Act of Endurance
Viewing comments for Chapter 42 "Freddie?: "Dawn of Chaos
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Comment from Sherman541
I can only say that visions are great, nightmares are not and I would not wish nightmares on anyone. This one that you had must have been horrible and very scary! Sherman541
I have had so many visions in my life and I very much believe them all, as they all came true. Since I was a young girl, I had nightmares and visions. The visions Thank God were not bad, they were all very good. I can so relate to seeing things before they happen.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018
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I can only say that visions are great, nightmares are not and I would not wish nightmares on anyone. This one that you had must have been horrible and very scary! Sherman541
I have had so many visions in my life and I very much believe them all, as they all came true. Since I was a young girl, I had nightmares and visions. The visions Thank God were not bad, they were all very good. I can so relate to seeing things before they happen.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018
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I, too, know that fact. Perhaps, we watch over each other in the overall play of things. Thanking you for your generous rate and comforting thought.
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You are most welcome :) One never knows and I might have seen you and you might have already met me :)
Comment from Liberty Justice
WHOA dang! Did you really have this horrifying Elm Street nightmare? That's why I don't watch scary movies right before I go to bed. I don't want no freaking monster jumping out at me and clawing at my back. NICE. liberty justice
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018
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WHOA dang! Did you really have this horrifying Elm Street nightmare? That's why I don't watch scary movies right before I go to bed. I don't want no freaking monster jumping out at me and clawing at my back. NICE. liberty justice
Comment Written 26-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2018
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Unfortunately, yes. To tell the truth totally in fear during occurrence, now a hollow shell without. Thanking you for your generous rate and touching words.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about the dreams walkers, Elm Street nightmare, teen Ninja; they walked in forests, dark nights, ever scary; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing this with us. KEEP WRITING, TIP CHANGING. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018
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This speaks about the dreams walkers, Elm Street nightmare, teen Ninja; they walked in forests, dark nights, ever scary; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing this with us. KEEP WRITING, TIP CHANGING. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 26-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2018
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A nightmare with the unknown features pertained in the existence we live. Thanking you for your generous rate and touching views.
Comment from jdrhye
Very descriptive, nice use of imagery. I especially like the last stanza! Great job. The font and color are a bit overbearing but that is just a visual opinion not one based on the writing itself.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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Very descriptive, nice use of imagery. I especially like the last stanza! Great job. The font and color are a bit overbearing but that is just a visual opinion not one based on the writing itself.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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Glad aspects of this write was found pleasing, still having to endure pits. Thanking you for your generous rate and comforting thought.
Comment from beizanten
A pretty interesting first stanza. The emotion flow somewhat well. A well written second stanza. The mood flow well and every stanzas are well written
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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A pretty interesting first stanza. The emotion flow somewhat well. A well written second stanza. The mood flow well and every stanzas are well written
Comment Written 19-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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What a relief, at least this write is headed in a positive read. Thanking you for your generous rate and splendid views.
Comment from Gloria ....
Nightmare on Elm Street was a very disturbing film, TPAC. You've definitely drawn us into that surreal and incredibly frightening vista.
Shudder, blade fingers.
Thank you for sharing.
Gloria
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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Nightmare on Elm Street was a very disturbing film, TPAC. You've definitely drawn us into that surreal and incredibly frightening vista.
Shudder, blade fingers.
Thank you for sharing.
Gloria
Comment Written 18-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
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Imagine living the actual reality, not knowing the when or how of next assault. Keep me up. Thanking you for your generous rate and touching thoughts.
Comment from dragonpoet
I seems a peaceful dream changes to a nightmare once you hit the forest. The unknown is always dangerous. The artwork is a surrealist view of a man in the forest and the darkness within both the speaker and the forest.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2018
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I seems a peaceful dream changes to a nightmare once you hit the forest. The unknown is always dangerous. The artwork is a surrealist view of a man in the forest and the darkness within both the speaker and the forest.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 15-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2018
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Glad this write had pleasing aspects, enough to generate your welcomed response. Thanking you for your generous rate and comforting comments.
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No problem.
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Comment from Harry Smith
I really like the perfect picture you chose for this poem. The poem is different and interesting. I really enjoyed the read and will be back to read your work. I like the poem the most because it is different. Keep writing!
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2018
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I really like the perfect picture you chose for this poem. The poem is different and interesting. I really enjoyed the read and will be back to read your work. I like the poem the most because it is different. Keep writing!
Comment Written 15-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2018
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Again, I appreciate your response to my writes, breaking from my difficulties in proper expression of them. Thanking you for your generous rate and touching thoughts.
Comment from Ricky1024
My friend Joe and I were talking about dreams today he had one once and he said he wanted to revisit it and he has done it before and complete it the one I had was more of a nightmare as I saved a drowning man but was not able to see my wife many people drown that day and then I was transferred into a room where they reach individually taking care of their dead and I didn't know how to do that since it is never happened to me and my wife had passed so I put her in this envelope like often that was like a clear white plastic but I put her in properly but not but I didn't put her in the put the casket around her properly so when I wrapped her it wouldn't latch in it was in reverse and that got me upset in a person help me with that but I still felt like I didn't let her soul rest this was well-written thanks talk to Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2018
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My friend Joe and I were talking about dreams today he had one once and he said he wanted to revisit it and he has done it before and complete it the one I had was more of a nightmare as I saved a drowning man but was not able to see my wife many people drown that day and then I was transferred into a room where they reach individually taking care of their dead and I didn't know how to do that since it is never happened to me and my wife had passed so I put her in this envelope like often that was like a clear white plastic but I put her in properly but not but I didn't put her in the put the casket around her properly so when I wrapped her it wouldn't latch in it was in reverse and that got me upset in a person help me with that but I still felt like I didn't let her soul rest this was well-written thanks talk to Ricky 1024
Comment Written 14-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2018
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You did what you had to, God is more hurt by these loss. Thanking you for your generous rate and touching thoughts.
Comment from rjuselius
This is an intriguing piece of poetry dear tpac! Dreams are interesting as they may devour you in your sleep. I actually saw a dream about a guy who was in the same class as me. I had a huge crush on him. For 17 years after high school I dreamt about him nearly every night. Until I met my fiance.
Anyhoo, sorry for rambling.
Thanks for sharing!
Blessings and a big squeeze!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2018
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This is an intriguing piece of poetry dear tpac! Dreams are interesting as they may devour you in your sleep. I actually saw a dream about a guy who was in the same class as me. I had a huge crush on him. For 17 years after high school I dreamt about him nearly every night. Until I met my fiance.
Anyhoo, sorry for rambling.
Thanks for sharing!
Blessings and a big squeeze!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 10-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2018
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Super reply. I'm glad this write captured some aspects of your interests. Thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed thoughts.
