A Book of Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 35 "The Language of Love"Assorted poems of love
21 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I like your poem very well. The artwork is perfect. Your words express the feelings of dance well. I like how you interwove the dance words with the words of poetry. Good job on the rhyme. There is great flow from beginning to end.
No changes needed.
Well done.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2015
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I like your poem very well. The artwork is perfect. Your words express the feelings of dance well. I like how you interwove the dance words with the words of poetry. Good job on the rhyme. There is great flow from beginning to end.
No changes needed.
Well done.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2015
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Smiling from ear to ear JP. thanks for this review it is so appreciated from an author such as yourself.
Always,
Missy
Comment from scongrove
Truly loved this Missy! :) I can see how this picture moved you to write something so creative. It definitely caught my eye before I began to read. Your talent inspires me. I don't know how you do it, but you have a way with words. Thank you for sharing.
Shana :)
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2015
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Truly loved this Missy! :) I can see how this picture moved you to write something so creative. It definitely caught my eye before I began to read. Your talent inspires me. I don't know how you do it, but you have a way with words. Thank you for sharing.
Shana :)
Comment Written 27-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2015
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Shana, this review is inspiring to me! I can't thank you enough. Reviews such as this, from writers like you, are what keeps us all moving forward.
Always,
Missy
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You're welcome! And thank you. You deserve it. :)
Comment from Ulla
Missy, This is a beautiful poem you have written and very cleverly done. I think it is one of your poems I like the best. The way you use the different kind of poetry to a dance is original. One minor thing Olay as you write is actually written Ole with an accent over the letter e.
I loved this, very well done. All the best Ulla
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2015
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Missy, This is a beautiful poem you have written and very cleverly done. I think it is one of your poems I like the best. The way you use the different kind of poetry to a dance is original. One minor thing Olay as you write is actually written Ole with an accent over the letter e.
I loved this, very well done. All the best Ulla
Comment Written 27-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2015
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Ulla, that one line has been a thorn in my side... I stated with droplet... Was told triloet was pronounced different than I did... Grrr... I will change this hon.... Ty again :)
Always,
Missy
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Missy, triolet and ole rimes perfectly. Ulla xx
Comment from CR Delport
A clever interpretation of the picture. You are right. Love has its own language and can speak to us in ways nothing else can. Well done.
Take care.
Christelle.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2015
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A clever interpretation of the picture. You are right. Love has its own language and can speak to us in ways nothing else can. Well done.
Take care.
Christelle.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2015
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Christelle, thank you for the review my friend. Always a pleasure.
Missy
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Missy,
yes, what a creative and clever use of thoughts... all with a very flowing movement, as you step in and around-back and forth to the rhythm of a heart at, and in play.
Your first verse set up the creative beauty in between the rhyming couplets that allowed the rhythm to sway all the way to your last verse that sealed the deal in magic bliss... I enjoyed the images this poem evoked... yes, very creative and beautifully composed.
With our thoughts we create,
the rhythm of our heart,
James vx's.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2015
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Hi Missy,
yes, what a creative and clever use of thoughts... all with a very flowing movement, as you step in and around-back and forth to the rhythm of a heart at, and in play.
Your first verse set up the creative beauty in between the rhyming couplets that allowed the rhythm to sway all the way to your last verse that sealed the deal in magic bliss... I enjoyed the images this poem evoked... yes, very creative and beautifully composed.
