A New Beginning
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Comment from G.B. Smith
Hello again Alexis
This chapter is so compelling. I fear for poor Igor and hope that he'll find a way out of the freezer.
I am looking forward to the next installments
Bear
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2015
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Hello again Alexis
This chapter is so compelling. I fear for poor Igor and hope that he'll find a way out of the freezer.
I am looking forward to the next installments
Bear
Comment Written 19-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2015
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He's too popular for me to kill off, Bear, so be assured I find a way! Next two chapters are now posted. I hope you enjoy them! Alexis xxx
Comment from Walu Feral
Hahahaha! G'day Alexis. That poor bloody bloke is always having some drama happen to him, that is so funny, but having said that I hope he gets out of there before morning, although somehow I doubt it LOL. Another great chapter mate and I'm glad to see Mark might finally get a bit. Cheers Fez
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
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Hahahaha! G'day Alexis. That poor bloody bloke is always having some drama happen to him, that is so funny, but having said that I hope he gets out of there before morning, although somehow I doubt it LOL. Another great chapter mate and I'm glad to see Mark might finally get a bit. Cheers Fez
Comment Written 17-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
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Yes, that's two happy guys in one night, although Igor's not feeling so happy now! I hope you enjoy the one I posted today. It took two days to write and nearly had my nails chewed to the wick in the process. Phew! Alexis xxx
Comment from cercie
I have to confess that although I write I have never been much of a reader. For one I get headaches and see double but I must say I look forward to reading your great stories. I had never heard of a chiller until today but I knew what it was immediately. I gasped for a second thinking of being locked in one.
Chris
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
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I have to confess that although I write I have never been much of a reader. For one I get headaches and see double but I must say I look forward to reading your great stories. I had never heard of a chiller until today but I knew what it was immediately. I gasped for a second thinking of being locked in one.
Chris
Comment Written 16-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
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How lovely to hear from you, Chris! Yes, the big hotels have walk-in chillers, and the old ones don't have an inside handle. Fortunately, it's not a freezer, or Igor would be in even bigger trouble! Part Three just posted. Alexis xxx
Comment from Cindy Warren
Oh, Igor's in a bit of trouble, Isn't he? I thought freezers like that were illegal. I sure hope someone rescues him before it's too late.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
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Oh, Igor's in a bit of trouble, Isn't he? I thought freezers like that were illegal. I sure hope someone rescues him before it's too late.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
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Fortunately, it's a chiller, not a freezer, so chances are he would survive and just suffer from hypothermia. If it was a freezer he would have no chance, and yes, I think they are illegal now. Part Three has just been posted, and I hope you enjoy it! Alexis xxx
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Oh, no! Poor Igor. He'll freeze! Hey, why did he find the door UN-locked? I thought Laura had made sure it was locked. ????
Just a tiny thing to fix:
outside her parent's house << Should PARENTS' with apost. after the S, since PARENTS is plural.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
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Oh, no! Poor Igor. He'll freeze! Hey, why did he find the door UN-locked? I thought Laura had made sure it was locked. ????
Just a tiny thing to fix:
outside her parent's house << Should PARENTS' with apost. after the S, since PARENTS is plural.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
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Well spotted, Phyllis. No the door is still locked and Igor is still trapped inside. Part three has just been posted. I hope you enjoy it! Alexis xxx
Comment from jpduck
Another really well structured chapter. You're a genius at finding wonderful tenterhooks at the end of each chapter to keep your readers impatient for more.
Typos/SPAGs:
'In contrast to the dated and utilitarian space she'*d* been forced to haunt'
'he thought he*'d* better check it out'
Adrian
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
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Another really well structured chapter. You're a genius at finding wonderful tenterhooks at the end of each chapter to keep your readers impatient for more.
Typos/SPAGs:
'In contrast to the dated and utilitarian space she'*d* been forced to haunt'
'he thought he*'d* better check it out'
Adrian
Comment Written 16-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
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Well caught, Adrian. I can always depend on you to catch the things nobody else does. Thank you! Alexis xxx
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There is, of course, the obious corollary -- that I miss all the things that others catch.
(!!)
Adrian
Comment from Annette Gulliver
Oh no! Poor Igor is trapped inside the chiller room, and after he has had such a wonderful night with Catarina. Please don't kill him off, Alexis, he's a nice man. Someone has to find him!!! This was a good twist to end your chapter.
Annette
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
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Oh no! Poor Igor is trapped inside the chiller room, and after he has had such a wonderful night with Catarina. Please don't kill him off, Alexis, he's a nice man. Someone has to find him!!! This was a good twist to end your chapter.
Annette
Comment Written 16-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
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Samantha will hear him, but what can she do. With no way of communicating, it doesn't look hopeful for poor Igor! Alexis xxx
Comment from MelB
Very good chapter. I was worried the first time the chiller was closed that Catarina might be in it, put their by Samantha. Now, poor Igor. I hope he will be found before it is too late.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2015
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Very good chapter. I was worried the first time the chiller was closed that Catarina might be in it, put their by Samantha. Now, poor Igor. I hope he will be found before it is too late.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2015
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Maybe, maybe not. It will all depend on whether Samantha is desperate to have a new playmate or not! Part two has been posted today, part three will be posted tomorrow. I hope you enjoy them! Alexis xxx
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I enjoy every chapter my friend:)
Comment from Spitfire
On no! I knew something would happen when she shut the freezer, but never guessed it would happen to Igor. You manage so far to save the main characters and even the ghost. I'll be anxious to see this problem solved! Of course, if he dies, he'll meet Samantha. :-)
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2015
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On no! I knew something would happen when she shut the freezer, but never guessed it would happen to Igor. You manage so far to save the main characters and even the ghost. I'll be anxious to see this problem solved! Of course, if he dies, he'll meet Samantha. :-)
Comment Written 15-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2015
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And then she might have someone to play with, so to speak! But Igor will probably go to heaven immediately, so that might not be a plan. Part three will be posted tomorrow! Alexis xxx
Comment from Curly Girly
Wow! Hurry and write the next chapter. I hope Igor is not frozen to death by then. Is it the ghost who is playing all these tricks with doors? All chillers should have an emergency lever on the inside. Mmm ... we'll see what happens next.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2015
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Wow! Hurry and write the next chapter. I hope Igor is not frozen to death by then. Is it the ghost who is playing all these tricks with doors? All chillers should have an emergency lever on the inside. Mmm ... we'll see what happens next.
Comment Written 15-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2015
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I've just posted part two, and I'll be posting part three tomorrow. I hope you enjoy them both, Nicole. Many thanks for the super six - as we both know, they always bring a smile. Alexis xxx
