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Comment from Jumbo J
Hey Michael,
yeah, same as usual, always behind the eight-ball and playing the catch up game, so sorry if I come to your party when it's nearly over.
This poem is really beautiful my Brother... the first verse starts off a very sweet magic lingering haunt... and all with your trade mark of the mastery of word combination that leaves images of floating on a cloud in ones mind, just admiring... and yes, even the way you tickled your first verse to be your last... yeah, a truly magic ride into your majestic mind and thoughts... and as always, picture perfect reflections.
With our thoughts we create,
the freedom of flight,
James vx's.
******Stars!!!!!!
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2015
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Hey Michael,
yeah, same as usual, always behind the eight-ball and playing the catch up game, so sorry if I come to your party when it's nearly over.
This poem is really beautiful my Brother... the first verse starts off a very sweet magic lingering haunt... and all with your trade mark of the mastery of word combination that leaves images of floating on a cloud in ones mind, just admiring... and yes, even the way you tickled your first verse to be your last... yeah, a truly magic ride into your majestic mind and thoughts... and as always, picture perfect reflections.
With our thoughts we create,
the freedom of flight,
James vx's.
******Stars!!!!!!
Comment Written 15-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2015
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Hey James...-smile-....thanks my friend, always a pleasure. I wrote ikt for a friend....love Michael
Comment from justjo66
Beautiful poem and song to go with it. Especially beautiful if both played and
read at the same time. You write soulful poetry.
Jo
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2015
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Beautiful poem and song to go with it. Especially beautiful if both played and
read at the same time. You write soulful poetry.
Jo
Comment Written 15-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2015
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Hi Jo...-smile- yes always push the play button first...-wink- thank you sweetheart....love michael
Comment from amanda98653
This poem is the epitome of beauty, Michael!
"when she dreams...
ivory tickled keys serenity's prayer
melodies unlocked dance mid-air"--wow!
I love how the ending echoes the beginning of this lyrical, ethereal write. The resonance of melodic voices surrounds us, reflecting the gracefulness of nature's purest sounds.
Hugs
Amanda
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2015
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This poem is the epitome of beauty, Michael!
"when she dreams...
ivory tickled keys serenity's prayer
melodies unlocked dance mid-air"--wow!
I love how the ending echoes the beginning of this lyrical, ethereal write. The resonance of melodic voices surrounds us, reflecting the gracefulness of nature's purest sounds.
Hugs
Amanda
Comment Written 14-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2015
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Well you would know...the epitome is when Mona Lisa smiles...Hello Princess...-smile- Amen to all that good stuff...bear squeeze back at ya kid....love Michael
Comment from amada
Such a delightful write to your muse, Michael. It's soft and tender and all the nice things, These three lines brings tears to my eyes: "fairytale beautiful sets Cinderella free /glass slipper rescued instantaneous/magic...with the toss of her hair."
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2015
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Such a delightful write to your muse, Michael. It's soft and tender and all the nice things, These three lines brings tears to my eyes: "fairytale beautiful sets Cinderella free /glass slipper rescued instantaneous/magic...with the toss of her hair."
Comment Written 14-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2015
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ah the honest to God artist...has an "inner muse"...as you know...-wink- Hello Charming...-smile- good to see you. no tears for you please...only hugs and light kisses....love Michael
Comment from w.j.debi
This is beautifully romantic. I love the accidental rhymes throughtnout and the meter adds to the enchantment. The imagery you create is magical. You do an excellent job of bringing the verse full circle by repeating the first stanza and dropping the first line to be the closing. It certainly has a fairy tale quality to it. Fairy dust is certain to sparkle at any moment.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2015
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This is beautifully romantic. I love the accidental rhymes throughtnout and the meter adds to the enchantment. The imagery you create is magical. You do an excellent job of bringing the verse full circle by repeating the first stanza and dropping the first line to be the closing. It certainly has a fairy tale quality to it. Fairy dust is certain to sparkle at any moment.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2015
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Hi Deb...-smile-....why I thank you kindly...appreciate you taking the time Maam....love Michael
Comment from MissMerri
This is a truly magical and imaginative poem, filled with phrases that move the reader to think gentle thoughts of tender, dreamy moments. Your carefully arranged rhymes and repeated stanzas add a whimsical beauty to the poem and reinforce the delicate mood. I loved how the last three lines were the same as the first three except rearranged. You do have a way with words, and this is a truly delightful poem. I'm moved by it, and incredibly glad that you are writing again! Keep 'em coming Michael.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2015
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This is a truly magical and imaginative poem, filled with phrases that move the reader to think gentle thoughts of tender, dreamy moments. Your carefully arranged rhymes and repeated stanzas add a whimsical beauty to the poem and reinforce the delicate mood. I loved how the last three lines were the same as the first three except rearranged. You do have a way with words, and this is a truly delightful poem. I'm moved by it, and incredibly glad that you are writing again! Keep 'em coming Michael.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2015
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My God you sure do keep a guy waiting....-smile-...ssshhhw thank you Jesus....and Happy Meadow!...woooooOOooooooo wooo....-smile- ..ah I'd be lying if I were to say it wasn't my pleasure....very happy you enjoyed it...well I will if you will...-wink-...love Michael
Comment from Clover77
Such a beautiful poem. So wonderfully written and it flowed beautifully. And such a beautiful image. It's gorgeous! Well done.
~Julia
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2015
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Such a beautiful poem. So wonderfully written and it flowed beautifully. And such a beautiful image. It's gorgeous! Well done.
~Julia
Comment Written 13-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2015
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Hi Julia...-smile- why thank you so much, I'm very happy you enjoyed it. Its always a pleasure to see beautiful bloom...-wink- love Michael
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for sharing your tribute to a real artist. I admired your echoing "-air" sounds and "w's" plus the "prayer" of the "tickled keys" and the "hush that captures poetry's peace". I'm glad to see you're back in true form. Big hugs- Joan
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2015
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Thank you for sharing your tribute to a real artist. I admired your echoing "-air" sounds and "w's" plus the "prayer" of the "tickled keys" and the "hush that captures poetry's peace". I'm glad to see you're back in true form. Big hugs- Joan
Comment Written 13-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2015
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Hey J...-smile-...Amen that she is...as well as you Miss Arc, I am well aware...-wink- thank you Joan some days I feel like I can win with you in my corner...love Michael
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You can definitely win! And cheers to Miss Arc! Smiles- Joan
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That should have been cheers from Miss Arc! ; ) -Joan
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lol...I know who you are Dear...-smile- night night-
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Lovely dreams and endless hugs- Joan
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Beautiful about a beloved woman that you adore and express your feelings for her. I think you did an excellent job writing this poem. Good job!
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2015
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Beautiful about a beloved woman that you adore and express your feelings for her. I think you did an excellent job writing this poem. Good job!
Comment Written 13-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2015
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Hi ....-smile- Well I thank you...yes yes she can sing too...quite a remarkable woman. thank you again....love Michael
Comment from artemis53
Hi, Mike. I'm listening to your lovely song as I write these words. To think that of another gives one a feeling a feathered beds and satins.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2015
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Hi, Mike. I'm listening to your lovely song as I write these words. To think that of another gives one a feeling a feathered beds and satins.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2015
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Hey D...-smile-...yea found it by accident....very pretty. Well great word placement places you where you read. I've been aware of her for years really. Always impressive, consistent in excellence. Just want to give her the notice shes due...-smile- Thank you Poetess...-smile- love Michael
