The inner value of a woman.
A short poem, no specific form.25 total reviews
Comment from Glasstruth
Don't know what brought this on? The ending really makes a definite statement. I can see saying that to a woman, would be quite an insult. The title really says what this poem's all about. Well done! Les
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2015
Don't know what brought this on? The ending really makes a definite statement. I can see saying that to a woman, would be quite an insult. The title really says what this poem's all about. Well done! Les
Comment Written 02-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed Sunday.
Comment from Walu Feral
G'day Ine. Great work once again mate with a very trippy picture to match. You are right what you say, there are two ways we can go as we age, smile or not smile, I like to smile and you do also my friend. Well done, cheers Fez
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2015
G'day Ine. Great work once again mate with a very trippy picture to match. You are right what you say, there are two ways we can go as we age, smile or not smile, I like to smile and you do also my friend. Well done, cheers Fez
Comment Written 02-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed Sunday.
Comment from Ronni
Interesting concept and presentation. We all have different aging personalities,
and thank goodness we do! Attitude and personality has a lot to do with how
we age. Crankiness or grumpiness is an acquired habit or attitude.
Thanks for sharing...blessings, Ronni
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2015
Interesting concept and presentation. We all have different aging personalities,
and thank goodness we do! Attitude and personality has a lot to do with how
we age. Crankiness or grumpiness is an acquired habit or attitude.
Thanks for sharing...blessings, Ronni
Comment Written 01-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great and blessed Sunday.
Comment from Treischel
Really? I didn't realize that before. What an intriguing thought expressed here in this free verse poem. I once was told that you can tell if a man is a good husband, by seeing how his wife ages.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2015
Really? I didn't realize that before. What an intriguing thought expressed here in this free verse poem. I once was told that you can tell if a man is a good husband, by seeing how his wife ages.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely and blessed Sunday. Nice comment.
Comment from Judgement Dave
An interesting poem, which can apply to men as well. Although both can change their disposition/character due to external circumstances. Some well-natured people can turn dark and bitter after tragedy befalls them.
Cheers
JD
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2015
An interesting poem, which can apply to men as well. Although both can change their disposition/character due to external circumstances. Some well-natured people can turn dark and bitter after tragedy befalls them.
Cheers
JD
Comment Written 01-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely and blessed Sunday.
Comment from artemis53
Quite a statement, Robina. I don't think that we refer to men that way but it seems that women are easy targets. Perhaps it's because she's been married to" a cheap bottle of wine."
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2015
Quite a statement, Robina. I don't think that we refer to men that way but it seems that women are easy targets. Perhaps it's because she's been married to" a cheap bottle of wine."
Comment Written 01-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely and blessed Sunday. LOL
Comment from Sarah Butterfly
Creative comparison of an aging woman to the taste of a bottle of wine. Suitable artwork joined also. Nicely done.
Kind regards
Sarah
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2015
Creative comparison of an aging woman to the taste of a bottle of wine. Suitable artwork joined also. Nicely done.
Kind regards
Sarah
Comment Written 01-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely and blessed Sunday.
Comment from Jackarrie
Hi Ine
Wether young or old we must try avoid bitterness it will show on our faces. Nobody likes A grumpy o'l woman or Man.
Well done
Mary
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2015
Hi Ine
Wether young or old we must try avoid bitterness it will show on our faces. Nobody likes A grumpy o'l woman or Man.
Well done
Mary
Comment Written 01-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely and blessed Sunday.
Comment from l.raven
HI Ine, LOL...not sure if I agree sweet girl...LOL...I get pretty bitter about these wrinkles...but I'm a pretty classy chick...LOL...I love your poem sweet girl... well written...Luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2015
HI Ine, LOL...not sure if I agree sweet girl...LOL...I get pretty bitter about these wrinkles...but I'm a pretty classy chick...LOL...I love your poem sweet girl... well written...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 31-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely and blessed Sunday.
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you are so welcome sweet girl...and you have a wonderful day...xxoo luff
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello Robina,
I like your short poem~The inner value of a woman~ judging by your poem, women have to be cheerful old women to have any value.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2015
Hello Robina,
I like your short poem~The inner value of a woman~ judging by your poem, women have to be cheerful old women to have any value.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely and blessed Sunday.