Comment from st francis

Excellent

Hi Roy,
I love the pic with your poem, really drew me in and upon your reading your poem several times, I loved it's rhythm and meaning, spot on. The footnotes were very helpful to draw out your concept. Well done, blessings, Miriam

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2015

Thanks Miriam, for the wonderful review, comments and excellent rating, blessings, Roy.

Comment from visionary1234

Excellent

Perfect rhythm, as always, Roy and yes, we should sing the praises of what it takes to have 'freedom' more often. Bravo, my friend!
:)Sharyn

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2015

Thanks Sharyn, for the wonderful review, comments and excellent rating, blessings, Roy.

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Lovely poem in excellent meter and rhyme, roy. You have exemplified your faith well.

Just one little nit in the author notes: Chris Christofferson (Kris Kristofferson) called "Me and Bobby Mcgee".

Nice work, my friend.

Gloria

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2015

Thanks Gloria, for the wonderful review, comments and excellent rating, blessings, Roy.

Comment from Bryana

Excellent

Hi Roy,
You've written such a beautiful poem,
I certainly agree with what you write. I find it
very profound, it makes you think what freedom
means.
It was a pleasure reading your poem.

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2015

Thanks Bryana, for the wonderful review, comments and excellent rating, blessings, Roy.

Comment from 4hisglory

Excellent

Yes, freedom does come with a price whether you talking about Jesus or the soldiers who fight for our nation. Now we also have to fight for our freedom to worship the Lord and freedom to not participate in our nations sinful decisions.

Nicely written poem. I like the lines "springtime hides it's face, it laughs and doesn't care" I do remember that song by Chris Christofferson and never really liked it. Chris wrote a lot of other good songs though.

Keep writing for Jesus. God bless, LaVonne

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2015

Thanks LaVonne, for the wonderful review, comments and excellent rating, blessings, Roy.

Comment from Ben Colder

Exceptional

Right on poet. Must agree whole- heartedly with your wording concerning the price Freedom's cost.We Americans show the symbolic understanding in our flag of red, white and blue or at least it once did. Well done BRO.

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2015

Thanks once again Ben for your unerring support great review and understanding of the yolk Jesus freed us from, Gallations, 5:1. Blessings, My bro,

Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr

Excellent

Hello Brother Roy. This was such an amazing poem. The artwork was spell binding and the message exceedingly powerful, as were the footnotes. Great Poem! Loyd

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2015

Thanks Loyd, for the wonderful review, comments and excellent rating, blessings, Roy.

reply by Loyd C. Taylor, Sr on 31-Jul-2015

My pleasure, Loyd

Comment from angel123

Exceptional

Your spiritual poem is well written and your message powerful. It rhymes well and it is very descriptive, along with your author's notes that is very informative. It flows with eyes wide open and your artwork choice is well chosen.

Angel123

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2015

Thanks Angel for this wonderful support you have given and give my work, you are a great source of encouragement, the sort that gets one up in the morning, a sincere thank you, blessings, Roy.

reply by angel123 on 30-Jul-2015

Thank you

Comment from JanetRussek

Exceptional

This is so beautifully written. The message is powerful and yet you've found a way to express it in a sensitive and gentle way. I love this piece.
Warm Regards,
Janet

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2015

Thanks Janet, for this most encouraging review, comments uplifting and exceptional rating, blessings, Roy.

reply by JanetRussek on 29-Jul-2015

You are certainly welcome, friend.

Comment from Leineco

Excellent

Great composition on the true source of freedom. It cannot be bought, but must be earned to be lasting.

Nicely done abab poem Roy, with a wonderful meter flow :-)

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2015

Thanks, for the wonderful review, comments and excellent rating, blessings, Roy.