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Comment from krys123
Bill;
-ha ha ha ha! What a very amusing and numerous piece of poetry that I enjoyed reading very much and actually it comes from an era of relativity as I was growing up in college.
-Each of your rhyming words were contingent to the meaning and concept of each line.
-The rhythm believe it or not had cadence, timing and tempo which made the reading clear, fluid and easy.
-Thank you for sharing and posting and may the good Lord be with you forever my friend.
Alex
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2015
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Bill;
-ha ha ha ha! What a very amusing and numerous piece of poetry that I enjoyed reading very much and actually it comes from an era of relativity as I was growing up in college.
-Each of your rhyming words were contingent to the meaning and concept of each line.
-The rhythm believe it or not had cadence, timing and tempo which made the reading clear, fluid and easy.
-Thank you for sharing and posting and may the good Lord be with you forever my friend.
Alex
Comment Written 31-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2015
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Thank you, Alex, for the great review. Bill
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You are very welcome Bill
Comment from Jay Squires
Never heard of it chewed before, Bill. But I must say, you write with such authenticity. Now I know you're not endorsing marijauana. But it's comforting to know that before any enduring poet on FS pens his creation, he does the necessary research. LOL, rock on, my friend.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2015
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Never heard of it chewed before, Bill. But I must say, you write with such authenticity. Now I know you're not endorsing marijauana. But it's comforting to know that before any enduring poet on FS pens his creation, he does the necessary research. LOL, rock on, my friend.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2015
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Thank you, Jay, for the great review. Bill
