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The Change

Undelivered Father's Day card

60 total reviews 
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Exceptional
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This is a wonderful, upbeat story where it could have been a bitter tale. Bless you for being the better man and doing what was right. I'm sure it made you feel better in the end... kindness and forgiveness usually does, whereas a grudge just pulls you down into a dark place where you don't really want to be. Bravo! You may have run out of sixes, but I still have five left, and I would give them ALL to you if allowed. :)

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2015


reply by the author on 07-Jul-2015
    Thank you, Phyllis, for your generous, six star review. Yes, this could have been a bitter story but I chose a different path and I am a better person because of it. I witnessed how bitterness impacted my parents after their divorce, and I chose a different path. What matters is how we treat people today. Thank you for your encouraging support.
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Hello Sia Cat . I must say your story was well told and made me very emotional about how you change your negative attitude about your dad to a positive attitude

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2015
    Thank you, Gert, for your kind review. I changed my father's clothes and I changed myself, too.
Comment from Winslow
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Dear Sis Cat,

Quite a story of acceptance of your father. Very heart warming. The strength of this piece is in your excellent descriptions and being able to let the reader feel your emotions. Forgive, accept, it will restore the soul.

Warm regards,

Winslow

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2015
    Thank you, Winslow, for your generous, six star review. I am glad my story of acceptance warmed your soul.
Comment from TAB_that's me
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You took the high ground and went with your Dad and did for him instead of treating him like he had treated you. Good for you.

Thanks for sharing your heartwarming story with us.

Teresa

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2015
    Thank you, Teresa, for your generous review. I am glad my story warmed your heart.
Comment from Ulla
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Lovely story which is both sad and happy, all at the same time. It is very well written . It is always difficult to loose a parent, but you were lucky to find your father later in life. Ulla

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2015
    Thank you, Ulla, for your kind review. I balance happiness and sadness in my stories to accentuate the two. I am grateful that I resumed a relationship with my father later in life. Thanks for you review.
Comment from amahra
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What a wonderful read; It all comes down to making a constructive decision and sticking to it. I admire you for being different from your dad. I get so sick of criminals, after they've been caught, blaming their upbringing for their awful behavior. I think your dad would be proud.

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2015
    Thank you, amahra, for your generous review. Yes, my father would be proud of me. It all comes down to the constructive decision I made to counteract the destructive decision he made. Thank you for your review.
Comment from Gloria ....
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Oh Sis, this is such a sweet story for Father's Day. I am sure your dad appreciated it very much and how nice that you still have the undelivered card you made for him when you were just a wee boy. That's quite a sad story, so hugs to you.

Gloria

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2015
    Yes, Gloria, I wrote and performed the story for Father's Day last year on a hunch that my cards and gifts were undelivered. Last month while cleaning out my mother's storage unit, I found the card in a box of my childhood drawings, cards, and reports. I was shocked but not shocked because I always had an intuition that my father did not receive card. The discovery of my undelivered card propelled me to post my story for this year's Father's Day. My father appreciated me accompanying him to his awards dinner and displayed the photo we had taken of us. Thank you for your review.
Comment from WrightSavvy
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This was a fantastic memory and I am so glad you wrote it for me to read. It hits home for me. My mother, a very sick woman, missed my graduation for alcohol rehab. Reading this story lightened my heart and it's an honor to say it makes me want to be a better person. No critiques needed.

Thank you.

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2015
    Thank you, WrightSavvy, for your generous, six star review. My story hit home with a lot of reviewers who had similar experiences with absent or negligent parents. I am glad it makes you want to be a better person. Thanks again for your review.
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
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Your dad may not have been in the audience of any of your accomplishments but he was always with you. Sometimes people don't know how to parent but I'm sure your father loved you very much. Keep your head up. he's smiling down upon you right now

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 23-Jun-2015
    Thank you for your kind review. Yes, my father is always with me and smiling down on me. Thanks for the encouragement.
Comment from Nosha17
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I am glad that you decided to be a decent human being, in spite of the way your father treated you. Well related story with good descriptions and it was written with sincerity. Enjoyable read, Faye

 Comment Written 23-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 23-Jun-2015
    Thank you, Faye, for your generous review. I am glad you enjoyed the read.