When Blood Collides
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Comment from mermaids
At least you were able to spend some time with your mother. The scene is touching when the two of you were alone together in the hospital. Many can relate to your story. Looking forward to reading what the doctor has to say.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
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At least you were able to spend some time with your mother. The scene is touching when the two of you were alone together in the hospital. Many can relate to your story. Looking forward to reading what the doctor has to say.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
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Thanks, Elaine. It's nice to hear that it touched you.
Comment from meggie13
I am wondering what the doctor is going to tell your about your mother. It was always in my mind that you were her favorite daughter, that's where all the trouble came from. Crossing the Bar is very inspirational and almost brought me to tears. I will select this for funeral. Very touching. You are the best!
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
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I am wondering what the doctor is going to tell your about your mother. It was always in my mind that you were her favorite daughter, that's where all the trouble came from. Crossing the Bar is very inspirational and almost brought me to tears. I will select this for funeral. Very touching. You are the best!
Comment Written 19-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
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I found that song version of it so much better than the YOUTUBE readings. But wait until you hear the next recording on Chapter 43. I can't play it without crying. Mom's favorite song.
Thank you so much for the exceptional rating. It means a lot.
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You are welcome and deserving of exceptional rating. I am waiting to hear the next recording.
Comment from judiverse
Great description of your mother greeting Frank when he visits by telling him she's always liked him. She also confides that Dee's and Barb's behavior toward you might be jealousy. Quite an admission from your mother that you have always been her favorite. I think my parents tried not to play favorites. Not a good sign that your mother is talking about children outside the window, children that wouldn't let her play with them. You did a good job of handling her request to have a minister visit her. She is trying to make peace. Excellent telling of such a personal story. judi
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
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Great description of your mother greeting Frank when he visits by telling him she's always liked him. She also confides that Dee's and Barb's behavior toward you might be jealousy. Quite an admission from your mother that you have always been her favorite. I think my parents tried not to play favorites. Not a good sign that your mother is talking about children outside the window, children that wouldn't let her play with them. You did a good job of handling her request to have a minister visit her. She is trying to make peace. Excellent telling of such a personal story. judi
Comment Written 19-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
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Thanks, judi, for addressing all the issues that came up in this chapter. She kept her favoritism under wraps as far as her treatment of Anne and Barb. She loved them, but didn't always like them. They could both be condescending as was their natural behavior. Wish someone could enlighten me about the children? Maybe it was just the effect of too many pills. Thank you so much for the exceptional rating.
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You're welcome. I remember my mother had hallucinations when she was in the hospital. Probably from medication she was taking. Anyhow, she imagined she was falling. judi
Comment from boxergirl
This emotive scene with you crying in your mother's arms was so tender and brought a tear to my eye. It seems your mother does feel the end is coming. I am glad you will find out more from the doctor. His mood seems somber .
The accapella song was touching as well.
Karen
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
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This emotive scene with you crying in your mother's arms was so tender and brought a tear to my eye. It seems your mother does feel the end is coming. I am glad you will find out more from the doctor. His mood seems somber .
The accapella song was touching as well.
Karen
Comment Written 19-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
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Thanks for listening to the song version. I thought it much better than a reader presentation. Good to know my writing is strong enough to cause emotion in the reader.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Uh, oh. Sounds like the doctor isn't going to talk about taking Mom home. I think this might be the end coming. I hope I'm wrong, but...
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
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Uh, oh. Sounds like the doctor isn't going to talk about taking Mom home. I think this might be the end coming. I hope I'm wrong, but...
Comment Written 19-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
You may have to wait until next Sunday. I have some essays I want to work on. :-)
Comment from alexisleech
I don't like the sound of that. You're expecting to hear when you can take your mother home, but everything seems to be pointing to that not happening. It sounds as though she's found peace though, and knowing that you were your mother's favourite will hopefully give you some comfort if the news the doctor gives you is not what you want to hear.
Alexis xxx
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
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I don't like the sound of that. You're expecting to hear when you can take your mother home, but everything seems to be pointing to that not happening. It sounds as though she's found peace though, and knowing that you were your mother's favourite will hopefully give you some comfort if the news the doctor gives you is not what you want to hear.
Alexis xxx
Comment Written 19-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
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What the doctor told me came as a complete surprise!
Comment from Dean Kuch
I somehow have a feeling that the doctor did not take you out of the room to talk about when your mom could return home. Based upon her weakened state. I have a feeling it was something far more serious. I also believe I know how Frank came about owning the knight statue. If your mom didn't give it to him, I'm pretty sure Bobby did.
