Act of Endurance
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Comment from Thomas Bowling
face like a moon
Excuse me. Did you just call me butterface? That's not very nice. On Valintine's Day, you say this to me? I like to think of my face as well-rounded.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
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face like a moon
Excuse me. Did you just call me butterface? That's not very nice. On Valintine's Day, you say this to me? I like to think of my face as well-rounded.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
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I feel you. Maybe an inappropriate term, or precise defining of a shape. Thanking you for your generous rate and comforting comments.
Comment from Trudi Perkins
This is a beautiful poem you've written and an awesome picture you chose to post with this too. I really enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing your craft with us and I look forward to reading more of your writings.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
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This is a beautiful poem you've written and an awesome picture you chose to post with this too. I really enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing your craft with us and I look forward to reading more of your writings.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
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Glad you found delighting aspects in this write. Thanking you for your generous rate and comforting thought.
Comment from Ricky1024
Time is the great healer but as I was watching a movie the person could not understand how a human being could be controlled by a timepiece on the his wrist thought that that was stupid we are all in a hurry we are all constantly checking clocks and watches time devices we always have a deadline and we always have to be on time it's just unfortunate that the Homosapien goes into work hooks their umbilical cord to the time clock and is under control of the vote and finally have time to rest well written dr. Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
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Time is the great healer but as I was watching a movie the person could not understand how a human being could be controlled by a timepiece on the his wrist thought that that was stupid we are all in a hurry we are all constantly checking clocks and watches time devices we always have a deadline and we always have to be on time it's just unfortunate that the Homosapien goes into work hooks their umbilical cord to the time clock and is under control of the vote and finally have time to rest well written dr. Ricky 1024
Comment Written 14-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2018
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Super reply, see this write crank up your spirit, feeling a kind soul with desired intentions. Thanking you for your generous rate and comforting thought.
Comment from Debbie Pope
There are layers upon layers of truth here. I am just beginning to peal them back. I have read the poem several times, but am at a loss for many of the verses.For instance--Specialist no spoke word directing. I don't think that you need to change it at all. It is for me to discern your meaning. I tell you only so you will know how it is being received. I cannot begin to offer you advise. This is your style and I think that it is good.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
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There are layers upon layers of truth here. I am just beginning to peal them back. I have read the poem several times, but am at a loss for many of the verses.For instance--Specialist no spoke word directing. I don't think that you need to change it at all. It is for me to discern your meaning. I tell you only so you will know how it is being received. I cannot begin to offer you advise. This is your style and I think that it is good.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
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Mostly, thinking about a wrist watch on someone arm. Glad certain features contained found interest dispute pits. Thanking you for your generous rate and splendid views.
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I can see the wrist watch. I am totally amazed at your verses, that is, how your mind words. Mine is waaaay to literal for poetry.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks commentary and philosophy of passing moments, with ticking it goes and clicks our time; well said, well done; thank you for sharing this with us. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
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This speaks commentary and philosophy of passing moments, with ticking it goes and clicks our time; well said, well done; thank you for sharing this with us. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 07-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
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Time creation not from our design, but fact in define in God's creation. God formation of Day and Night over earth was time for angel. It brought forth the Sabbath. Thanking you for your generous rate and comforting comments.
Comment from Ella Gott
A very turbulent peace, which fits perfectly with the concept of time. I loved it! You are so talented, I'd really love if you would review and critique my latest poem "In my Blissful World"!
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
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A very turbulent peace, which fits perfectly with the concept of time. I loved it! You are so talented, I'd really love if you would review and critique my latest poem "In my Blissful World"!
Comment Written 07-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
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I heard good and bad statements about my work, I believed them all, knowing they lack some essence that can open its true potential. I will check out that write. Thanking you for your generous rate and comforting comments.
Comment from c_lucas
Time will continue, sometimes without direction. This is very well written with a ending denied us. There is very well imagery and descriptive scheme.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2016
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Time will continue, sometimes without direction. This is very well written with a ending denied us. There is very well imagery and descriptive scheme.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2016
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Glad aspects of this write were pleasing and comfortable in its given read. Thanking you for generous rate and welcomed thoughts about these efforts.
Comment from KyColonel Randal
This is very interesting, like a page of riddles with time as the answer. Thank you for sharing. This says it is a chapter in a book. What is the theme of the book?
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2016
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This is very interesting, like a page of riddles with time as the answer. Thank you for sharing. This says it is a chapter in a book. What is the theme of the book?
Comment Written 07-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2016
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The eternal aspects which prevails "Always". Thanking you for generous rate and touching viewpoints about this write.
Comment from Janet Foor
An clever and thought provoking piece.
We all have the same 24 hours a day and yet.....they seem to pass differently for some.
I like to "be in the present" and enjoy each moment. My husband enjoys and event after its over.
Well done
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2016
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An clever and thought provoking piece.
We all have the same 24 hours a day and yet.....they seem to pass differently for some.
I like to "be in the present" and enjoy each moment. My husband enjoys and event after its over.
Well done
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 27-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2016
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Time could be measured through deeds, good and bads intentions prevailed in ticks of moments we all share. Thanking you for generous rate and welcomed thoughts.
Comment from RoostyNester
Time is something that controls us in our everyday life, as your poem states. And we can't ignore it or we will fall way behind. Very good poem, in style and words.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2016
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Time is something that controls us in our everyday life, as your poem states. And we can't ignore it or we will fall way behind. Very good poem, in style and words.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2016
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My removal of pits the greatest task in all my writes. Glad this one was somewhat smooth. Thanking you for generous rate and welcomed thoughts.
