A New Beginning
Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "Home At Last"The girls leave their chat line days behind.
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Comment from TPAC
Writer illustrates in this write proper line structuring, smooth in its presentation writer in the work lay their story foundation -I found to be a clear stated write
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2015
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Writer illustrates in this write proper line structuring, smooth in its presentation writer in the work lay their story foundation -I found to be a clear stated write
Comment Written 03-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2015
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Thank you so much for your review! Alexis x
Comment from ellie6
A charming story, igor's excitement at the new room is infectious. He can now
bring the mouse in with her babies, Everything seems to be turning out in his favour. I await the next chapter.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2015
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A charming story, igor's excitement at the new room is infectious. He can now
bring the mouse in with her babies, Everything seems to be turning out in his favour. I await the next chapter.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2015
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Thank you so much for your encouraging review, and apologies for taking so long to respond. Yes, Igor is going to reap all the rewards for his hard work!
Alexis x
Comment from MsPetra
It seems as if you have you book flowing along smoothly. This a well written chapter. I didn't see anything that needed correcting.
I will be looking forward to your next installment.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2015
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It seems as if you have you book flowing along smoothly. This a well written chapter. I didn't see anything that needed correcting.
I will be looking forward to your next installment.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2015
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Thank you! The next installment was posted a few weeks ago, but I shall be posting more soon. Alexis x
Comment from wordsfromsue
I forgot how delighted Igor must be to have a home at last! And Laura gets to play Mama Hen with her little chick. To see his excitement and gratitude, you did a great job!
And the self turning on lights aren't bad either! :-)
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2015
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I forgot how delighted Igor must be to have a home at last! And Laura gets to play Mama Hen with her little chick. To see his excitement and gratitude, you did a great job!
And the self turning on lights aren't bad either! :-)
Comment Written 28-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2015
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Well as you now know, Samantha was having some fun. And why not? I'm sure being a ghost can be terribly boring! I had a Polish chef, and gave him a home, so I remember the mother hen bit well! Thank you for taking the time to review, Sue. I really appreciate it - and the six!
Alexis xxx
Comment from Lesley Collier
An interesting story of a restaurant owner setting up a tiny place for her chef to stay as he was uncomfortable at his uncle's and was sleeping on a mattress in the dry store. He is exuberant over his new place which Laura, the owner of the restaurant, has fixed up with all the necessities for his comfort. Having befriending a mouse and her babies, he plans to retrieve them in the morning to stay with him as he has hidden them safe in a box where they will not be in danger of any predators. Laura is satisfied that she has been able to rescue the accomplished chef from his dilemma and as he settles into his cozy new bed for the night he goes to turn out the bedside lights the last one turning off before his hand can reach it. Well written and a wonderful continuation of the restaurant saga!
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2015
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An interesting story of a restaurant owner setting up a tiny place for her chef to stay as he was uncomfortable at his uncle's and was sleeping on a mattress in the dry store. He is exuberant over his new place which Laura, the owner of the restaurant, has fixed up with all the necessities for his comfort. Having befriending a mouse and her babies, he plans to retrieve them in the morning to stay with him as he has hidden them safe in a box where they will not be in danger of any predators. Laura is satisfied that she has been able to rescue the accomplished chef from his dilemma and as he settles into his cozy new bed for the night he goes to turn out the bedside lights the last one turning off before his hand can reach it. Well written and a wonderful continuation of the restaurant saga!
Comment Written 28-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2015
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As usual, you have managed to sum up what's going on perfectly, Lesley. These characters have been great fun to work with and have endless possibilities!
Alexis xxx
Comment from tennesseerose
I did not find one mistake in the writing of this chapter! Very well done and the story seems worthy of further reading; I want to find out WHO turned off the lamp...
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2015
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I did not find one mistake in the writing of this chapter! Very well done and the story seems worthy of further reading; I want to find out WHO turned off the lamp...
Comment Written 28-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2015
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review and very complimentary six. I can't believe this chapter is one of the nominees for Book of the month. It makes me very proud!
Alexis xxx
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As you should be! You're welcome.
Comment from Walu Feral
Hahahaha! Great work mate, I know how he feels about having somehwere nice to live, but he has a ghost as a flatmate, crikey! I can't wait to see what happens when he gets Nadzia in there, he should teach her to be a watchmouse and she can scare the ghost off LOL. Great stuff mate and a top quality build up to this event. Bring it on! Cheers Fez
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2015
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Hahahaha! Great work mate, I know how he feels about having somehwere nice to live, but he has a ghost as a flatmate, crikey! I can't wait to see what happens when he gets Nadzia in there, he should teach her to be a watchmouse and she can scare the ghost off LOL. Great stuff mate and a top quality build up to this event. Bring it on! Cheers Fez
Comment Written 19-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2015
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Yippee! A sixer this late in the week! Thank you, Fez. I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. Alexis xxx
Comment from barkingdog
Okay... so what is it with the lights being on when they opened the door and then the last light turning off on its own? Something strange is happening.
I still worry about Nadzia being outside.
Igor's happiness is evident after living as he has all his life.
Giving him a furnished room, even toothbrush and toothpaste, was certainly a thoughtful, generous deed.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2015
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Okay... so what is it with the lights being on when they opened the door and then the last light turning off on its own? Something strange is happening.
I still worry about Nadzia being outside.
Igor's happiness is evident after living as he has all his life.
Giving him a furnished room, even toothbrush and toothpaste, was certainly a thoughtful, generous deed.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2015
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I have actually had this experience several times when my husband and I ran a 25 bedroom castle hotel here in Scotland. I didn't know what a great sense of humour some ghosts had until I witnessed the 'light' shows. They were also great at turning the kettle on for you in the morning so you could have a cup of tea faster! Alexis x
Comment from Ulla
Oh, isn't that sweet. Bless Igor who have never known such luxury in his life. Lets see what happens to the mouse and its off springs. Very well written. I thoroughly enjoyed it and I am looking forward to reading on. Ulla
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2015
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Oh, isn't that sweet. Bless Igor who have never known such luxury in his life. Lets see what happens to the mouse and its off springs. Very well written. I thoroughly enjoyed it and I am looking forward to reading on. Ulla
Comment Written 16-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2015
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Everyone seems to have enjoyed the 'feel good' factor of this chapter, and I have to admit it was fun to write. Thank you so much for the shiny six, Ulla. As you know, it means a lot. Alexis xxx
Comment from Ric Myworld
I'm always a sucker for happy endings, or beginnings and middles for that matter. Igor saving the mice shows his kindhearted character and now he can share his room with whoever he wants. Great job. :-)
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2015
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I'm always a sucker for happy endings, or beginnings and middles for that matter. Igor saving the mice shows his kindhearted character and now he can share his room with whoever he wants. Great job. :-)
Comment Written 16-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2015
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Me too, Ric. I knew I wouldn't be happy until I got Igor off that dry store floor! As to Nazdia... Lol, not sure if she'll be moving in or not. Alexis x
