our love ones happy everyday. But the only thing we have to do is to love them like God love us.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2015
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Beautiful poetry. There is so many things we would like to do to make our love ones happy everyday. But the only thing we have to do is to love them like God love us.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2015
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Thanks Sandra, for this wonderful review, the excellent comments and great rating, blessings, Roy.
Comment from krys123
Roy;
-I enjoyed this relatively written spiritual poem very much is it brought into mind all the things that one could do and give but not another can God give the best in all things.
-The imagery was very descriptive and excellently expressive throughout the writing and very vividly and demonstratively stated.
-The rhyming words were contingent to the meaning and concept of each line therefore making the rhythm flow smoothly and because of this the rhyming was neither forced no labored also helping the rhythm flow smoothly.
-The rhythmic meter, timing and tempo and cadence were all helpful in making the reading clear, fluid and very easy.
-I enjoyed your approach and how systematically you were writing your work. A very professional approach with an artistic value involved.
-Thank you for sharing and posting and may the good Lord be with you forever.
Alex
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2015
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Roy;
-I enjoyed this relatively written spiritual poem very much is it brought into mind all the things that one could do and give but not another can God give the best in all things.
-The imagery was very descriptive and excellently expressive throughout the writing and very vividly and demonstratively stated.
-The rhyming words were contingent to the meaning and concept of each line therefore making the rhythm flow smoothly and because of this the rhyming was neither forced no labored also helping the rhythm flow smoothly.
-The rhythmic meter, timing and tempo and cadence were all helpful in making the reading clear, fluid and very easy.
-I enjoyed your approach and how systematically you were writing your work. A very professional approach with an artistic value involved.
-Thank you for sharing and posting and may the good Lord be with you forever.
Alex
Comment Written 01-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2015
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Thanks Alex for this wonderful review, the excellent comments and great rating, not to mention your usual thoroughness, blessings, Roy.
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USO sincerely welcome Roy.
Alex
Comment from kiwisteveh
And yet another piece that rhymes sweetly and sings along in perfect meter to deliver a resounding statement of your religious faith.
Here it is the imagery that is most striking, especially the first two stanzas that deal with starlight and moonbeams, those icons of romantic love and happiness.
Beautifully done.
Steve
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2015
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And yet another piece that rhymes sweetly and sings along in perfect meter to deliver a resounding statement of your religious faith.
Here it is the imagery that is most striking, especially the first two stanzas that deal with starlight and moonbeams, those icons of romantic love and happiness.
Beautifully done.
Steve
Comment Written 01-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2015
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Thanks Steve, for this wonderful review, the excellent comments and great rating, blessings, Roy.
Comment from giraffmang
Hi Roy,
This is superb.
The flow of this and the rhythm are perfect. The reader simply rolls through it.
A beautiful uplifting piece.
God is love - pure.
Loved this one but alas no sixes!
G
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2015
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Hi Roy,
This is superb.
The flow of this and the rhythm are perfect. The reader simply rolls through it.
A beautiful uplifting piece.
God is love - pure.
Loved this one but alas no sixes!
G
Comment Written 01-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2015
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Thanks G, for this wonderful review, the excellent comments and great rating, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello Royowen,
~Oh to capture~ is a beautiful poem about God and nature and the beauty in the world that was created by God for us humans. Good job!
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2015
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Hello Royowen,
~Oh to capture~ is a beautiful poem about God and nature and the beauty in the world that was created by God for us humans. Good job!
Comment Written 01-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2015
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Thanks, for this wonderful review, the excellent comments and great rating, blessings, Roy.
