Willing to Pay the Price
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Comment from NannaC43
This was an unexpected story to say the least. But it amazed me as a lot of it sounded like part of my life. These two women had one thing in common even though they didn't know each other, until now. Very well written with a touch of
surprise also. And interesting. You did a good job on your story. Good luck!
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2015
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This was an unexpected story to say the least. But it amazed me as a lot of it sounded like part of my life. These two women had one thing in common even though they didn't know each other, until now. Very well written with a touch of
surprise also. And interesting. You did a good job on your story. Good luck!
Comment Written 27-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2015
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Thanks for the read and review. Much appreciated.
Comment from Megalips
Awesome job on this story. It's just the right length to keep the reader's attention and not overwhelm, yet you get the job done on drawing me in. I like the way it starts. You don't try to put too much info out there, just let the conversation lead its way into the details, which by the end, are fascinating. I love the twist at the end, as well! Well written piece...good luck on the voting.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2015
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Awesome job on this story. It's just the right length to keep the reader's attention and not overwhelm, yet you get the job done on drawing me in. I like the way it starts. You don't try to put too much info out there, just let the conversation lead its way into the details, which by the end, are fascinating. I love the twist at the end, as well! Well written piece...good luck on the voting.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2015
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I like starting stories in the middle. Thanks.
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I voted for you...this is the best story in the group!
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Your vote made a difference to the win and to me having your support. Many thanks.
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It's all my pleasure!
Comment from June Mae
This story is fantastic! It follows the failed marriages of two women. The connection between them is uncanny and incredibly entertaining. Additionally, the plot's unfolding of events is very well crafted. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2015
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This story is fantastic! It follows the failed marriages of two women. The connection between them is uncanny and incredibly entertaining. Additionally, the plot's unfolding of events is very well crafted. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 26-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2015
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Thanks so very much.
Comment from inside echo
What a great twist to your story. I could not help but to smile. While reading, I kept wondering what secret these two could possibly share, then boom, right at the end....perfect. Well done. A great story and contest entry. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing.
tgc
echo
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2015
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What a great twist to your story. I could not help but to smile. While reading, I kept wondering what secret these two could possibly share, then boom, right at the end....perfect. Well done. A great story and contest entry. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing.
tgc
echo
Comment Written 26-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2015
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Thank you for reading
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You are welcome.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
I like your story. The ending was unspecting and made me feel good for the wife, Meg, but the plot is a bit unbelievable. I don't know any woman who would act this way. and the prompt calls for two women who become friends.
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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2015
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I like your story. The ending was unspecting and made me feel good for the wife, Meg, but the plot is a bit unbelievable. I don't know any woman who would act this way. and the prompt calls for two women who become friends.
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Comment Written 26-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2015
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You may have missed both the prompt's suggestion that they were strangers and my innuendo that Janet was beginning to like the woman, Hopefully, you are not a member of the CEC because I would challenge you on this point,. You graded me on your experience, not for writing a story, My personal opinion is that you should get out more. There are some amazing women that don't trip when they face adversity.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
A very clever and well written story that completely meets the requirements of the prompt. What a way to get the new wife back!!! The husband almost always still desires the woman he divorced. I really like your story. Good luck in the contest.
Rhonda
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2015
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A very clever and well written story that completely meets the requirements of the prompt. What a way to get the new wife back!!! The husband almost always still desires the woman he divorced. I really like your story. Good luck in the contest.
Rhonda
Comment Written 26-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2015
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I do like justice. Thanks for the review.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is an excellent write, mystery writer, I like the turnaround at the end where meg gets the loving without the weight of her husband around her neck and janet gets the leftovers, lol. good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2015
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this is an excellent write, mystery writer, I like the turnaround at the end where meg gets the loving without the weight of her husband around her neck and janet gets the leftovers, lol. good luck in the contest
Comment Written 25-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2015
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Thanks. I like payback.
Comment from dmt1967
I love this story. The other woman becomes the cheated woman. This is a great story and I love the twist at the end a lot. I hope you do well in the contest and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2015
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I love this story. The other woman becomes the cheated woman. This is a great story and I love the twist at the end a lot. I hope you do well in the contest and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2015
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Thank you for your kind words and all the dazzling stars.
Comment from apelle
Oh boy! Where do I start?
As someone that was married three times and mumbled frustrated many times while picking up dirty socks from under the bed "never again" ill have to say that there is a level of peace you can achieve with the right partner, you know, once you get over the idea that the concept of love has so many more facets than the infatuation we confuse with true love.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2015
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Oh boy! Where do I start?
As someone that was married three times and mumbled frustrated many times while picking up dirty socks from under the bed "never again" ill have to say that there is a level of peace you can achieve with the right partner, you know, once you get over the idea that the concept of love has so many more facets than the infatuation we confuse with true love.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2015
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You are a brave soul to go the circle three times. Glad you enjoyed the story. Thanks ever so much for the stars.
Comment from RodG
This was very well crafted. I did NOT see the ending coming. I like how you gradually introduce each woman and let the dialog build the suspense. We soon realize that "mousy" Meg has more going for her than the reader or Janet thought. A very believable scenario, too, as I can believe this COULD happen the way it did.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2015
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This was very well crafted. I did NOT see the ending coming. I like how you gradually introduce each woman and let the dialog build the suspense. We soon realize that "mousy" Meg has more going for her than the reader or Janet thought. A very believable scenario, too, as I can believe this COULD happen the way it did.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2015
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I like surprise endings, especially when the under dog finds traction and wins the battle. Thanks.
