Comment from Walu Feral

Excellent

Hahahaha! G'day Alexis, I love the way you finish with such suspense in your chapters. Very well written again, it's a skill to have three stories going in the same chapter with such a smooth transition between them. So our Samantha has found and escape route LOL. I am also wondering about that trouble making bloody cat! Great work once again. Cheers Fez

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2015

It may be a skill, but it takes hours to write because of the logistics of pulling all the scenes together. Phew! I got there in the end! Alexis xxx

Comment from Annette Gulliver

Excellent

That was so funny, Alexis. Samantha thinks Andrew is coming to take her down to hell with him. And Mark, typical male, is only thinking about bonking Karen, and worried that's he's going to waste his hard-on. And how is Samantha going to escape from the room. Very entertaining.
Annette

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2015

Fortunately, Laura provides the perfect exit route when she sneaks into Igor's room to retrieve her phone. Next part posted today! Alexis xxx

Comment from G.B. Smith

Excellent

Mark could care less about what else is going on around him...He want to get laid. Laura is glad sh's NOT going to hell as in the movie Ghost. But the ringtone from under the bed???
Bear

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2015

The ringtone from the phone under the bed is that of a spooky ghost dragging chains, so Samantha is convinced Andrew's died and he's come to take her to hell. Possessing Laura's body and getting the 'hell' out of there seems like a much better option!

Alexis xxx

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I wonder if Karen has been possessed, or Samantha has temporarily inhabited Karen, great episode, the limitations of the before see Samantha with limitations, apart from being able to possess people she can't travel through walls, but now! Well done, Karen, blessings, Roy.

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2015

Yes, you've got it! The thought that Andrew had died and was sent to take her to hell makes her want to get the 'hell' out of there as soon as possible. Now she'll have a three bedroom apartment to roam around. Much more fun! Alexis xxx

reply by royowen on 15-Jul-2015

Looking forward.

Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

If made into a movie, this would make for a funny scene. I can imagine frightened Samantha climbing up the wall.
And poor Mark, trying so hard to stay hard. LOL Hope Laura answers the phone before Karen hangs up.

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2015

She does, eventually. Mark is very pleased! Alexis xxx

Comment from wordsfromsue

Exceptional

Samantha, what have you done girl?? Okay you HAVE to bring Jasper back, to act goofy around 'Laura', who is apparently Laura/Samantha..,. THAT would be too bizarre!

I have no idea what Samantha's going to do... Roam from room to room, looking for love?

You've gone in such unexpected directions with this, I have zero clues about what's next. :-)

Not sure, but should 'catholic' be capitalized? It's never small c here.

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2015

Hehe, I'm glad you enjoyed it, Sue. Great idea with Jasper. When I let Samantha get down to the dry store, I'll certainly give that one a try. Thank you so much for the six, it made my day! Alexis xxx

Comment from scongrove

Exceptional

Okay... now I get it! :) I thought the ghostly sounds were coming from another ghost! HA! Great job w/this chapter. Poor Samantha! I feel so sorry for her.
I like the part where Mark was trying everything he could to get Karen to stop worrying about the Hotel & coax her into bed. That part cracked me up. Sounds like a typical man! LOL!
I'm really enjoying where you're taking this book. It's really got me interested in wanting to read more. Your characters are really starting to grow on me! :)
Shana :)

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2015

I'm glad to say Mark gets what he wants eventually, but it takes another call to Laura before Karen relaxes enough to go to bed. As for Samantha? She's now one happy ghost because she has a whole apartment to roam around, instead of just one room. Thank you for the six, my friend. As always, I really appreciate it. Alexis xxx

Comment from Margaret Snowdon

Excellent

Ha ha - so the mobile phone ringing
set Samantha's imagination flying sky high.

and ends with Laura feeling different -
has Samantha leapt into her body, I wonder...

next chapter please, alexis.

margaret

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2015

Sorry it's taken so long to post the next one, Margaret, but life has been pretty hectic! I hope you enjoy it. Alexis xxx

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hi Alexis, a wonderful chapter that left me laughing. Poor Samantha, a frightened ghost eh? and I bet she has entered Laura so she could escape from her 'fate'. Oh dear, what on earth next. I enjoyed this. Ulla xxx

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2015

Yes, you've got it! The thought that Andrew had died and was sent to take her to hell makes her want to get the 'hell' out of there as soon as possible. Now she'll have a three bedroom apartment to roam around in, which should be much more fun! Alexis xxx

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

I bet Samantha has 'jumped' into Laura's body!! OMG, what a brilliant chapter. Poor Samantha has it all wrong. She watched too much TV. (Me too.) I like what you are doing here, you now have endless possibilities with Samantha, if I'm right about what has happened. Excellent my friend! Just loved the whole scene. :) Sandra xsx

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2015

So many possibilities I still can't decide. It's taken me four days to write the next chapter! I've just posted it, so I hope you approve! Alexis xxx