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Comment from sweetwoodjax
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this is an excellent write, mystery writr, you did an excellent job writing this 2 4 2 poem about writer's block, I wish you the best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2015


reply by the author on 14-Jul-2015
    Thank you, Sweetwoodjax.
Comment from Benny Beeharry
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You are right ,not right.power failure is always a nuisance. No body likes it . We are speechless waiting for it to come back.
I have had a horrible experience of it.
Benny Beeharry

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2015


reply by the author on 14-Jul-2015
    Thanks for reading and reviewing this verse.
Comment from Priyanka Deshpande
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I completely understand the unjust of power failure. Thats the only time when you think for yourself hence your are speechless. So many thoughts run in your mind and you can't write them because there is no light.

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2015


reply by the author on 14-Jul-2015
    Thanks for reading and reviewing this verse.
Comment from Eric1
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Hi Mystery author, this is a truly wonderful entry for this particular competition,I had to smile when I read your words, I could feel the frustration! I wish you the best of luck in the contest my friend.

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2015


reply by the author on 14-Jul-2015
    Thanks for reading and reviewing this verse.
reply by Eric1 on 15-Jul-2015
    You are very welcome my friend.
Comment from mermaids
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Vivid descriptive words that well describe writer's block. Speechless is a word that describes the writer with no voice on paper or computer. I can relate to your words. Excellent poetic form.

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2015


reply by the author on 14-Jul-2015
    Thanks for reading and reviewing this verse.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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I laughed out loud at this one. Very funny. You do a great job with such a restrictive poem type. Very creative and funny. Great job.

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2015


reply by the author on 14-Jul-2015
    Thanks for reading and reviewing this verse.
Comment from angel123
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Your poem is interesting and I enjoyed reading it, but I don't really understand it. Your artwork choice goes well with your poem.

Angel123

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2015


reply by the author on 14-Jul-2015
    Thanks for reading and reviewing this verse.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Nice job on the syllable count, I enjoyed reading, Void. The picture is beautiful and it goes very well with your poem about thunder.

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2015


reply by the author on 14-Jul-2015
    Thanks for reading and reviewing this verse.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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This meets the contest requirements perfectly with a spot on line and syllable count. Two important words - battery backup LOL. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2015


reply by the author on 14-Jul-2015
    Thanks for reading and reviewing this verse.