A New Beginning
Viewing comments for Chapter 23 "Ghostly Plans"The girls leave their chat line days behind.
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Comment from wordsfromsue
Alexis, I couldn't help it, I finished the book up to this point. I'll go through the chapters again to review, probably tomorrow. I couldn't stop reading!!!
That cousin of his, ICK, Caterina sounds perfect for him, and Samantha is sure he's perfect for her! You have quite the story going on here! At least Samantha doesn't mind Nazdia. :-)
I have no idea where this is going, that's a good thing... Nobody likes predictable. :-)
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2015
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Alexis, I couldn't help it, I finished the book up to this point. I'll go through the chapters again to review, probably tomorrow. I couldn't stop reading!!!
That cousin of his, ICK, Caterina sounds perfect for him, and Samantha is sure he's perfect for her! You have quite the story going on here! At least Samantha doesn't mind Nazdia. :-)
I have no idea where this is going, that's a good thing... Nobody likes predictable. :-)
Comment Written 04-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2015
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Lol, what are you like?! Well done you. I hope you managed to earn some cents before this one stopped being promoted! I posted the next chapter a few minutes ago! Alexis xxx
Comment from Annette Gulliver
This just gets better and better, Alexis. Poor Igor and Catarina, they have no idea what's in store for them. Laura now knows who the girl is, and is happy for Igor, but Samantha is jealous. How can Catarina compete with a ghost!
A great light hearted chapter.
Annette
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2015
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This just gets better and better, Alexis. Poor Igor and Catarina, they have no idea what's in store for them. Laura now knows who the girl is, and is happy for Igor, but Samantha is jealous. How can Catarina compete with a ghost!
A great light hearted chapter.
Annette
Comment Written 03-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2015
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I posted the next chapter today, where Samantha's reaction is hopefully a surprise! Alexis xxx
Comment from Walu Feral
Hahahaha! Sorry mate I'm all out of sixes. That is so funny. Now we have Laura on a sabotage missing destroying the plans of Samantha and Igor has no idea, that's a scream. You are a master strategist and have left me all excited about what's coming next. Great job, cheers Fez
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2015
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Hahahaha! Sorry mate I'm all out of sixes. That is so funny. Now we have Laura on a sabotage missing destroying the plans of Samantha and Igor has no idea, that's a scream. You are a master strategist and have left me all excited about what's coming next. Great job, cheers Fez
Comment Written 03-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2015
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Next chapter posted today. I hope you enjoy it! Alexis xxx
Comment from MelB
Great chapter Alexis. At least Laura has found out the truth about Catarina and Igor's cousin. Poor Catarina, she avoided Laura's tricks, but now Samantha can cause a ruckus. Should be interesting!
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2015
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Great chapter Alexis. At least Laura has found out the truth about Catarina and Igor's cousin. Poor Catarina, she avoided Laura's tricks, but now Samantha can cause a ruckus. Should be interesting!
Comment Written 01-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2015
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This wasn't been an easy scene to write because of all the characters involved, but I'm getting there! Thank you again for your continued reviews and support. It means a lot and inspires me to keep writing. Alexis xxx
Comment from Ric Myworld
It's a hard lesson for a wanted man to narrow his choices to one, but I think it might be easier than two that are trying to run the other two off, and one of them being a ghost. Thanks for another fun chapter. :-)
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2015
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It's a hard lesson for a wanted man to narrow his choices to one, but I think it might be easier than two that are trying to run the other two off, and one of them being a ghost. Thanks for another fun chapter. :-)
Comment Written 01-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2015
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Igor only has eyes for Catarina, and Laura only loves him as a friend and colleague, but Samantha could cause a lot of problems. All will be revealed soon! Alexis xxx
Comment from Ulla
No sixes left so five it has to be. Wonderful, poor Igor and Catarina for that matter.
They will now be in the hands of our ghost Samantha. I love it. So well written. Ulla
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2015
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No sixes left so five it has to be. Wonderful, poor Igor and Catarina for that matter.
They will now be in the hands of our ghost Samantha. I love it. So well written. Ulla
Comment Written 01-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2015
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I'm glad you enjoyed it, Ulla. I am working on the next chapter now, and I think you might be surprised at what happens next! Alexis xxx
Comment from G.B. Smith
Hey there Alexis.
I loved this chapter. It turned out OK but what a disaster it could have been. I was imagining him just about to enter her and the ghost started. That would make short work of lovemaking. Now what about that wretched girl?
Bear
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2015
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Hey there Alexis.
I loved this chapter. It turned out OK but what a disaster it could have been. I was imagining him just about to enter her and the ghost started. That would make short work of lovemaking. Now what about that wretched girl?
Bear
Comment Written 01-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2015
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Lol, well that would certainly be a moment to remember! I'm working on the next chapter now. I think you might be surprised! Alexis xxx
Comment from rwilliam
WOW What amazing art work for this chapter. SO cool!
After Laura threw the electric switch for the lights and sockets in Igor's room, she grabbed the phone to ring her mobile, which she'd slipped under Igor's bed earlier that evening after he came down to the kitchen at six. ---Laura threw the electric switch for the lights and sockets in Igor's room and quickly grabbed her phone. Igor's had come down to the kitchen at six and she took the opportunity to place her mobile under his bed. With one ring her plan would be activated.----Just an idea. It seems a bit too telling and needs more showing. :-)
GREAT chapter! I loved it! BRAVO!!:-) This was so fun to read. I love the way your mind works. tee hee! :-D Looking forward with great anticipation to read more!!
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2015
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WOW What amazing art work for this chapter. SO cool!
After Laura threw the electric switch for the lights and sockets in Igor's room, she grabbed the phone to ring her mobile, which she'd slipped under Igor's bed earlier that evening after he came down to the kitchen at six. ---Laura threw the electric switch for the lights and sockets in Igor's room and quickly grabbed her phone. Igor's had come down to the kitchen at six and she took the opportunity to place her mobile under his bed. With one ring her plan would be activated.----Just an idea. It seems a bit too telling and needs more showing. :-)
GREAT chapter! I loved it! BRAVO!!:-) This was so fun to read. I love the way your mind works. tee hee! :-D Looking forward with great anticipation to read more!!
Comment Written 30-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2015
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It is good, isn't it. It was great to find something on Fan Art for a change, instead of having to troll through the internet. Great suggestion re the phone/Laura, which I've used. Thank you, Rebecca. Your help and support mean a great deal. Alexis xxx
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
I enjoyed reading your story, you did a great job developing the characters and the plot; also, I like the attractive format that enhances the story. Good job!
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2015
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I enjoyed reading your story, you did a great job developing the characters and the plot; also, I like the attractive format that enhances the story. Good job!
Comment Written 30-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2015
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I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and appreciate you taking the time to review. Alexis x
Comment from Jay Squires
A lot going on here (in a good, comedic way) with all the last minute glitches and changes of plan.
momentary digit clashes, [Love it!]
Now she could get rid of that retched girl.... [rid of that WRETCHED girl >> "retched" is the past tense of "to retch" or throw up.]
Good chapter, Alexis.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2015
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A lot going on here (in a good, comedic way) with all the last minute glitches and changes of plan.
momentary digit clashes, [Love it!]
Now she could get rid of that retched girl.... [rid of that WRETCHED girl >> "retched" is the past tense of "to retch" or throw up.]
Good chapter, Alexis.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2015
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Lol, she could be throwing up by the end of the evening after Samantha has finished with her! I'm glad to say that 'wretched' mistake was caught in one of the first reviews. Phew!
Alexis xxx
