Rear View Mirror
Refection of the past26 total reviews
Comment from angelface2
Ben, what a neat story. You have a nice way of putting words together and they always make sense, not like some I have read. If this is your rear view mirror, I am sorry you have been so broken. I hope you get that mirror fixed! Hugs Miss Sally
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2015
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Ben, what a neat story. You have a nice way of putting words together and they always make sense, not like some I have read. If this is your rear view mirror, I am sorry you have been so broken. I hope you get that mirror fixed! Hugs Miss Sally
Comment Written 04-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2015
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Thank you so very much Sally for awarding me a 6 on this....I am sorry it took so long to reply but I have been in the process of moving and have had little time to reply, read or write
TK
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TK, I am sorry I think I called you the wrong name. Sorry about that. I review Ben quite often, too. You're both very good. Miss Sally
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Ha glad I have never done that before Joann hehehe Got cha
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You gave me my belly laugh for the day, thanks TK. :>D Miss Sally
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, TK...
_ Sad, reflective piece.
_ Looking in the rear view mirror is not always pleasant, although during the journey, many lessons learned.
_ Glad your computer woes are fixed. They can be very aggravating.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Lady J (*:*)
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2015
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Hi, TK...
_ Sad, reflective piece.
_ Looking in the rear view mirror is not always pleasant, although during the journey, many lessons learned.
_ Glad your computer woes are fixed. They can be very aggravating.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Lady J (*:*)
Comment Written 04-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2015
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Thank you so very much Lady J I am sorry it took so long to reply but I have been in the process of moving and have had little time to reply, read or write
TK
Comment from meggie13
The poem is sad and relates to bad decisions The past is past and it's better left alone. The heart is capable of loving more than once. It looks like the person you are referring to has never found true love. True love never has to say good bye as long as both persons love with the same intensity. Its better to look forward and try to find that special person who is waiting for her other half. It is well written with beautiful wording . The picture used mirrors your poem.****** virtual stars.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2015
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The poem is sad and relates to bad decisions The past is past and it's better left alone. The heart is capable of loving more than once. It looks like the person you are referring to has never found true love. True love never has to say good bye as long as both persons love with the same intensity. Its better to look forward and try to find that special person who is waiting for her other half. It is well written with beautiful wording . The picture used mirrors your poem.****** virtual stars.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2015
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Thank you so much meggie for the most insightful review..I am sorry it took so long to reply as I have been in the mist of moving and little time to read, write or reply Hope now that is settled at least for a while anyway
TK
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You are welcome, ATK. Moving is a lot of work I hope you are in a more permanent place . Do not worry about not replying earlier. Best wishes meggie :))
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You are welcome, ATK. Moving is a lot of work I hope you are in a more permanent place . Do not worry about not replying earlier. Best wishes meggie :))
Comment from country ranch writer
there are times when things just need to be let go of and it is hard to regain what once was the love, forgiveness and understanding
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2015
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there are times when things just need to be let go of and it is hard to regain what once was the love, forgiveness and understanding
Comment Written 04-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2015
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Thank you so much CRW I am sorry it took so long to reply as I have been in the mist of moving and little time to read, write or reply Hope now that is settled at least for a while anyway
TK
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where did you move to?why? yep I am nosey
Comment from Emily George
Life looking in a rear view mirror I know that was not the title, but it is repeated throughout and stuck with me. A good solid poem that is full of reflections of what was and might have been. There is sadness and beauty in you work.
Put the car in first gear and rev the hell out of it until you are thrusted forward and back into life. Then look back in the rear view mirror and take from it the best.
Emily
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2015
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Life looking in a rear view mirror I know that was not the title, but it is repeated throughout and stuck with me. A good solid poem that is full of reflections of what was and might have been. There is sadness and beauty in you work.
Put the car in first gear and rev the hell out of it until you are thrusted forward and back into life. Then look back in the rear view mirror and take from it the best.
Emily
Comment Written 04-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2015
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Thank you so very much Emily..Yes I was going to name it My Rear Veiw Mirror but something akin to that had the title already so I went with this..I am sorry it took so long to reply as I have been in the mist of moving and little time to read, write or reply Hope now that is settled at least for a while anyway
TK
Comment from Pam (respa)
-This is quite a poem, so well written, so reflective, and seemingly sad.
