A New Beginning
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "Cat And Mouse"The girls leave their chat line days behind.
19 total reviews
Comment from Annette Gulliver
Alexis, I'm sorry for my late review, but I have been falling behind. I somehow missed your previous chapter, so have read it as well and am now up to date. Both chapters are excellent, and I really enjoyed meeting your ghost, Samantha, the poor lonely soul. Did the cat eat the baby mice? Igor is certainly in a pickle now, with Nadzia making herself at home in his boxer shorts. That was so funny. I'm waiting to see how he gets out of this one.
Annette
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2015
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Alexis, I'm sorry for my late review, but I have been falling behind. I somehow missed your previous chapter, so have read it as well and am now up to date. Both chapters are excellent, and I really enjoyed meeting your ghost, Samantha, the poor lonely soul. Did the cat eat the baby mice? Igor is certainly in a pickle now, with Nadzia making herself at home in his boxer shorts. That was so funny. I'm waiting to see how he gets out of this one.
Annette
Comment Written 25-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2015
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I take the focus off Nazdia in the next chapter and turn it to Igor's love life. The overbearing Mazeija arrives on the scene at the same time as the beautiful Catriona. I can't think which one Igor's more interested in! Thank you so much for catching up, Annette, and the sizzling six. Alexis xxx
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you're welcome, Alexis.
Comment from Ric Myworld
LOL. Poor Igor, dancing a jig as Nazdia plays in the forest. It tickles me to just think about it. Igor saying, "Please, little mousey, don't bite." Thanks for another fun and entertaining chapter. :-)
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2015
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LOL. Poor Igor, dancing a jig as Nazdia plays in the forest. It tickles me to just think about it. Igor saying, "Please, little mousey, don't bite." Thanks for another fun and entertaining chapter. :-)
Comment Written 24-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2015
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The day I wrote this, I had some really depressing news about a friend, so I was determined to write something I could send her to give her a laugh. I'm glad to say it did! Alexis x
Comment from Walu Feral
Hahahahaha! Bugger no sixes left. That is so hilarious that I almost spat my dentures across the office. Brilliant work mate, this is a classic chapter especially as I expected to find a chewed up rat in the carpark LOL. Fabulous stuff. Cheers Fez
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2015
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Hahahahaha! Bugger no sixes left. That is so hilarious that I almost spat my dentures across the office. Brilliant work mate, this is a classic chapter especially as I expected to find a chewed up rat in the carpark LOL. Fabulous stuff. Cheers Fez
Comment Written 24-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2015
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Now that's a visual that had me laughing too! I think the one I posted yesterday should amuse you too. I was half expecting the image I downloaded from a site for big 'sexy' women would be banned because of complaining fanstorians, but it's still there!
Alexis xxx
Comment from Jay Squires
What a hilarious chapter. I could just picture Igor's dance in the kitchen. At the same time I could imagine what an ingrate Jenny must have felt him to be after they were so kind to him.
Good chapter.
Looks like Igor's done a runner,' [You mentioned this here and a few sentences later. I'm not familiar with it. What does "done a runner" mean?]
Only that question.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2015
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What a hilarious chapter. I could just picture Igor's dance in the kitchen. At the same time I could imagine what an ingrate Jenny must have felt him to be after they were so kind to him.
Good chapter.
Looks like Igor's done a runner,' [You mentioned this here and a few sentences later. I'm not familiar with it. What does "done a runner" mean?]
Only that question.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2015
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Hi Jay. It's an expression used a lot here, and means exactly what says; someone has run off, usually when they're needed. I'm glad you enjoyed the fun side to this chapter. I thought I'd better balance the mouse babies being eater with something light hearted. Having said that, nobody but Igor or Nazdia are bothered. One mouse is quite enough! Alexis xxx
Comment from barkingdog
You balanced the sadness of Nazdia's babies being eaten with the comedy of her exploring Igor's nether regions.
Nicely done, Alexis. You continue to write an enthralling story.
Now, about that ghost. . .
(Just as I wrote the word 'ghost' there was a terrible boom of thunder here. I jumped. LOL)
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2015
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You balanced the sadness of Nazdia's babies being eaten with the comedy of her exploring Igor's nether regions.
Nicely done, Alexis. You continue to write an enthralling story.
Now, about that ghost. . .
