Thoughtful Poems and Prose
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Comment from Nan Beeson
Ha!
Your seven words or less contest entry hit the nail on the head! It is also concise and has impact with a final blast!
"Technological glitch," YES! ABSOLUTELY, YES!
"Virological hitch;" If Virological means (a virus) that must be
what it is, because I rather IT has it rather than me...or is it "I?"
"Psychological switch!" YES, IF IT IS THE COMPUTER'S PSYCHO AND NOT MNE...The guy's expression on his face is the way I look when mine is being naughty. Michael Whitson's image is perfect for this contest entry.
You have a great sense of humor. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2015
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Ha!
Your seven words or less contest entry hit the nail on the head! It is also concise and has impact with a final blast!
"Technological glitch," YES! ABSOLUTELY, YES!
"Virological hitch;" If Virological means (a virus) that must be
what it is, because I rather IT has it rather than me...or is it "I?"
"Psychological switch!" YES, IF IT IS THE COMPUTER'S PSYCHO AND NOT MNE...The guy's expression on his face is the way I look when mine is being naughty. Michael Whitson's image is perfect for this contest entry.
You have a great sense of humor. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 05-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2015
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Yes, you got it. The contest is over, thanks.
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You are welcome. IKeep them coming! Nan
Comment from tennesseerose
I like your 7 word poem, but how does virological apply? The dictionary says it is the study of infections, etc. Please excuse my ignorance, but we learn something new every day, don't we?
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2015
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I like your 7 word poem, but how does virological apply? The dictionary says it is the study of infections, etc. Please excuse my ignorance, but we learn something new every day, don't we?
Comment Written 31-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2015
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Computer virus ... ring a bell?
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LOL! Ohhhhhh...can you tell I am an old gal? You're welcome and thanks for the answer.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello mystery writer,
~Computer Trouble~is a pretty good entry for the seven word poem contest. Good job with the syllable count. Good luck!
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2015
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Hello mystery writer,
~Computer Trouble~is a pretty good entry for the seven word poem contest. Good job with the syllable count. Good luck!
Comment Written 31-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2015
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Contest rules are: 7 words or less.
Thanks for reading, Gypsy.
Comment from happykat4
Very good. Loved the artwork too. This poem is concise and certainly provides an impact on the reader. I think you have a good chance in winning the contest. Good luck.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2015
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Very good. Loved the artwork too. This poem is concise and certainly provides an impact on the reader. I think you have a good chance in winning the contest. Good luck.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2015
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Thank you.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements nicely being under the seven word limit. I thought your approach very inventive and you provide rhyme to boot - well done. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2015
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This meets the contest requirements nicely being under the seven word limit. I thought your approach very inventive and you provide rhyme to boot - well done. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2015
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Thank you, MA 777.
Comment from tfawcus
You have hit the nail on the head with this one! Computers are so damned logical! Unlike humans, who go into melt-down when their computer crashes. It seems that the viruses are contagious!
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2015
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You have hit the nail on the head with this one! Computers are so damned logical! Unlike humans, who go into melt-down when their computer crashes. It seems that the viruses are contagious!
Comment Written 30-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2015
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Thanks, Tony.
Comment from poetadeu
You did it...covered the bases for the contest,
and pulled off a great trick, gave me a
belly bursting laugh and used some mighty
fancy words, too. What a show-off.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2015
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You did it...covered the bases for the contest,
and pulled off a great trick, gave me a
belly bursting laugh and used some mighty
fancy words, too. What a show-off.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2015
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Thank you.
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You are most welcome.::}joyce
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello author
I must say your well statement about computer is true.
it's indeed a
Technological glitch,
Virological hitch;
Psychological switch!.
Gert
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2015
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Hello author
I must say your well statement about computer is true.
it's indeed a
Technological glitch,
Virological hitch;
Psychological switch!.
Gert
Comment Written 30-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2015
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Thank you, Gert.
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Smiles I h0pe you will enjoy my
Stubborn Computer humor poem .
I got a kick out of your 3 line poem.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is an interesting write , mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing this six word poem that rhymes throughout. I enjoyed reading it. good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2015
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this is an interesting write , mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing this six word poem that rhymes throughout. I enjoyed reading it. good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2015
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Thank you, Sweetwoodjax.
Comment from Eric1
Hi Mystery author, this is a really wonderful entry for this particular competition, a real tongue twister of a poem! I wish you good luck in the contest my friend,
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2015
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Hi Mystery author, this is a really wonderful entry for this particular competition, a real tongue twister of a poem! I wish you good luck in the contest my friend,
Comment Written 30-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2015
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Thank you, Eric.
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My pleasure dear friend
