Comment from Chrissy710

Excellent

Another chapter of interesting story line, your characters are taking shape well and I look forward to the next chapter. As I thought Candace does have feelings for C - Daddy. Cheers Christine

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2015

Thank you, Christine. Yes, those two are working on becoming an item. Appreciate you keeping up,
Rhonda

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Poor Leo being led off in handcuffs just because he's a hothead. Sometimes the police are subject to bias and have a social position that gives them and advantage. Well the story is making progress Rhonda, the baddies are firmly ensconced in the tale, let's hope Leo is ok, well done, my friend, blessings, Roy.

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2015

Thank you, Roy. Leo is a bit of a hothead, but he will grow by the end. As ways, I appreciate your input and attention to the story.
Rhonda

reply by royowen on 07-Jul-2015

Most welcome Rhonda

Comment from boxergirl

Excellent

Good job with the continuation of your story line, Rhonda. Lots of tension among the group and Poor Leo can't seem to catch a break. Can't wait to see what happens. 8-)

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2015

Leo takes a lot of hits in this story, but there's a reason for it. Thanks for the review!
Rhonda

Comment from MelB

Excellent

A strong chapter, Rhonda. Leo is having a really rough time, between the fountain goddess and the officer. The story is developing nicely.

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2015

Thank you so much, yes, poor Leo can't seem to catch a break!
Rhonda

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

I thought this was a strong chapter. Your characters really come alive with each paragraph. The chapter held my interest. Great job.

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2015

Thank you so much, Michael, that is very encouraging!
Rhonda

Comment from Walu Feral

Excellent

G'day Rhonda. This is another very well written and planned chapter. The poor thing, Leo, can't win. First the godess in the fountain and now the bully security officer, sheesh! Well set up for the next chapter and very tense indeed. Top job mate, cheers Fez

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2015

Thanks, Feral! Leo does take a lot, but he's a strong guy and can take it! Thanks for your support, my friend!
Rhonda

Comment from Mike Stevens

Excellent

A fine continuation, Rhonda, looks like Leo really stepped in something bad, and now his socks are ruined! (sorry, that's what you get after about 2 from me. LAME comments!

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Jul-2015

Cool!!! Wonderful comments!

reply by Mike Stevens on 05-Jul-2015

Thanks for pretending I actually made sense--lol!