Texas Dream Catcher
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Comment from Curly Girly
Kuruk is seriously ill with a suspected heart problem; but he does not like or trust white men's medicine. It looks like the ball is out of the court for him and his daughter will get to decide on his treatment. I am surprised that Jim was arrested for assault. I wonder if it is another trumped up / exaggerated charge made by corrupt law enforcement.
This was well written, no spags spotted.
Nicole
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2015
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Kuruk is seriously ill with a suspected heart problem; but he does not like or trust white men's medicine. It looks like the ball is out of the court for him and his daughter will get to decide on his treatment. I am surprised that Jim was arrested for assault. I wonder if it is another trumped up / exaggerated charge made by corrupt law enforcement.
This was well written, no spags spotted.
Nicole
Comment Written 27-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2015
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I seriously doubt anything will happen to Jim, but we will have to see. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from boxergirl
I hope Soni's grandfather will be ok. Littleton continues to be an arse and now someone is trying to steal Midnight again. Can't wait to see who is behind all of this.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2015
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I hope Soni's grandfather will be ok. Littleton continues to be an arse and now someone is trying to steal Midnight again. Can't wait to see who is behind all of this.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2015
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Thank you for the kind review. I can't wait to see who's behind all of this myself.
Comment from arnie47
Lots of action in this one and a great tease for the next chapter. The writing is smooth and concise with little fat to be trimmed. Still loving those dogs. Looking forward to wrapping everything up in your usual neat little package.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2015
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Lots of action in this one and a great tease for the next chapter. The writing is smooth and concise with little fat to be trimmed. Still loving those dogs. Looking forward to wrapping everything up in your usual neat little package.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2015
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Thank you for leaving this kind and encouraging review.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hi Barb
You definitely know how to keep action going in you novel.
It seems things keep piling up an nothing is getting solved
Now who is getting arrested for--
for assaulting a government agent.
Gert
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2015
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Hi Barb
You definitely know how to keep action going in you novel.
It seems things keep piling up an nothing is getting solved
Now who is getting arrested for--
for assaulting a government agent.
Gert
Comment Written 27-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2015
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Thank you for leaving this kind and encouraging review.
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Smiles
Gert
Comment from elgone
Littleton is a real prick. Jim should deck the guy, but he has the restraint not to. It would only make matters worse. But it's time he calls on his connections to end this charade.
E
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2015
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Littleton is a real prick. Jim should deck the guy, but he has the restraint not to. It would only make matters worse. But it's time he calls on his connections to end this charade.
E
Comment Written 27-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2015
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He does make a some phone calls in my next post. Thank you for the kind review. I always enjoy hearing from you.
Comment from barkingdog
Grr. Let me at him. I'll slug Littleton, myself.
The plot is moving along very well with two scenarios playing simultaneously.
I only saw one thing to check: I the first two paragraphs you use the phrase 'the door' three times. You may want to say 'exit', or something else to break up the repetition.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2015
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Grr. Let me at him. I'll slug Littleton, myself.
The plot is moving along very well with two scenarios playing simultaneously.
I only saw one thing to check: I the first two paragraphs you use the phrase 'the door' three times. You may want to say 'exit', or something else to break up the repetition.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2015
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Thank you. I will make that change. I appreciate the help.
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You're welcome, my friend.
Do you have any idea why Tom won't give us more sixes? There are so many excellent writers on site. It hardly seems fair when I run out.
Comment from pbroussard209
Another great chapter, I love that things keep getting more and more complicated as the story progresses. You are doing a great job in keeping the reader interested and wanting more.
Trish
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2015
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Another great chapter, I love that things keep getting more and more complicated as the story progresses. You are doing a great job in keeping the reader interested and wanting more.
Trish
Comment Written 27-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2015
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Thank you for the encouraging review.
Comment from Ben Colder
uck O! Jim done , done it again. Stopped by for a moment and saw you had posted. Thought to review. Another good chapter as always. Grandfather will be mad when he realizes the score. Keep your powder dry.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2015
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uck O! Jim done , done it again. Stopped by for a moment and saw you had posted. Thought to review. Another good chapter as always. Grandfather will be mad when he realizes the score. Keep your powder dry.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2015
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Thank you for the kind review. Do you think Jim will every get it right? I doubt it. LOL
Comment from Lesley Collier
The continuing story of the rescue of Soni from injuries sustained from an ambush and her stay in hospital with her boyfriend, Jim, and grandfather, Kuruk, by her side. When a rukus is heard at the stable Jim and the security men check out the situation and drive a cylprit away who was in the process of stealing Soni's horse and they decide to take him to a ranch for peotectiob. When Kuruk collapses with what they assume to be heart problems, Soni pulls out her tubes and rushes to his side while Jim stands by protectively. Soni asks Jim to accompany her grandfather as he is Sioux and not used to white medicine. Littleton, who wants to arrest Kuruk for assault stops Jim from following the gurney with Kuruk and threatens to arrest him for assault of a government agent. Well written and full of action!
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2015
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The continuing story of the rescue of Soni from injuries sustained from an ambush and her stay in hospital with her boyfriend, Jim, and grandfather, Kuruk, by her side. When a rukus is heard at the stable Jim and the security men check out the situation and drive a cylprit away who was in the process of stealing Soni's horse and they decide to take him to a ranch for peotectiob. When Kuruk collapses with what they assume to be heart problems, Soni pulls out her tubes and rushes to his side while Jim stands by protectively. Soni asks Jim to accompany her grandfather as he is Sioux and not used to white medicine. Littleton, who wants to arrest Kuruk for assault stops Jim from following the gurney with Kuruk and threatens to arrest him for assault of a government agent. Well written and full of action!
Comment Written 27-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2015
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Kuruk is a Lipan Apache. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Chris Tee
This is an excellent part chapter which you have written here Barbara. it cant be improved by anybody and is really great to read well done indeed.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2015
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This is an excellent part chapter which you have written here Barbara. it cant be improved by anybody and is really great to read well done indeed.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2015
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Thank you for the kind and encouraging words.
