No Asp to My Bosom
Boys will be boys80 total reviews
Comment from strandregs
Charming poem well written in flow and rhyme.
perhaps when I'm older I can write about real things. It sounds so good.:-)).Z.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2015
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Charming poem well written in flow and rhyme.
perhaps when I'm older I can write about real things. It sounds so good.:-)).Z.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2015
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That you Z for your thoughtful review. Since I was born in the 40s, I guess you are younger. Maybe when I'm older I will write a cockeyed free verse. LOL.
Have a great weekend.
Janet
Comment from honeytree
I love the art work here very much
It was bit scary but the young lad handled
the snake well in the picture.
I guess this lad could handle snakes quite well
and quite experienced.
I really liked the way how this poem was written.
Honey tree
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2015
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I love the art work here very much
It was bit scary but the young lad handled
the snake well in the picture.
I guess this lad could handle snakes quite well
and quite experienced.
I really liked the way how this poem was written.
Honey tree
Comment Written 16-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2015
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Thank you Honey tree for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I'm so pleased that you liked it.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from alawson
This resonated with me in many ways, I too have been afraid of snakes my whole life, I have two fearless sons who never let me forget that. This is well written and I greatly enjoyed it. Wonderful imagery.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2015
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This resonated with me in many ways, I too have been afraid of snakes my whole life, I have two fearless sons who never let me forget that. This is well written and I greatly enjoyed it. Wonderful imagery.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2015
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Thank you for your thoughtful and generous 6 star review. I'm so pleased that you liked it.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from rose42benn
Cute poem about a cute idea. You tried hard to make it rhyme and tell your story. I have read it several times trying to find a way to give it more than a good, but I can't. It rhymes but it just doesn't work for me.
rose
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2015
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Cute poem about a cute idea. You tried hard to make it rhyme and tell your story. I have read it several times trying to find a way to give it more than a good, but I can't. It rhymes but it just doesn't work for me.
rose
Comment Written 15-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2015
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Thanks
Comment from patcelaw
I have a story here that is called Outsmarted. It is about the boys in my science class in HS finding a snake. They were scaring the girls with the snake. You would enjoy the story. Patricia
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2015
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I have a story here that is called Outsmarted. It is about the boys in my science class in HS finding a snake. They were scaring the girls with the snake. You would enjoy the story. Patricia
Comment Written 15-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2015
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Thank you Patricia for your thoughtful and encouraging review.
I will be looking up your poem "Outsmarted". Sounds fun.
Blessings
Janet
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Janet , It is not a poem it is a short story.
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Thank Patricia. I will look for the short story.
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Janet , It is not a poem it is a short story.
Comment from lalajovanoski
this is a remarkable contest entry submission
This is such an amazingly written, finely composed piece. You are very talented. Thank you very much for sharing this, I truly enjoyed reading. I look forward to reading more from you!
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2015
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this is a remarkable contest entry submission
This is such an amazingly written, finely composed piece. You are very talented. Thank you very much for sharing this, I truly enjoyed reading. I look forward to reading more from you!
Comment Written 15-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2015
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Thank you for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I'm so pleased that you liked it.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Alan K Pease
I do not like snakes of any type at all. I had a run-in with a rattlesnake in Yellowstone National Park. I was just out of his reach and my retreat was hasty. Excellent rhyme, rhythm and story - an easy read.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2015
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I do not like snakes of any type at all. I had a run-in with a rattlesnake in Yellowstone National Park. I was just out of his reach and my retreat was hasty. Excellent rhyme, rhythm and story - an easy read.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2015
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Thank you Alan for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I've been to Yellowstone a few times and fortunately did NOT see ANY snakes let alone a rattler. Yikes!
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Deniz22
"Sssnaake whisspererrrr, he sighed." Now that's funny, terrifying his grandmother with humor. I like this kid. Well done and a good way to ease the phobia...write it out! :)
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2015
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"Sssnaake whisspererrrr, he sighed." Now that's funny, terrifying his grandmother with humor. I like this kid. Well done and a good way to ease the phobia...write it out! :)
Comment Written 15-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2015
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Thanks Dennis. He is a neat kid and does love to get my attention with something wild. Thank you for the fun review and the wonderful six stars.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from risktaker
This is well written. I am very afraid of snakes.In general, boys love all types of animals, they like to hold, touch, and play with them.Your grandson is cute and seems very happy and calm. I like the repeating word snake. the descriptive language works and so does the word choice.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2015
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This is well written. I am very afraid of snakes.In general, boys love all types of animals, they like to hold, touch, and play with them.Your grandson is cute and seems very happy and calm. I like the repeating word snake. the descriptive language works and so does the word choice.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2015
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Thank you for the thoughtful and encouraging review.
He is a good kid when he's not trying to terrify his grandmother.
Blessings
Janet
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Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
I have to admit that snakes don't bother me, but hamsters... that's another matter altogether!
This had a good flow to it and has an engaging story at it heart.
Nicely penned and good luck in the contest.
GMG
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2015
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Hi there,
I have to admit that snakes don't bother me, but hamsters... that's another matter altogether!
This had a good flow to it and has an engaging story at it heart.
Nicely penned and good luck in the contest.
GMG
Comment Written 15-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2015
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Thank you for the fun and encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
