Reflections Of Color
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "I May Never Tell You"A collection of my All-Time Best rated song lyrics
28 total reviews
Comment from Michaelschardan
favorite line "Once Upon Forever" which is a book series also. almost original! great song, very traditional.............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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reply by the author on 30-Aug-2015
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favorite line "Once Upon Forever" which is a book series also. almost original! great song, very traditional.............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Comment Written 30-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2015
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Any word in the English language can be construed as having been used by somebody else in writing somewhere. That does not mean that is where it came from in another piece of writing. Will be expecting you to become my newest fan, so don't forget to sign up today!
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very true. my apologies. I am enjoying your work and will read more when i get a chance. I view and review people who take time to view and review my work. thanks again for taking time to read my work.
Comment from Glasstruth
A longing for a love that's gone is more than clear, as write as if she's still here, but you know she isn't. Very emotional. My favorite:
"Go on back to the memory
You can't get off your mind
Tangled sheets tell the story
Of the love you'll never find "
Wonderful writing. Les
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2015
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A longing for a love that's gone is more than clear, as write as if she's still here, but you know she isn't. Very emotional. My favorite:
"Go on back to the memory
You can't get off your mind
Tangled sheets tell the story
Of the love you'll never find "
Wonderful writing. Les
Comment Written 29-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2015
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Comment from ellie6
A poem of loss and remembering. Where has it all gone? How did that happen?
This poem is full of unanswered questions. it is evocative of lost love.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2015
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A poem of loss and remembering. Where has it all gone? How did that happen?
This poem is full of unanswered questions. it is evocative of lost love.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2015
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Comment from Chris Tee
It is an absolutely wonderful free verse with some rhyming thrown in as well. well done indeed with this excellent flowing piece of poetry.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2015
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It is an absolutely wonderful free verse with some rhyming thrown in as well. well done indeed with this excellent flowing piece of poetry.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2015
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Comment from prettybluebirds
What a beautiful but sad poem. I can relate to this as I found myself in a similar situation with my first husband. After several years I gave up and went my own way. Love the artwork, it does go well with the poem. I could find nothing wrong with this work and I loved reading it.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2015
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What a beautiful but sad poem. I can relate to this as I found myself in a similar situation with my first husband. After several years I gave up and went my own way. Love the artwork, it does go well with the poem. I could find nothing wrong with this work and I loved reading it.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2015
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Comment from EricBrady
So sad. Beautifully written. I love how you used the first stanza as the last stanza, it tells me that there is still hope and unconditional love. Sometimes we can get a little too comfortable in a relationship and one or both parties can begin to bore and start craving a love lost or a new desire. Love is something that takes a constant work to keep it fresh and new. You have described the consequences so perfectly. Great work. I have been there myself.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2015
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So sad. Beautifully written. I love how you used the first stanza as the last stanza, it tells me that there is still hope and unconditional love. Sometimes we can get a little too comfortable in a relationship and one or both parties can begin to bore and start craving a love lost or a new desire. Love is something that takes a constant work to keep it fresh and new. You have described the consequences so perfectly. Great work. I have been there myself.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2015
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Comment from Pantygynt
This reads very like one of your lyrics and should in my opinion have beeen entered into the love poetry competition where it would have provided yet another take on the old theme of "lurve"! It's true though what you say, you cant'keep hold of them if they don't want to stay.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2015
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This reads very like one of your lyrics and should in my opinion have beeen entered into the love poetry competition where it would have provided yet another take on the old theme of "lurve"! It's true though what you say, you cant'keep hold of them if they don't want to stay.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2015
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So very true. When they want to walk they go. Appreciate your comments and support indeed.
Comment from Nosha17
I guess, the person can not imagine how someone could now, but it isn't hard to guess. Well expressed thoughts on a difficult subject and excellent rhyming. Two things: verse 5, lying (verb lay takes an object, verb lie which you mean here does not) Verse 7, tangled sheets. Enjoyable read. Faye
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2015
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I guess, the person can not imagine how someone could now, but it isn't hard to guess. Well expressed thoughts on a difficult subject and excellent rhyming. Two things: verse 5, lying (verb lay takes an object, verb lie which you mean here does not) Verse 7, tangled sheets. Enjoyable read. Faye
Comment Written 25-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2015
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Comment from bob cullen
Just one suggestion. Fourth last verse.
In the final two lines you use the word 'walking' twice. To my mind you'd get a better flow if you changed the second 'walking' to 'heading' out the door
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2015
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Just one suggestion. Fourth last verse.
In the final two lines you use the word 'walking' twice. To my mind you'd get a better flow if you changed the second 'walking' to 'heading' out the door
Comment Written 25-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2015
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Comment from Eric1
Hi Brett, excellent and well written poem / song, your words flow beautifully as the reader is slowly taken down the page to a repeat of the first stanza which gives it strength.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2015
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Hi Brett, excellent and well written poem / song, your words flow beautifully as the reader is slowly taken down the page to a repeat of the first stanza which gives it strength.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2015
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Glad you enjoyed this. Appreciate your comments.
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You are very welcome my friend.
