Comment from Jackarrie

Exceptional

Hi Loanna,

I love your poem it is so beautifully written with sincere emotion. I enjoyed reading it, for a free verse it flows very well.

Come, tears of grace and healing.
Come, quench this thirst
of the phoenix in me.
And when rain comes...

Pour down on me.

I rate this a six and I wish you the best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2015

Just to thank you again Mary. I have read your words many times...;0)

Comment from Glasstruth

Excellent

So emotionally beautiful. Love the alliteration of B words. The rain as healing water works well since it's associated with the heavens. Almost sounds like a prayer. It's a beautiful poem. Les

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 Comment Written 28-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2015

Sometimes,as now, someone's comments helps you realize why you love to write. Thank you.

Comment from wisemind68 (Tina)

Excellent

Hi LoannaLois,
Well done on your poem. Many people will understand the pain we all endure. Good flow and use of words. Good luck in the contest. Good job.

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 Comment Written 28-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2015

Thanks so much for your kind words!