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12 total reviews
Comment from
giraffmang
Hi there,
I really liked this one.
Very nice way to turn the tables on the man stealer.
Well written and engaging.
Nice one
GMG
her ample breasts - needs a full stop.
he still loved Meg - needs a full stop.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2015
Thanks for the alert. I find the screen font on FS so hard to see against the grey and seem to be missing details a lot lately.
Comment from
Leen1
Whoa! I have to admit I was a little confused as to what role Janet played in this "friendship". As I read on I was intrigued to find out that she was the "other woman." Very nicely written as a reader it captured my interest and need I say that the ending was a "kicker" because I got such a kick out of it. Excellent!
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Comment Written 24-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2015
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