There's nothing more comforting in times of trouble than a mother's love. And although your mother was hurting herself, she didn't hesitate to take your personal emotional pain anguish into consideration as she tried her best to comfort you. That's the trademark of true, honest-to-goodness motherly love, and there's nothing in the world like it. Sacrificing their wants and needs for the needs of their children. That's what good parents do.
I myself love Tennyson's beautiful poem, "Crossing the Bar", Shari. And that video will be added to my YouTube playlist, so thanks for sharing it.
Another great chapter, my friend. Now, I must head on down the literary highway to review some more...
Great writing as always, Shari.
~Dean :}
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
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I somehow have a feeling that the doctor did not take you out of the room to talk about when your mom could return home. Based upon her weakened state. I have a feeling it was something far more serious. I also believe I know how Frank came about owning the knight statue. If your mom didn't give it to him, I'm pretty sure Bobby did.
There's nothing more comforting in times of trouble than a mother's love. And although your mother was hurting herself, she didn't hesitate to take your personal emotional pain anguish into consideration as she tried her best to comfort you. That's the trademark of true, honest-to-goodness motherly love, and there's nothing in the world like it. Sacrificing their wants and needs for the needs of their children. That's what good parents do.
I myself love Tennyson's beautiful poem, "Crossing the Bar", Shari. And that video will be added to my YouTube playlist, so thanks for sharing it.
Another great chapter, my friend. Now, I must head on down the literary highway to review some more...
Great writing as always, Shari.
~Dean :}
Comment Written 19-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
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Your guesses are good although the doctor didn't talk about Mom's health per se. Appreciate the comment on the crying scene. I suspect it meant a lot to Mother that I needed her more than she needed me right then. I too love what the choir did with the poem. The next chapter will include Mom's favorite song, a tear-jerker now every time I hear it. (found it on YouTube, but I also have it on a 33 RPM in mint condition that I saved all these years.
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I have a few old 45's and 33's in vinyl myself, Shari. My ex wife always said I'm a pack rat and won;t throw anything away. I realize I can get the same albums on CD, but it just isn't the same. Kind of like comparing a kindle book to an honest-to-goodness book bound in a cover with a spine.
Comment from Leen1
I am not afraid to admit that after reading this chapter I became a weeping mess. This is such a touching memoir. I am so grateful that you and your husband were able to spend some valuable time with your Mom. I don't have to guess what the next chapter will bring and I am so sadden with the knowledge of the inevitable, I wish to thank you for another wonderful read.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2015
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I am not afraid to admit that after reading this chapter I became a weeping mess. This is such a touching memoir. I am so grateful that you and your husband were able to spend some valuable time with your Mom. I don't have to guess what the next chapter will bring and I am so sadden with the knowledge of the inevitable, I wish to thank you for another wonderful read.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2015
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I feel so blessed when I can move a reader to tears. Thanks, Leen, for that comment and all the rest.
Comment from Sasha
This is a deeply moving chapter. It seems your mother is reaching a crossroad and may or may not be near death. I do hope all works out and the family can finally find some peace.
Pleas PM me your email address. Since I lose my Smurphgirl email I have also lost my contacts. My new email is SmurphgirlPetrova@hotmail.com
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2015
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This is a deeply moving chapter. It seems your mother is reaching a crossroad and may or may not be near death. I do hope all works out and the family can finally find some peace.
Pleas PM me your email address. Since I lose my Smurphgirl email I have also lost my contacts. My new email is SmurphgirlPetrova@hotmail.com
Comment Written 19-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2015
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New e-mail address noted. I'm glad you're seeing the crossroads in this.
Comment from kiwijenny
Shari,
This is precious. Oh i am so happy for you. You try not to have favorites as a Mum but some kids are more difficult to not to love exactly but they won't receive your love. It's harder. I think love negates love and some people don't get it
God bless
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
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Shari,
This is precious. Oh i am so happy for you. You try not to have favorites as a Mum but some kids are more difficult to not to love exactly but they won't receive your love. It's harder. I think love negates love and some people don't get it
God bless
Comment Written 19-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
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Thanks, kiwi. My favorite child shifted from Nichole to Chris when she moved so far away and took on different values. I still love them both, but I like my son better for now at least. Nichole is becoming sweet and thoughtful again as she gets older. In four years she'll turn fifty! Hard to believe. She chose not to have children. I think being a parent would have helped her understand me more. Thank you so much for the exceptional rating.
