Hoping Hell Hath No Fury
100 word story17 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That is really awful! If that was on the tele, I would have nightmares, my imagination is bad enough. I hate rats! (apart from Reggie the Rat in my childrens stories, he's nice! LOL) Excellent, good luck in the contest! xsx Sandra
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2015
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That is really awful! If that was on the tele, I would have nightmares, my imagination is bad enough. I hate rats! (apart from Reggie the Rat in my childrens stories, he's nice! LOL) Excellent, good luck in the contest! xsx Sandra
Comment Written 07-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2015
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Reggie is the exception! Yep, all the rest of them I can do with out. :) Thank you so much, mikey
Comment from TPAC
Writer in this work takes a trip outside of gore and places their own unique concepts of horror into play, writer in my view does this trick well presenting a captivating tale of suspense
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2015
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Writer in this work takes a trip outside of gore and places their own unique concepts of horror into play, writer in my view does this trick well presenting a captivating tale of suspense
Comment Written 07-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2015
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Encouraging words. Thank you very much, mikey
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements splendidly. You deliver a well executed tale of terror in the use of ongoing penance for past sins committed. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you for sharing it.
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This meets the contest requirements splendidly. You deliver a well executed tale of terror in the use of ongoing penance for past sins committed. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you for sharing it.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2015
Comment from LoannaLois
This is one sick puppy of a wife here. Yuck! I loved the way you built the story as the reality of what was going on dawned on the reader. Yuck!
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This is one sick puppy of a wife here. Yuck! I loved the way you built the story as the reality of what was going on dawned on the reader. Yuck!
Comment Written 05-Jul-2015
Comment from write hand blue
An unusual story of being eaten by rats then allowed to recover, then the same again and again.
A good entry for the Tiny Tales contest.
Good luck with this well written entry.
:) Mel.
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An unusual story of being eaten by rats then allowed to recover, then the same again and again.
A good entry for the Tiny Tales contest.
Good luck with this well written entry.
:) Mel.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2015
Comment from Michaelk
Just think about how many scorned women will be in hell. I can't imagine what would happen if your character had done anything worse to her.
Very descriptive for only one hundred words. I could easily envision the endless cycle of pain and horror.
What a great and terrible thought that the healing causes more terror than the injury.
Well done.
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Just think about how many scorned women will be in hell. I can't imagine what would happen if your character had done anything worse to her.
Very descriptive for only one hundred words. I could easily envision the endless cycle of pain and horror.
What a great and terrible thought that the healing causes more terror than the injury.
Well done.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2015
Comment from ProjectBluebook
Yep, I trust a hand count. This would be a terrible nightmare. The thought of a rat gnawing on your flesh and transmitting disease is unthinkable. Eek, bites of a thousand deaths. Creepy, not the way I would want to go, eaten to the bone. Imaginative, feeling me with terror. The tiny tails wagging. Count your doubloon. wackydo
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Yep, I trust a hand count. This would be a terrible nightmare. The thought of a rat gnawing on your flesh and transmitting disease is unthinkable. Eek, bites of a thousand deaths. Creepy, not the way I would want to go, eaten to the bone. Imaginative, feeling me with terror. The tiny tails wagging. Count your doubloon. wackydo
Comment Written 25-Jun-2015
Comment from barkingdog
His wife had him captive and let rats, his greatest fear, nibble on him. How gross. LOL I love that you could tell such a complete horror story with so few words.
The image of a naked man and the rats will stay with me for a while.
Best of luck in the contest.
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His wife had him captive and let rats, his greatest fear, nibble on him. How gross. LOL I love that you could tell such a complete horror story with so few words.
The image of a naked man and the rats will stay with me for a while.
Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2015
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
Nice job with this one for the tiny tales competition.
Not content with just inflicting wounds, then the real fear comes -- with no end in sight.
What could be worse for this poor soul?
Nice one and good luck.
GMG
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Hi there,
Nice job with this one for the tiny tales competition.
Not content with just inflicting wounds, then the real fear comes -- with no end in sight.
What could be worse for this poor soul?
Nice one and good luck.
GMG
Comment Written 25-Jun-2015
Comment from Sasha
Nice work with this one. I admire anyone that can write a coherent story in 100 words...I can't even order a latte in less than 100 words. Great entry for this contest and I wish you all the best.
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Nice work with this one. I admire anyone that can write a coherent story in 100 words...I can't even order a latte in less than 100 words. Great entry for this contest and I wish you all the best.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2015
