A Father's Pride
senryu (A Father's Pride)15 total reviews
Comment from Spitfire
Oh yes, that's definitely a benefit of pregnancy and after.
For the first time, I had a size the perked up my sweaters (pun intended) Good one, Greg? I'm guessing.
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Oh yes, that's definitely a benefit of pregnancy and after.
For the first time, I had a size the perked up my sweaters (pun intended) Good one, Greg? I'm guessing.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2015
Comment from Chunger
This is the second poem tonight that has made me laugh out loud. Having just had a baby I am fully aware of all the "joys" my husband gets out of it. Great job! and Good luck in the contest!
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This is the second poem tonight that has made me laugh out loud. Having just had a baby I am fully aware of all the "joys" my husband gets out of it. Great job! and Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 27-Jul-2015
Comment from royowen
I love this entry in this senryu comest entry. Of the beauty of honesty it can produce some really good contest entry, and this is no exception, great opposite artwork that highlights the entry, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy.
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I love this entry in this senryu comest entry. Of the beauty of honesty it can produce some really good contest entry, and this is no exception, great opposite artwork that highlights the entry, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2015
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements nicely as you have delivered three lines in under seventeen syllables. Strange rules, but nonetheless on we go. You do a wonderful job of turning labor pains into a complete positive as daddy gets a wonderful child and cushier love pillows to boot. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
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This meets the contest requirements nicely as you have delivered three lines in under seventeen syllables. Strange rules, but nonetheless on we go. You do a wonderful job of turning labor pains into a complete positive as daddy gets a wonderful child and cushier love pillows to boot. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2015
Comment from Dean Kuch
Heh-heh. Have you ever seen the Jim Carrey film, "Me, Myself & Irene" Mikey? Remember the breast feeding scene--the one just before "Hank" takes over Charlies persona again?
"Guys, c'mon. She's a mom!" Charlie says, scolding the ogling codgers as they watch the beautiful bomb-shell mom breast feeding her baby across the street..
Uproarious laughter erupts from the four or five perverts in the barber shop...
"Ha-ha, she's a mom! Oh-ho, that's good, Charlie...that's rich! Yeah, a yummy mommy, ah-h-h-a-ha-h-a-ha-a-a-aaaa!!!
Good 3-5-3
Good luck in the contest, buddy. ;)
~Deano
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Heh-heh. Have you ever seen the Jim Carrey film, "Me, Myself & Irene" Mikey? Remember the breast feeding scene--the one just before "Hank" takes over Charlies persona again?
"Guys, c'mon. She's a mom!" Charlie says, scolding the ogling codgers as they watch the beautiful bomb-shell mom breast feeding her baby across the street..
Uproarious laughter erupts from the four or five perverts in the barber shop...
"Ha-ha, she's a mom! Oh-ho, that's good, Charlie...that's rich! Yeah, a yummy mommy, ah-h-h-a-ha-h-a-ha-a-a-aaaa!!!
Good 3-5-3
Good luck in the contest, buddy. ;)
~Deano
Comment Written 27-Jul-2015
Comment from angel123
I enjoyed reading your poem. It is cleverly written and it flows well with wit. Good alliteration of words bigger boobs.
Angel123
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I enjoyed reading your poem. It is cleverly written and it flows well with wit. Good alliteration of words bigger boobs.
Angel123
Comment Written 27-Jul-2015
Comment from Sasha
This began with such a touching sentiment then wham you caught me off guard with the last line. But you got me to laugh. Okay, I hate to admit it in public, butthis is really very funny. Good to have you back, even if just for a quick stop.
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This began with such a touching sentiment then wham you caught me off guard with the last line. But you got me to laugh. Okay, I hate to admit it in public, butthis is really very funny. Good to have you back, even if just for a quick stop.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2015
Comment from TPAC
A thought capturing a new arrival to a couple lives, the pleasures obtained outside the newly birth arrival. I found the statement cute
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A thought capturing a new arrival to a couple lives, the pleasures obtained outside the newly birth arrival. I found the statement cute
Comment Written 27-Jul-2015
Comment from nordicgirl
Hahaha!!!
The epitome of senryu. What a perfect set up leading us down such a touching path of motherhood only to have Dad mutter under his breat about the larger boobs. One of those things that every guy thinks, but MOST of us have the sense to keep to ourselves. This has my vote.
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Hahaha!!!
The epitome of senryu. What a perfect set up leading us down such a touching path of motherhood only to have Dad mutter under his breat about the larger boobs. One of those things that every guy thinks, but MOST of us have the sense to keep to ourselves. This has my vote.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2015
Comment from Jackarrie
What!! a mother's crown jewel is bigger boobs? I am not sure she would agree.
It is well presented and has humor.
good luck in the contest
Mary
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What!! a mother's crown jewel is bigger boobs? I am not sure she would agree.
It is well presented and has humor.
good luck in the contest
Mary
Comment Written 27-Jul-2015
