What are the Odds
Two women meet at a bar55 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
That's more like it. I saw it coming but not till almost the end. good writing. Here's a pretty six my last one. :-) I am listening to music mixes. I am waiting for someone to pick up the printer that would not work for me. Have a good night. Karen
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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That's more like it. I saw it coming but not till almost the end. good writing. Here's a pretty six my last one. :-) I am listening to music mixes. I am waiting for someone to pick up the printer that would not work for me. Have a good night. Karen
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much, Karen, for the extra special six-star review and kind words. I hate to admit that I'm going to have to go back and read these stories because I don't remember what they are by their names. LOL. I appreciate YOU every day!
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:-)
Comment from Selina Stambi
Uh oh! Goodness me ... that was a whammy ending, Ric! now you have me dying to know how she knew Bobby.
Very well done!
Sonali
know Tommy, how about one of your famous frozen-strawberry margaritas(?)"
"Hell if I know,(") she said. (")I gave up years ago trying
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2015
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Uh oh! Goodness me ... that was a whammy ending, Ric! now you have me dying to know how she knew Bobby.
Very well done!
Sonali
know Tommy, how about one of your famous frozen-strawberry margaritas(?)"
"Hell if I know,(") she said. (")I gave up years ago trying
Comment Written 29-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2015
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Hello, Sonali, and thank you so much for taking time to read my story. Your kind words, suggestions, and generous review are greatly appreciated. It amazes me that that 40 people can read my stories and not catch the mistakes, but thankfully I can count on you to help me clean them up. ((HUG)) You are more appreciated than I can say in words. :-)
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Takes two tango. You are appreciated too, Ric. :)
Comment from Green Lake Girl
Coming late to the party to review, Ric! Been on vacation. Love the twist at the end of this sad tale. I can't help but wonder what's gonna happen to Bobby Osborne. I picture certain body parts in a vice.
Nicely penned!
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2015
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Coming late to the party to review, Ric! Been on vacation. Love the twist at the end of this sad tale. I can't help but wonder what's gonna happen to Bobby Osborne. I picture certain body parts in a vice.
Nicely penned!
Comment Written 29-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2015
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Thank you so much for taking time to read my story. Your kind words and generous review are greatly appreciated. I hope you had a wonderful vacation, and glad to have you back healthy with your wit sharp and ready. Bobby Osborne will be hoping that the only thing he hears cracking is a joke. :-)
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Very funny! Although I think Bobby is in for a "weenie twister."
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LOL, You're probably right.
Comment from Ulla
Well written and a well constructed story about two women meeting in a deserted bar. they share their secrets all right. Enjoyed reading. Ulla
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2015
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Well written and a well constructed story about two women meeting in a deserted bar. they share their secrets all right. Enjoyed reading. Ulla
Comment Written 28-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2015
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Thank you so much for taking time to read my story. Your kind words and generous review are greatly appreciated. :-)
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Very nice little twist to the ending of this All-Time Best. I appreciate them and believe they add another dimension to a story. Can actually see this happening where two women, who do not know each other, are sitting in a bar somewhere talking about a man they want to get with just to find out one of them is his wife. Story well written and well told.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2015
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Very nice little twist to the ending of this All-Time Best. I appreciate them and believe they add another dimension to a story. Can actually see this happening where two women, who do not know each other, are sitting in a bar somewhere talking about a man they want to get with just to find out one of them is his wife. Story well written and well told.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2015
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Thank you so much for taking time to read my story. Your kind words and generous review are greatly appreciated. :-)
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
I was waiting for that ending, but knowing it was coming didn't detract from the entertainment. The scene is well written and seemed realistic. Good job!
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2015
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I was waiting for that ending, but knowing it was coming didn't detract from the entertainment. The scene is well written and seemed realistic. Good job!
Comment Written 28-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2015
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Thank you so much, Phyllis, for taking time to read my story. Your kind words and generous review are greatly appreciated. :-)
Comment from scd41
It is a gripping narrative of two women meeting for the first time in a bar and sharing their personal problems. Nothing in the story appeared unrealistic and the conversations between the two have been quoted in a matter-of-factly manner. The story has been given a suspenseful ending too.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2015
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It is a gripping narrative of two women meeting for the first time in a bar and sharing their personal problems. Nothing in the story appeared unrealistic and the conversations between the two have been quoted in a matter-of-factly manner. The story has been given a suspenseful ending too.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2015
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Thank you so much for taking time to read my story. Your kind words and generous review are greatly appreciated. :-)
Comment from Zue65
What a twist and the man Nancy and Patti are talking is just the same man, who happens to be Patti's husband, Bobby Osborne. I love the surprise twist at the end of the story. What a small world indeed.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2015
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What a twist and the man Nancy and Patti are talking is just the same man, who happens to be Patti's husband, Bobby Osborne. I love the surprise twist at the end of the story. What a small world indeed.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2015
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Thank you so much for taking time to read my story. Your kind words and generous review are greatly appreciated. :-)
Comment from padumachitta
Hi...a good entry into this contest. good luck.
I figure this happens more than we know...i like the left out bits, making the reader connect the dots,
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2015
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Hi...a good entry into this contest. good luck.
I figure this happens more than we know...i like the left out bits, making the reader connect the dots,
Comment Written 28-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2015
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Thank you so much for taking time to read my story. Your kind words and generous review are greatly appreciated. :-)
Comment from petalangela
Oh dear oh dear oh dear.
Some poor guys on the spit when his wife gets home
Loved this story and fits the title so well
Never divulge anything at pub. What are the odds. Lol
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2015
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Oh dear oh dear oh dear.
Some poor guys on the spit when his wife gets home
Loved this story and fits the title so well
Never divulge anything at pub. What are the odds. Lol
Comment Written 27-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2015
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Thank you so much for taking time to read my story. Your kind words and generous review are greatly appreciated. :-)
