Seeing Behind the Eyes
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "The Whoop-Whooop Guy"A book of poems on people.
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Comment from pbroussard209
lol, I think I have seen that guy a few times, different faces, different places, he / she always seems to show up and ruin the night. Great descriptive poem kept me laughing, I really enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2015
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lol, I think I have seen that guy a few times, different faces, different places, he / she always seems to show up and ruin the night. Great descriptive poem kept me laughing, I really enjoyed it.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2015
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There has to be at least one in every crowd:) thanks so much.
Comment from evilynne
And what a picture this conjured up! Your poem is wonderfully well written, descriptive, and very funny. I enjoyed reading your work.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2015
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And what a picture this conjured up! Your poem is wonderfully well written, descriptive, and very funny. I enjoyed reading your work.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2015
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Thank you so much!
Comment from CMac2
This made me laugh. What a wonderful piece of writing. I think we have all known this guy at some time in our lives. How sadly insecure they are. An enjoyable read.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2015
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This made me laugh. What a wonderful piece of writing. I think we have all known this guy at some time in our lives. How sadly insecure they are. An enjoyable read.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2015
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Thank you so much. yes, they must be insecure.
Comment from Treischel
I think a rooster is a very good definition, with wooo whoop insted of cocka-doodle-doo. Sounds quite annoyed in this free verse poetic sketch. Very energetic, yet annoying. Well described.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2015
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I think a rooster is a very good definition, with wooo whoop insted of cocka-doodle-doo. Sounds quite annoyed in this free verse poetic sketch. Very energetic, yet annoying. Well described.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2015
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than you :)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
Great poetry. Yes, I can picture the poor guy, making a fool of himself, in his quest to find a mate, he scares away any possible prospects as well.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2015
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Great poetry. Yes, I can picture the poor guy, making a fool of himself, in his quest to find a mate, he scares away any possible prospects as well.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2015
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Yes, it was certainly scaring them away:) Thanks so much.
Comment from visionary1234
Oh a truly excellent write Teresa! You got him nailed to a 'tee' and no, I didn't need a picture - all in my head, and very ably drawn indeed. Bravo! :)Sharyn
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Oh a truly excellent write Teresa! You got him nailed to a 'tee' and no, I didn't need a picture - all in my head, and very ably drawn indeed. Bravo! :)Sharyn
Comment Written 10-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2015
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Thank you Sharyn! I do appreciate your kind words and the lovely gift today of the six!
Comment from livelylinda
Theresa: love this piece. I know the guy you are describing . . . I've seen him in a number of clubs of which I was a regular during those years when I was younger and able to do so. Sometimes it was a woman; but, I remember them all. They are probably still shuffling along with their cane and oxygen (this describes me, actually), seeking to impress some innocent bit of flesh . . . fun read. Linda
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2015
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Theresa: love this piece. I know the guy you are describing . . . I've seen him in a number of clubs of which I was a regular during those years when I was younger and able to do so. Sometimes it was a woman; but, I remember them all. They are probably still shuffling along with their cane and oxygen (this describes me, actually), seeking to impress some innocent bit of flesh . . . fun read. Linda
Comment Written 10-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2015
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lol! Now there is a picture - that same man strutting around whoop-whoooping when he is 80 with his cane and tank (still alone, I'm afraid) thanks for the laugh and the review!
Comment from ravenblack
The initial picture- a cock looking for a lay-he sure ain't gonna make any friends if he looks like that lol. Whoop whoop- yes, that would be annoying. And whoop whoop to a Whitney song- no thanks. Somme just exist to call attention to themselves. No wonder he was left alone.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2015
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The initial picture- a cock looking for a lay-he sure ain't gonna make any friends if he looks like that lol. Whoop whoop- yes, that would be annoying. And whoop whoop to a Whitney song- no thanks. Somme just exist to call attention to themselves. No wonder he was left alone.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2015
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lol - yep. Thanks so much:)
Comment from valerieellis
I know him!! Lol! Seems to be a lot of rooster running loose lately :-) I love the humor and the way you so vividly described him (I can see him strutting to and fro). Great job!! God bless :-)
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2015
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I know him!! Lol! Seems to be a lot of rooster running loose lately :-) I love the humor and the way you so vividly described him (I can see him strutting to and fro). Great job!! God bless :-)
Comment Written 10-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2015
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lol - thanks Valerie:)
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
You have used nice imagery and homophones to draw a picture of this characters in words. You could tell from your writing how annoying the man was as he strolled about making sure everyone knew he was there. Great job,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2015
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You have used nice imagery and homophones to draw a picture of this characters in words. You could tell from your writing how annoying the man was as he strolled about making sure everyone knew he was there. Great job,
Rhonda
Comment Written 10-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2015
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Thank you Rhonda. I appreciate your review and comments:)
