Finding Daisy
Viewing comments for Chapter 51 "The Stars"Another Ess and Oz comic fantasy
2 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was excellent. The dream sequence was well done. It felt real and I like that. But the imagination that went into this chapter was fantastic. Great use of dialogue.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2015
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I thought this was excellent. The dream sequence was well done. It felt real and I like that. But the imagination that went into this chapter was fantastic. Great use of dialogue.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2015
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You're very kind, thank you
Comment from Adri7enne
You're so good, snod. You lead from one scene to the next and it all fits together and all makes sense. Your characters all play their assigned roles to perfection. I have come to expect it from you. Loved the way you have Ess trying to justify herself to the fairy king then slide to Oz trying to wake her. It all fits so well.
So Ess is safely back in Shades' arms. Hopefully, he'll wake up eventually. LOL! Just like a man!
Most enjoyable, snod. Now don't go missing for weeks. Keep writing. I'd give you another 6, but I've exhausted my week's supply.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2015
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You're so good, snod. You lead from one scene to the next and it all fits together and all makes sense. Your characters all play their assigned roles to perfection. I have come to expect it from you. Loved the way you have Ess trying to justify herself to the fairy king then slide to Oz trying to wake her. It all fits so well.
So Ess is safely back in Shades' arms. Hopefully, he'll wake up eventually. LOL! Just like a man!
Most enjoyable, snod. Now don't go missing for weeks. Keep writing. I'd give you another 6, but I've exhausted my week's supply.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2015
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I'm embarrassed by your praise, thanks.
