Tiny Tales of Terror
Viewing comments for Chapter 30 "The Cellar Stares"Multi-authored book of flash/micro horror fiction
55 total reviews
Comment from Dawn Munro
Hahahahaha! Yesiree, boils and ghouls, ol' man Kutch is up to his nefarious tricks once again, making sure you'all can't descend those cellar steps... Phew -----what stinks down there?
Now this is a tiny terror tale. *grin* (Well done, friend.)
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Hahahahaha! Yesiree, boils and ghouls, ol' man Kutch is up to his nefarious tricks once again, making sure you'all can't descend those cellar steps... Phew -----what stinks down there?
Now this is a tiny terror tale. *grin* (Well done, friend.)
Comment Written 19-Jun-2015
Comment from Muffins
See what happens when you leave young kids alone?
What a terrifying delight of satisfying the reader's blood lust. A Homicidal escapee, scared kids and the to late information makes this story a tasty treat. This story is built on quick action, huge emotions ,and a horribly ending. The perfect entertaining flash fiction.
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See what happens when you leave young kids alone?
What a terrifying delight of satisfying the reader's blood lust. A Homicidal escapee, scared kids and the to late information makes this story a tasty treat. This story is built on quick action, huge emotions ,and a horribly ending. The perfect entertaining flash fiction.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2015
Comment from Ulla
Very well written as usual and caught my attention. It just goes to show that knowledge is everything. But we can't always have that advantage. Here to fatal consequences. Well done. Ulla
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Very well written as usual and caught my attention. It just goes to show that knowledge is everything. But we can't always have that advantage. Here to fatal consequences. Well done. Ulla
Comment Written 19-Jun-2015
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
I enjoyed reading another chapter in the book Tiny Tales of Terror. "The Cellar Stares", is a well told scary story about a crazy man waiting in the cellar a poor victim. Your work is presented exceptionally well and does the job of scaring me. I liked the song of Ozzy Osbourne's Bloodbath in Paradise, it was a good match to the story. The colors and pictures were awesome. Great job Dean!
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I enjoyed reading another chapter in the book Tiny Tales of Terror. "The Cellar Stares", is a well told scary story about a crazy man waiting in the cellar a poor victim. Your work is presented exceptionally well and does the job of scaring me. I liked the song of Ozzy Osbourne's Bloodbath in Paradise, it was a good match to the story. The colors and pictures were awesome. Great job Dean!
Comment Written 19-Jun-2015
Comment from Michaelk
A great addition to the book. This story had a very '50's B-movie' feel to it. The girl's perch impediment played very well, making it more convincing that she was just a youngster in pigtails trying to protect her brother. And of course, the brother, being convinced he knows better than her, plunges ahead anyway. Again, just like a 50's B-movie.
Excellent job getting a musical aspect in the story, and your choice was quite appropriate.
Overall, I'd give it two severed thumbs up. :)
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A great addition to the book. This story had a very '50's B-movie' feel to it. The girl's perch impediment played very well, making it more convincing that she was just a youngster in pigtails trying to protect her brother. And of course, the brother, being convinced he knows better than her, plunges ahead anyway. Again, just like a 50's B-movie.
Excellent job getting a musical aspect in the story, and your choice was quite appropriate.
Overall, I'd give it two severed thumbs up. :)
Comment Written 19-Jun-2015
Comment from write hand blue
Another of your imaginative creations Dean.
I like the play on the name cellar stairs-- Cewar Stares--Keller Shares.
Little Bobby shouldn't have gone down those terrible stairs.
A good addition to the series.
:) Mel.
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Another of your imaginative creations Dean.
I like the play on the name cellar stairs-- Cewar Stares--Keller Shares.
Little Bobby shouldn't have gone down those terrible stairs.
A good addition to the series.
:) Mel.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2015
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Another good story Dean - you went to great lengths with the childish voice of the child at the beginning. Clever idea. I particularly hate horror stories involving children - really frightening. Very well done as usual. Warm regards Dorothy x (might try one of these)
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Another good story Dean - you went to great lengths with the childish voice of the child at the beginning. Clever idea. I particularly hate horror stories involving children - really frightening. Very well done as usual. Warm regards Dorothy x (might try one of these)
Comment Written 19-Jun-2015
Comment from Jacob Collins
Another thrilling piece Dean, you certainly had me on the edge of my seat once again. You certainly caught the nature and speech of the children well and captured the scene perfectly, I could really feel the horror. Excellent writing again, Dean...Jacob
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Another thrilling piece Dean, you certainly had me on the edge of my seat once again. You certainly caught the nature and speech of the children well and captured the scene perfectly, I could really feel the horror. Excellent writing again, Dean...Jacob
Comment Written 19-Jun-2015
Comment from giraffmang
Hi Spooky,
Loved this one.
Concentrating on the 'real' horror, which is generally more terrifying than the supernatural stuff.
Enjoyed Jenny's voice to give contrast with the older brother. It is sort of sweet and contrasts well with her fate.
Just a couple of very minor queries -
need the apostrophe after gimme?
Should criminally insane be capitalised?
All the best
G
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Hi Spooky,
Loved this one.
Concentrating on the 'real' horror, which is generally more terrifying than the supernatural stuff.
Enjoyed Jenny's voice to give contrast with the older brother. It is sort of sweet and contrasts well with her fate.
Just a couple of very minor queries -
need the apostrophe after gimme?
Should criminally insane be capitalised?
All the best
G
Comment Written 19-Jun-2015
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is an excellent write, dean, you did an excellent job writing this story about the little girl who tried to warn her brother but he wouldn't listen, scream out loud. no laughing here...heh heh heh--cleaner version of sol.
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this is an excellent write, dean, you did an excellent job writing this story about the little girl who tried to warn her brother but he wouldn't listen, scream out loud. no laughing here...heh heh heh--cleaner version of sol.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2015
