Comment from ellie6

Exceptional

A beautiful bit of verse, it speaks of an all consuming love . The language is so poetic, truly a classic. Whoever is the object of this poem must be very happy.

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2015

Thank you, Ellie.

Nothing like a bit of romantic mumbo-jumbo to keep the other half happy!

Steve

Comment from humpwhistle

Exceptional

Once again, Steve, your work shines as much for sparkling language as for your skill (and occasional restraint)
with poetic devices.
The nature analogies work and give you plenty of opportunity to use your vocabulary.
This could be a love poem to mother earth.

Best of luck.

Peace, Lee

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2015

Thanks, Lee!

One of my worries here was not to overdo the lush, romantic language, so I'm glad you felt there was some 'restraint.'

Steve

reply by humpwhistle on 28-Jul-2015

I sense that your vocabulary offers great temptation. But I feel you holding the reins. It would be all too easy for me to be an alliterative fool if I tried to write this kind of thing. You know when to say, 'Whoa!'.

Comment from Lesley Collier

Exceptional

A beautiful love poem pertaining to all the ways and places the love is expressed ending in a true expression of pure and untainted love forever. Wonderfully written with very scenic words and an honesty that touches the heart!

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2015

Lesley, thanks for the great review and the six stars!

Steve