Think Of Me Today
I Will Think Of You29 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem sends that nice vibe out to help facilitated an emotion that may be needed, but undernourished. Positivity is the key to overcoming most incommunicado durations.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
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This poem sends that nice vibe out to help facilitated an emotion that may be needed, but undernourished. Positivity is the key to overcoming most incommunicado durations.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2015
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Thank you so very much Mr Bill I hope I can keep the muse from running for a while ..Some times it just runs right off the keyboard lol
tk
Comment from Treischel
A delicate romantic reverie in this set of unrhymed couplets. Touching thoughts of missing someone very much. A melancholy mood induced by separation. A very nice piece, well done.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2015
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A delicate romantic reverie in this set of unrhymed couplets. Touching thoughts of missing someone very much. A melancholy mood induced by separation. A very nice piece, well done.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2015
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Thank you so very much Mr T for taking the time to read and comment on this lil diddy of mine
TK
Comment from krys123
TK;
-I did enjoy this short quip very much as it was well written from the bottom of your heart, or so it seemed. The words feel genuine and beautifully written.
-There is good use of enjambment which is the running on of a thought and concepts in one stanza in line to the next without a syntactical break.
-Thank you for sharing and posting this TK and may the good Lord be with you and yours.
Alex
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2015
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TK;
-I did enjoy this short quip very much as it was well written from the bottom of your heart, or so it seemed. The words feel genuine and beautifully written.
-There is good use of enjambment which is the running on of a thought and concepts in one stanza in line to the next without a syntactical break.
-Thank you for sharing and posting this TK and may the good Lord be with you and yours.
Alex
Comment Written 17-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2015
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Thanks much Alex I have been moving so it has been a bit hard to find the time to read, review or even write lately Hope this has come to an end and I will be able to get back to normal once again Humm ok now normal for me can have very many meanings lol
TK
Comment from w.j.debi
What a romantic thought, two people connected because they are thinking of each other. Time and space cannot defeat true love. Love reaches out and touches us in more ways than we can define or describe. Simply beautiful, TK.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2015
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What a romantic thought, two people connected because they are thinking of each other. Time and space cannot defeat true love. Love reaches out and touches us in more ways than we can define or describe. Simply beautiful, TK.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2015
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Thank you very much Lady D. for such kind words I am glad you enjoyed
TK
Comment from luna_catkins
such a brisk sincere sparklet. just in the middle of my night - some wandering comet brought this wondrous verse of yours onto my eyelash...
tonight i'm going to fall asleep smiling...:)
thank you, tk.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2015
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such a brisk sincere sparklet. just in the middle of my night - some wandering comet brought this wondrous verse of yours onto my eyelash...
tonight i'm going to fall asleep smiling...:)
thank you, tk.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2015
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Wow Did you know I hitched a ride on that comet that brought you that sparkle. That was the way my thoughts came your way.. Now a moonbeam graces you beauty as you think of me tonight... When you awake you will know I was their with you as you...You will fell my presence on your skin, my body smell will permeate your mind... Yes I see you smiling and I am smiling too
Good Morning !!
TK
PS thanks so much for the great review and the lovely six as well You have stimulated my mind as I think you can tell lol Ha bet you never got a reply like this one before
tk
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good morning! what a night! :-)
ps: ok, let's say, one of my favourites... ;):)
ty.
ps2: let's do it again. hihi.
Comment from K. Lorraine
Sir Knight...
Lovely as always...
I haven't been around for awhile, but something spoke to mind and said check my messages. I guess that was you sending me a telepathic message.
Such a cute new photo of your adorable family.
I will look forward to more of your wonderful poems and your devilish teasing.
Hugs, Lady K.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2015
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Sir Knight...
Lovely as always...
I haven't been around for awhile, but something spoke to mind and said check my messages. I guess that was you sending me a telepathic message.
Such a cute new photo of your adorable family.
I will look forward to more of your wonderful poems and your devilish teasing.
Hugs, Lady K.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2015
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Thank you much Lady K. I to have been absent for a while as I have been moving and you know what a pain that can be... Glad you liked the photo of all of us..
TK
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Where did you move? Are you still on the Big Island? K.
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Yes Lady K Still am here for another month or so.. I just moved out of the big house down to the guest house...Will be moving back to the mainland after some med procedures are taken care of here..
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Sir Knight, God be with you and a speedy recovery. Leaving paradise is such sweet sorrow. Keep in touch. Lady K.
Comment from BeasPeas
Oooooohhh! This is so nice. Simply written and constructed, but in its simplicity it's romantic and impactful. Anything more complicated wouldn't work as well. Marilyn
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2015
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Oooooohhh! This is so nice. Simply written and constructed, but in its simplicity it's romantic and impactful. Anything more complicated wouldn't work as well. Marilyn
Comment Written 16-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2015
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Thank you so much Marilyn for the great review..Hope now that I have settle in after my move I will be able to contribute more of my words of WIZ-DUMB LOL
TK
Comment from Pam (respa)
-I like this poem very much. Clever artwork.
-I like the idea of how if she thinks of you, you will know it.
-Stanza three is good with "spreading a smile on my face".
-I very much like
"I will know the touch
of your mind on mine." It has good reference to the beginning.
-Nice ending.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2015
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-I like this poem very much. Clever artwork.
-I like the idea of how if she thinks of you, you will know it.
-Stanza three is good with "spreading a smile on my face".
-I very much like
"I will know the touch
of your mind on mine." It has good reference to the beginning.
-Nice ending.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2015
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Thanks much respa ...Hope now that I have settle in after my move I will be able to contribute more of my words of WIZ-DUMB LOL
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You are very welcome. I look forward to continued 'words of WIZ-DUMB.' However, the 'WIZ' is anything but 'Dumb!'
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your poem. It reminds me of how two people who care deeply for each other are so interconnected. I like the short lines that add to the flow. The artwork is great. Your message is strong.
Well done. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2015
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I enjoyed your poem. It reminds me of how two people who care deeply for each other are so interconnected. I like the short lines that add to the flow. The artwork is great. Your message is strong.
Well done. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2015
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Thank you so much Janny for your kind words...Hope now that I have settle in after my move I will be able to contribute more of my words of WIZ-DUMB LOL
Comment from angelface2
Aw, you're such a romantic guy, TK. Love this little poem. I like the picture too. Are those pooches yours? They are so cute. I don't think I've ever had such a close connection with a man, but my daughter and I are often on the same wave link, and a close friend also. Thanks for sharing. Miss Sally
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2015
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Aw, you're such a romantic guy, TK. Love this little poem. I like the picture too. Are those pooches yours? They are so cute. I don't think I've ever had such a close connection with a man, but my daughter and I are often on the same wave link, and a close friend also. Thanks for sharing. Miss Sally
Comment Written 16-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2015
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Thank you much Ms Sally for such kind words..Yes they are ours Mini, Mighty and Moe ...And screech the bi-polar parrot as well lol
tk