(Just as I wrote the word 'ghost' there was a terrible boom of thunder here. I jumped. LOL)
Comment Written 22-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2015
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Lol, well that should tell you something! Yes, I thought I'd better do something to counteract the remorse of any mouse lovers, although I'm sure there are none! Alexis x
Comment from MelB
Funny! I can imagine Igor dancing around with his hand in his pocket. I can imagine lots of different things ran through Jenny's mind. Igor is so determined to keep this mouse safe.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2015
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Funny! I can imagine Igor dancing around with his hand in his pocket. I can imagine lots of different things ran through Jenny's mind. Igor is so determined to keep this mouse safe.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2015
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I'm afraid I have a vivid imagination and I kept laughing as I wrote it. I think I need to get a life! Alexis xxx
Comment from rwilliam
Aww, can't believe how you made me feel for a mouse! Great writing! that picture too is cute. Good job!
With his voice rising to a tone that belied his gender, he danced on the spot, his face contorted. 'I tell you, I no want cat in my kitchen!' he screeched.--LOVED this sentence so much!! Very visual and funny! :-D
What a fun chapter! Loved every minute of it! Great work girl.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2015
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Aww, can't believe how you made me feel for a mouse! Great writing! that picture too is cute. Good job!
With his voice rising to a tone that belied his gender, he danced on the spot, his face contorted. 'I tell you, I no want cat in my kitchen!' he screeched.--LOVED this sentence so much!! Very visual and funny! :-D
What a fun chapter! Loved every minute of it! Great work girl.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2015
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Lol, someone else said that, and it made me burst out laughing. As you say, who feels sorry for a sodding mouse? Glad you liked the gender thing. I had written 'had reached falsetto proportions,' and then I reviewed Jay's latest chapter and found he had used the word falsetto too, so I had to rush back and change it! Paranoid or what? Thank you so much for the six. You made my day--again! Alexis xxx
Comment from G.B. Smith
Hello my love. One doesn't have to be current on the book to not enjoy this well written chapter. I laughted when Nazdia made her move up the leg. I am back and will keep up
Bear
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2015
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Hello my love. One doesn't have to be current on the book to not enjoy this well written chapter. I laughted when Nazdia made her move up the leg. I am back and will keep up
Bear
Comment Written 22-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2015
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Hello, Bear! It's good to hear from you. I'm writing this book more as 'scenes' so it's easy to pop in and out of them. Alexis xxx
Comment from ProjectBluebook
Amusing chapter. I got two cats and zero mice where I stay. Automatic mouse traps. Lots of details to consume in this one. Lots of human and animal activity. Quite charming. I used to have a gerbil named Stuart Little. Could not cage him, he would jump, hold on with his teeth on wire cage like an acrobat and worm through the tiny cracks. Them critters are really smart and can jump high. Yep, interesting... excuse me for jumping in late. wackydo
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2015
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Amusing chapter. I got two cats and zero mice where I stay. Automatic mouse traps. Lots of details to consume in this one. Lots of human and animal activity. Quite charming. I used to have a gerbil named Stuart Little. Could not cage him, he would jump, hold on with his teeth on wire cage like an acrobat and worm through the tiny cracks. Them critters are really smart and can jump high. Yep, interesting... excuse me for jumping in late. wackydo
Comment Written 22-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2015
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I must admit, I was at a loss as to what to with the babies after Nazdia gave birth, so the cat turned out to be very handy! I had a Polish chef who had a hamster, and was inconsolable when it died! He even had me trying to revive it with brandy. Alexis x
Comment from Curly Girly
This was a fun read, and it boarders on the ridiculous. What a pity kitty didn't eat them all! Now Nazdia survives to breed again. I don't think I go through the trials of Nadia's birthing twice, lol!
I can imagine Jenny would do anything to keep a good, but temperamental chef happy. His skill as an excellent chef are not easy to come by at an affordable price; but patronizing him for keeping a pet mouse ... mmm ... Not in my kitchen! Here, kitty, kitty ... :)
Nicole
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2015
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This was a fun read, and it boarders on the ridiculous. What a pity kitty didn't eat them all! Now Nazdia survives to breed again. I don't think I go through the trials of Nadia's birthing twice, lol!
I can imagine Jenny would do anything to keep a good, but temperamental chef happy. His skill as an excellent chef are not easy to come by at an affordable price; but patronizing him for keeping a pet mouse ... mmm ... Not in my kitchen! Here, kitty, kitty ... :)
Nicole
Comment Written 22-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2015
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I did consider having Nazdia neutered, but couldn't find a vet who would do it! Thank you for the six, Nicole. I hope it gave you a laugh after dealing with all that snow! Alexis xxx
