Comment from Janet7053

Excellent

I have been out of town. Sorry to have missed so much wonderful work. This piece is so perfect with its declarations of why you were born, what you were meant to be and do.

The rhyming and smoothness is evident throughout.
May I offer this as a suggestion?
Reverse the final two lines so that we are left with God's heart.
"I was born in His embrace to be set apart
To always feel the rhythmic beating of God's heart."

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2015

not a bad suggestion, Janet, thanks for dropping by,, that is most helpful, insightful, oh and thanks for the lovely review, blessings, Roy.

Comment from Alan K Pease

Excellent

You were born to remind us of Jesus sacrifice for our sins and reminder of our faith in our dear Lord for all the trials that face us in wonderfully poetic ways And to be our friend!

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2015

Thanks so much Alan, for this great review and these lovely comments, much appreciated, blessings, Roy.

Comment from Benny Beeharry

Excellent

This is a very lovely writing, bringing all my old strength back, very invigorating ,refreshing.
I love it
Shows so much much faith and willingness to submit to the Lords will.
Simple ,straightforward.
Congrats.
Benny Beeharry

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2015

Thanks so much Benny, for this great review and these lovely comments, much appreciated, blessings, Roy.

Comment from donalola

Excellent

Very good Roy!
Aren't we all born for the same things? Unfortunately not too many know it and the few who do, are not caring.
I like your work,
All the best
Donalola

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2015

Thanks so much Donalola, for this great review and these lovely comments, much appreciated, blessings, Roy.

Comment from Shirley E Kennedy

Excellent

A fine topic choice and amazing image.
Each couplet tells of another wonderful life experience .
I think you were also born to write and share this with others.
:-) Shirley

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2015

Thanks so much Shirley, for this great review and these lovely comments, much appreciated, blessings, Roy.

Comment from honeytree

Excellent

I really love the art work for these great words written
When we are born is a gift for us all in every way
Everyday we live we learn so much about life, love
and the special love God gives to us everyday.

Annie

I have no six left

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2015

Thanks so much Annie, your approval is enough, and thanks for this great review and these lovely comments, much appreciated, blessings, Roy.

reply by honeytree on 12-Jul-2015

That's fine Roy

Honeytree

Comment from ameen786

Exceptional

I admire your devotion and strong conviction my friend, what a beautiful composition, spelling the true function of our faculties; each couplet a gem; delightful treat sir, thank you very much, God bless.

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2015

Thank you So much for the great review and comments and the exceptional rating, blessings, Roy.

Comment from CD Richards

Excellent

To me the question "what is the purpose of life?" is a bit like the question "why is red?" However, you obviously feel there is one, and draw a lot of comfort from that - so that's good. The rhyme is simple and effective, and the words flow well. No SPaG issues that I could see. Well done, thanks for sharing. Craig.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2015

Thanks so much Craig, for this great review and these lovely comments, much appreciated, blessings, Roy.

Comment from bard owl

Excellent

Your commitment to God is quite obvious in this poem. Seeing and feeling all the good things He provides proves His love for us a million ways. Your poem flowed nicely and came to a pleasant conclusion - His loving embrace.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2015

Thanks so much for this great review and these lovely comments, much appreciated, blessings, Roy.

Comment from Oatmeal

Excellent

ROYOWEN,

You did a wonderful job with this challenge. The flow was very nice. The theme was good. The artwork complemented your poem. Very enchanted flow of words.

I saw no SPAG and no typos. Everything looked in place.

Your feelings are very understandable and expressed through the poem.

I look forward to seeing you again.

Love you,

Oatmeal

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2015

Thanks so much for this great review and these lovely comments, much appreciated, blessings, Roy.