The Wonder
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Comment from lancellot
Well, I have to agree with all this. Love is all those things and so much more. Love is that feeling you get when everything just goes right, and this poem is sooo right.
Great job!
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2016
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Well, I have to agree with all this. Love is all those things and so much more. Love is that feeling you get when everything just goes right, and this poem is sooo right.
Great job!
Comment Written 22-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2016
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wow man...thanks Lance.
its good to see you...ah yea I knew this one was special.
appreciate you enjoying it with me. I think I'm going fan you..see what you write about...-smile-
I'm sure I'll be impressed if your forum conversation indicative. thanks again Bro...love Michael
Comment from nancyrabbrose
You have a beautifully written poem that describes love.Perhaps there are billions of ways to describe love. You have found a very good way. Different subject: would you mind telling me why or how your faith was tested in Texas. The reason is that I lived in Texas until I was 21, married a Jew and went to California. Now I am back in Texas where I don't feel that I can find a group that believes and practices as I do. My faith is being tested continuously. If this is a rude question, please forgive me.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2016
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You have a beautifully written poem that describes love.Perhaps there are billions of ways to describe love. You have found a very good way. Different subject: would you mind telling me why or how your faith was tested in Texas. The reason is that I lived in Texas until I was 21, married a Jew and went to California. Now I am back in Texas where I don't feel that I can find a group that believes and practices as I do. My faith is being tested continuously. If this is a rude question, please forgive me.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2016
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Hi Nance...-smile-
yes a billion ways...but all have a common....if its real it honors.
no I dont mind your asking.
I'm writing a book about the experience even now.
its a long truth...but to sum it up....I was betrayed by them thought to be praying for my blessing. in fact, jealous for it...they coveted it "my love" and then fed on it in glutenous sinful exhibition. they plotted and carried out their own will to murder me...all that was I and had been blessed with. they deemed me unworthy of it. ...-smile-.....do you know Jesus....? if yes....then you'll recognize Him when you see Him in others as well as "them" who dress as His Apostles....but are really wolves in disguise. If no....search Him day and night until you find Him. Call out to him...openly and unashamed....and He will come...I promise, because He does. stay away from a place called calvary....and innovative insurance. love to you...michael
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
We can be can be anything and do anything we want so why not love others and show others what it's like to love and be loved. I love it. Great job and I wouldn't change a thing
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We can be can be anything and do anything we want so why not love others and show others what it's like to love and be loved. I love it. Great job and I wouldn't change a thing
Comment Written 22-Jul-2016
Comment from fionageorge
Love is both a gift and a total mystery... why do we fall in love with one and not another, when sometimes, the other is a better person? I don't know... Great poem. Thanks for sharing and warmest regards, Marijke :o)
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Love is both a gift and a total mystery... why do we fall in love with one and not another, when sometimes, the other is a better person? I don't know... Great poem. Thanks for sharing and warmest regards, Marijke :o)
Comment Written 22-Jul-2016
Comment from c_lucas
Love is shown in a bunch of little ways, making for a very interesting read. There is very good imagery. This post has very good imagery.
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Love is shown in a bunch of little ways, making for a very interesting read. There is very good imagery. This post has very good imagery.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2016
Comment from gramalot8
Reconciled, this was awesome! I loved every word of your beautiful love poem. And I read it once, then read it again with the music. It was just the right touch for such a beautifully written touching poem. Thank you for sharing this with us.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2016
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Reconciled, this was awesome! I loved every word of your beautiful love poem. And I read it once, then read it again with the music. It was just the right touch for such a beautifully written touching poem. Thank you for sharing this with us.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2016
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-smile-...well it was my pleasure as well to read it. thank you enjoying it with me. love to you...michael
Comment from sage17611
If only everyone felt this way, the world would be a better place. Love is precious just as well as life, and we all need to show love to one another. Your poem flows nicely with a good message, thanks for sharing your vision.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2016
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If only everyone felt this way, the world would be a better place. Love is precious just as well as life, and we all need to show love to one another. Your poem flows nicely with a good message, thanks for sharing your vision.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2016
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woo...alright....appreciate you enjoying. love to you...Michael
Comment from rockinm76233
Beautiful words beautifully written. Enjoyed the read. Hope your faith tested in Texas wasn't too bad. I love my native state and welcome all who come to see if it really is the greatest state. To some maybe, to us, always.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2016
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Beautiful words beautifully written. Enjoyed the read. Hope your faith tested in Texas wasn't too bad. I love my native state and welcome all who come to see if it really is the greatest state. To some maybe, to us, always.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2016
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yes...sometimes I surprise myself...-smile- ...ah Texas has welcomed me home...I'm her son. as far as Faith tested....I won...-wink- thank you Dear. lopve to you...Michael
Comment from Susanne M. Psyris
OmG! Very, very awesome work here. Loved the verbiage which creates a perfect poem that reads smoothly and easily and imparts the importance of loving God and self equally and rejoicing in the very naturalistic way it happens. IMHO, and my interpretation, this poem reflects Jesus' life and death, His wish for our salvation and our ability to attain it. Great job. God bless and hugs, Susanne
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2016
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OmG! Very, very awesome work here. Loved the verbiage which creates a perfect poem that reads smoothly and easily and imparts the importance of loving God and self equally and rejoicing in the very naturalistic way it happens. IMHO, and my interpretation, this poem reflects Jesus' life and death, His wish for our salvation and our ability to attain it. Great job. God bless and hugs, Susanne
Comment Written 21-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2016
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God is Love....every kind that we know comes from Him.
and what does He tell us He wants for us...? and then He gave us choice ...to be or not to be...-smile-...Amen Love is us....following Jesus in ways, thought and means.
every once in a while I know He's given me something special....I dont claim it mine....I'm not sure where it came from. So...i love that it means ...different things to many. This could be interpreted as love honored also. I just knew it was beautiful....-smile- ...love to you...Michael
Comment from create4christ
Very nice picture ... very nice song. .. and a very nice poem. I especially like the picture with your song. That's a wonderful love - that's as priceless as the sacrifice of Jesus.
Thank you for sharing...Penny
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2016
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Very nice picture ... very nice song. .. and a very nice poem. I especially like the picture with your song. That's a wonderful love - that's as priceless as the sacrifice of Jesus.
Thank you for sharing...Penny
Comment Written 21-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2016
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Love was...is... the sacrifice of Jesus.
thank you Penny...-smile-....love to you...michael
