Comment from pharp

Excellent

Christine, this was a very cute, funny and delightful read. Great story of all that had gone wrong and I really like how you did an excellent job in the rhyming and rhythm, the smooth flow made it a most enjoyable and funny read. Thanks for sharing. Blessings..................Portia

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2015

Thank you Portia for your great review for this episode yes all true and I am glad you had a laugh I like rhyming the best and sometimes the words just fall into place with appreciation for your support Cheers Christine😃

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Camp fire cooking gone very wrong-Jude's Lament.
It was a fun poem to read. It sounds like you all had a lot of fun. Good job!

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015

Thanks Gypsy Rose Blue yes it was a funny episode and still comes into conversations when reminiscing .I'm glad you had a read .Cheers Christine😀

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

This is a delightful piece! Anyone who has ever cooked over and open fire can certainly relate to the things that can and do go wrong. One of my memories is of doing spaghetti - it was all going well until we realized we had no way of picking up the pasta pot to drain it and so took turns scooping bits of spaghetti out with forks a little at a time - meanwhile everything else got a wee bit over done LOL. I thoroughly enjoyed this and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2015

Thank you a Mystic Angel for having a read and your comments and great rating. Yes disasters like this sometimes happen and makes for a great subject to write about lol glad you enjoyed this and appreciate your support Cheers Christine😃

Comment from Nosha17

Excellent

Cute story, I liked the humour and light-hearted feel. Good descriptions of all the mishaps of this ill-fated campfire meal amongst friends, good use of rhyming. A few things: Verse 2, the sun's gone down. Verse 4, My cooking's........ God's sake. Verse 5, bread's gone. Last verse, night's.....
Enjoyable read.
Faye

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2015

Thanks you Nosha17 for your great review and helpful suggestions, sorry about the punctuation I will correct these thanks again Cheers Christine

Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT

Excellent

Did I enjoy this? Your damn well right I did...It was truthful and funny and yea it's happened to me as well..Oh how easy it is to laugh now at past maladies but at the time Grrrr Shut the hell up and eat whats there
TK

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2015

Ha ha Thanks TK for your funny review and glad you liked this. Yes I'm sure Jude's lament could be lots of people's lament, we didn't starve. Toast was good lol Cheers Christine

reply by the author on 18-Jul-2015

Ha ha Thanks TK for your funny review and glad you liked this. Yes I'm sure Jude's lament could be lots of people's lament, we didn't starve. Toast was good lol Cheers Christine

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Christine...

_ This is too funny.
_ That it's true is even better.
_ Well, if you had S'mores, you were probably back in everyone's good graces very soon.
_ Love the sense of humor throughout this too.
_ I wish I had a sixer left to give. Great job!

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2015

Thanks Jax for having a read and yes it is all true but isn't that the way truth is often more funny than fiction. As always enjoy you lovely comments and support Cheers Christine😀

Comment from hannahorion

Excellent

This poem is about preparing dinner while camping and everything that can go wrong does go wrong. It is written in just seven quatrains with an AABB (doubled couplet) rhyme scheme and iambic meter. This makes it plain to read and recite. The stanzas are descriptive with a good economy of words allowing the story to be interpreted without any restrictions. The language is colloquial and flows off the tongue with ease. The feeling or mood of the poem is friendly panic. I found this poem a delight to read and think about and could identify with it as I have had similar experiences.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2015

Thanks Hannah for your very detailed review I had no idea that I had written this meeting all these poetry requirements but thanks for interpreting my poem in such a great constructive way it is much appreciated. Basically I write usually with a rhyming style hopefully flowing so it it easy to read. And yes we had a good laugh about the events related to this poem. Glad you liked it Cheers Christine

reply by hannahorion on 18-Jul-2015

My pleasure. I could relate to your poem.

Comment from lalajovanoski

Exceptional

I found this piece to be exceptional and well worthy of a six star rating. You have a way with words that execute a deeply profound message. Nicely composed piece and I want to thank you so much for sharing this. Bless you. I truly admire your writing

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2015

Thank you Lala so much for my first review and a Six stat to boot, I am glad you liked it and I do enjoy writing from life experiences and this was a funny night. We still laugh about it. I am stoked you like my work. With great appreciation Cheers Christine😀😀

reply by the author on 17-Jul-2015

Thank you Lala so much for my first review and a Six stat to boot, I am glad you liked it and I do enjoy writing from life experiences and this was a funny night. We still laugh about it. I am stoked you like my work. With great appreciation Cheers Christine😀😀

reply by the author on 17-Jul-2015

Thank you Lala so much for my first review and a Six stat to boot, I am glad you liked it and I do enjoy writing from life experiences and this was a funny night. We still laugh about it. I am stoked you like my work. With great appreciation Cheers Christine😀😀

reply by the author on 17-Jul-2015

Thank you Lala so much for my first review and a Six stat to boot, I am glad you liked it and I do enjoy writing from life experiences and this was a funny night. We still laugh about it. I am stoked you like my work. With great appreciation Cheers Christine😀😀