With our thoughts we create,
the rhythm of our heart,
James vx's.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2015
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Ah!!! There you are! Thank you for this beautiful review of my humble effort. I look forward to reading and learning more about you through your work my new friend :)
Always,
Missy
Again thank you James
Comment from G.B. Smith
08:44 AM 7/26/2015 This is the first time I have seen this beautiful poem of love. I enjoyed it very much and thought the last 3 stanzas were delicious. Your artwork is superb as well
Bear
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2015
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08:44 AM 7/26/2015 This is the first time I have seen this beautiful poem of love. I enjoyed it very much and thought the last 3 stanzas were delicious. Your artwork is superb as well
Bear
Comment Written 26-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2015
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Thanks Bear. Thought you had wandered off in search of god knows what...lol :)
always,
Missy
Comment from jpduck
I think this is a charming and rather beautiful piece; and the picture matches it up perfectly. I particularly like the alliteration of 'Spin me with a Sonnet that sets my soul aflame'
Adrian
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2015
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I think this is a charming and rather beautiful piece; and the picture matches it up perfectly. I particularly like the alliteration of 'Spin me with a Sonnet that sets my soul aflame'
Adrian
Comment Written 26-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2015
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Thank you, Adrian. I am pleased you came by and left this...hope I didn't twist your arm to badly...lol
Missy
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I'm afraid my arm needs to be twisted when it comes to poetry as, so often, I don't understand it. But then, if I don't read it, how am I ever going to learn to understand it? Keep twisting.
Adrian
Comment from Ric Myworld
Poetry use to remind me of a trapped person locked within themselves, throwing hints to be rescued, desperate to write the right lines. Thanks to you and a very few I'm beginning to take the words for what they are, not some cryptic puzzle. Thanks for the pleasure of reading another of your fine poems. :-)
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2015
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Poetry use to remind me of a trapped person locked within themselves, throwing hints to be rescued, desperate to write the right lines. Thanks to you and a very few I'm beginning to take the words for what they are, not some cryptic puzzle. Thanks for the pleasure of reading another of your fine poems. :-)
Comment Written 26-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2015
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You are a treasure to be sure. I wait every time I post to see your review :). Thanks again Ric.
Always,
Missy
Comment from rama devi
This is certainly pleasing and very fun to read aloud--so musical and cadenced like a dance. It matches the artwork perfectly, making this is powerful ekphrastic poem
Love how you used poetic forms like pearls on a theme thread of love.
Favorite lines:
Swing me into your arms with an Acrostic that spells my name
Spin me with a Sonnet that sets my soul aflame
Fine alliteration and other devices woven in too!
Good rhymes. The only one I question, though is triolet and droplet. Triolet is pronounced with an AY sound at the end, and droplet with a LET.
Really enjoyed reading this aloud, and the visual presentation is artistic and appealing.
Well done!
Warmly, rd
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2015
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This is certainly pleasing and very fun to read aloud--so musical and cadenced like a dance. It matches the artwork perfectly, making this is powerful ekphrastic poem
Love how you used poetic forms like pearls on a theme thread of love.
Favorite lines:
Swing me into your arms with an Acrostic that spells my name
Spin me with a Sonnet that sets my soul aflame
Fine alliteration and other devices woven in too!
Good rhymes. The only one I question, though is triolet and droplet. Triolet is pronounced with an AY sound at the end, and droplet with a LET.
Really enjoyed reading this aloud, and the visual presentation is artistic and appealing.
Well done!
Warmly, rd
Comment Written 26-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2015
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RD, this is a fantastic review for me, thank you. I am working on the line in question. Thanks for pointing that out. :)
Always justafan,
Missy
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Thanks for your enthusiastic response, Missy...yay!!~ Warmly, rd
Comment from meggie13
There is not a more beautiful language that the language of LOVE. You have excelled yourself with this poem ,using different styles of poetry to dance to it. I like the lines with Rondel= rhumba beat and Triolet= Cha Cha. Good rhyme and flow of lines. Excellent presentation of your work.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2015
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There is not a more beautiful language that the language of LOVE. You have excelled yourself with this poem ,using different styles of poetry to dance to it. I like the lines with Rondel= rhumba beat and Triolet= Cha Cha. Good rhyme and flow of lines. Excellent presentation of your work.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2015
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Oh sweet Meggie, my mom in my heart, you are one in a million. Thank you for this review and for the 6er but mostly...for being in my corner :)
Always,
Missy
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Missy ,you are very welcome. You are very talented. How can you look at a picture and come up with a work of art. Amazing! M
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Missy ,you are very welcome. You are very talented. How can you look at a picture and come up with a work of art. Amazing! M
