Destiny's Angel
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "The Woman in the Fountain"A fantasy novel set in modern day Baltimore
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Comment from chasennov
A woman in the fountain tries to capture Cadence and Leo. A chapter in the book Destiny's Angel. The Woman in the Fountain.' This chapter that you have created here, Rhonda, keeps on intriguing me. The story has gone a long way to influence me and I have just enjoyed this read. I was wondering at this line; 'They both looked around as a small unkempt man reached over and unplugged the fountain. Immediately, the lights went out, the water stopped, and the figure of the woman disappeared.' Well done.
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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2015
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A woman in the fountain tries to capture Cadence and Leo. A chapter in the book Destiny's Angel. The Woman in the Fountain.' This chapter that you have created here, Rhonda, keeps on intriguing me. The story has gone a long way to influence me and I have just enjoyed this read. I was wondering at this line; 'They both looked around as a small unkempt man reached over and unplugged the fountain. Immediately, the lights went out, the water stopped, and the figure of the woman disappeared.' Well done.
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Comment Written 29-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2015
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Thank you so much. You know, I'm off for the summer from teaching, so you would think I would have more time to post chapters, but I'm busy doing other things. I actually prefer a routine. It helps keep me in line! Thanks again,
Rhonda
