The Wonder
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Comment from Jumbo J
Hey there Michael... good to see you friend... and well, to read you is to feel you... well, no, not of the flesh... but that of the soul... these lovely words coupled with that angelic music... yeah, it's a winner... as I take from it the gift of appreciation to the magic that composes such articulated verses... and of course the inspiration behind the composer... the one that, when it really comes down to it, means everything worthwhile about being alive... brilliant words here my Brother... going to have to be six's in sentiment this time... but you know of its quality, I certainly do!
With our thoughts we create,
a view from great heights,
James.
******Stars!!!!!!
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2015
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Hey there Michael... good to see you friend... and well, to read you is to feel you... well, no, not of the flesh... but that of the soul... these lovely words coupled with that angelic music... yeah, it's a winner... as I take from it the gift of appreciation to the magic that composes such articulated verses... and of course the inspiration behind the composer... the one that, when it really comes down to it, means everything worthwhile about being alive... brilliant words here my Brother... going to have to be six's in sentiment this time... but you know of its quality, I certainly do!
With our thoughts we create,
a view from great heights,
James.
******Stars!!!!!!
Comment Written 08-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2015
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Hello Bro...-smile- well thank you James, that's the greatest compliment you could have given me. Always appreciated Bro....love Michael
Comment from His Grayness
As always from this excellent author.....a unique reflection on a common subject so often found in poetry. Is there any end to what concepts and considerations may be given to the emotion of love. If so, I'm sure Michael will find more than most of them! Great work! Vance
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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2015
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As always from this excellent author.....a unique reflection on a common subject so often found in poetry. Is there any end to what concepts and considerations may be given to the emotion of love. If so, I'm sure Michael will find more than most of them! Great work! Vance
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Comment Written 08-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2015
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Hey Vance...-smile- well love and I have had a hate and relationship I'm afraid...but I'm still searching for a rainbow...appreciate ya....love Michael
Comment from Joan E.
There you are--I knew if I waited long enough you would pop up--but I almost missed you tonight. I admired your lessons about love and your use of alliteration to intensify your message. Yes, "love is us"! Hugs forever and sweet dreams- Joan
7/20/16 I was pleased to see you re-post this poem. This time, I was taken by the
"cart wheeling" phrase, and I have a six available but the darn site won't let me award it. More hugs- Joan
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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2015
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There you are--I knew if I waited long enough you would pop up--but I almost missed you tonight. I admired your lessons about love and your use of alliteration to intensify your message. Yes, "love is us"! Hugs forever and sweet dreams- Joan
7/20/16 I was pleased to see you re-post this poem. This time, I was taken by the
"cart wheeling" phrase, and I have a six available but the darn site won't let me award it. More hugs- Joan
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Comment Written 08-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2015
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lol...Hey Tonto...well I figured I'd better or you'd keep bothering me...lol...love U Lady..I tried to write that kind you suggested but...this happened instead. Thank you for getting my juices flowing J...-smile- yes maam...bear squeeze back at ya....love Michael
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I'm glad the good old cinquain prompted you to get back to your to your written reflections--keep'em flow'n!. Bear squeezes and hugs back at you- Joan