-So many great images and comparisons as I read it, wanting to read on, but feeling this sense of regret, hoping at the same time, it is in the past.
-The analogy of the broken rear view mirror and the magic keyboard is very good as you begin the poem.
-I don't think there is anyone who hasn't had some kind of regret in their lives.
-The image "scattered upon the black top of my life" and the one about the Corvette are very effective, vivid, and creative.
-The comparison to a "life's mechanic" is good. However, if you shared your heart and soul, then the person mustn't have cared that much, or they would have accepted you as you are.
-This is a very deep, reflective poem and written well and I hope mostly from your imagination!
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2015
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-This is quite a poem, so well written, so reflective, and seemingly sad.
-So many great images and comparisons as I read it, wanting to read on, but feeling this sense of regret, hoping at the same time, it is in the past.
-The analogy of the broken rear view mirror and the magic keyboard is very good as you begin the poem.
-I don't think there is anyone who hasn't had some kind of regret in their lives.
-The image "scattered upon the black top of my life" and the one about the Corvette are very effective, vivid, and creative.
-The comparison to a "life's mechanic" is good. However, if you shared your heart and soul, then the person mustn't have cared that much, or they would have accepted you as you are.
-This is a very deep, reflective poem and written well and I hope mostly from your imagination!
Comment Written 04-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2015
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I really want to thank you so very much respa for the 6 you have rewarded me on this...I have been moving and my time on FS has almost been nil so that is why the delay..Hope to be back normal today so I can read write and reply
tk
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I was wondering where you have been! You are very welcome for the rating and don't worry about the delay. Will look forward to the next posting.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Good job! I like your poem. It has good rhythm and a nice flow. The format is attractive and easy to read. I don't see anything to change is perfect the way it is.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2015
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Good job! I like your poem. It has good rhythm and a nice flow. The format is attractive and easy to read. I don't see anything to change is perfect the way it is.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2015
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Thank you so much GBR for reading and commenting on this...I am sorry it took so long to reply as I have been in the mist of moving and little time to read, write or reply Hope now that is settled at least for a while anyway
TK
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Oh, I hate moving. No worries, take your time :)
Comment from w.j.debi
Hi TK,
That review mirror can make us take a good look at things. We all have the good, the bad, the things we cherish and those, oh we'll I messed up times. This is quite an array of emotions--just like life.
Excellent choice of photo to compliment your verse. That road looks we'll u see, but still worth traveling.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2015
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Hi TK,
That review mirror can make us take a good look at things. We all have the good, the bad, the things we cherish and those, oh we'll I messed up times. This is quite an array of emotions--just like life.
Excellent choice of photo to compliment your verse. That road looks we'll u see, but still worth traveling.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2015
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Thank you so much Debi for you kind words..I am sorry it took so long to reply as I have been in the mist of moving and little time to read, write or reply Hope now that is settled at least for a while anyway
TK
Comment from boxergirl
First let me say, love your profile picture!
Second, I love this reflective poem about learning to love again. I think rear view mirrors are helpful but sometimes you just have to keep on driving down the highway. But keep our hearts open for another chance at love. 8-)
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2015
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First let me say, love your profile picture!
Second, I love this reflective poem about learning to love again. I think rear view mirrors are helpful but sometimes you just have to keep on driving down the highway. But keep our hearts open for another chance at love. 8-)
Comment Written 04-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2015
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Ah BG Thank you so much for liking my new profile pic and so much for the review of Let Me Love Again...I am sorry it took so long to reply as I have been in the mist of moving and little time to read, write or reply Hope now that is settled at least for a while anyway
TK
Comment from misscookie
Your words captured my attention from the first line to the last. Yes we all have mirrors of the past. I believe I was blessed when I had my stroke many things I don't remember. times I have flash backs that brings back pain and sorrow.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2015
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Your words captured my attention from the first line to the last. Yes we all have mirrors of the past. I believe I was blessed when I had my stroke many things I don't remember. times I have flash backs that brings back pain and sorrow.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2015
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Hi Ms C ...Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment on this ..I am sorry it took so long to reply as I have been in the mist of moving and little time to read, write or reply Hope now that is settled at least for a while anyway
TK
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Not to worry. after all there is a life besides Fan/ Story. blessing in your new home.
And have a blessed week end.
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