Destiny's Angel
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "The Strong at Heart"A fantasy novel set in modern day Baltimore
9 total reviews
Comment from Walu Feral
Well howdy maam! Dat be a right purdy book ya'll got goin' on dare, LOL, just kiddin. That's another great chapter mate, the suspense is killing me I have to say because ol' C-Daddy is such a mysterious character. She keeps getting in deeper and deeper and that is well played by you my friend.
NEXT!
Cheers Fez
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2015
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Well howdy maam! Dat be a right purdy book ya'll got goin' on dare, LOL, just kiddin. That's another great chapter mate, the suspense is killing me I have to say because ol' C-Daddy is such a mysterious character. She keeps getting in deeper and deeper and that is well played by you my friend.
NEXT!
Cheers Fez
Comment Written 11-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2015
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Thank you so much, Fez. You are such a loyal reader. I will put up another chapter very soon. I have been quite busy responding to all the reviews of a certain poem I recently posted...
C-Daddy is quite mysterious, indeed, and that continues until the end of the story, I'm afraid.
Love that country accent!
Comment from amahra
You have this listed as general fiction; it could easily be a mystery fiction also--with the evil ones chasing a mysterious package that only the narrator knows why and what's in it. Another nice installment, though I've missed some. Great job.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2015
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You have this listed as general fiction; it could easily be a mystery fiction also--with the evil ones chasing a mysterious package that only the narrator knows why and what's in it. Another nice installment, though I've missed some. Great job.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2015
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Thank you, yes, I messed up, its genre is sci/fi fantasy. Thanks for pointing it out. Thanks, also, for the review. You haven't missed a whole lot. You've got the gist of what's going on.
Rhonda
Comment from boxergirl
Good job, Rhonda, with the continuation of your story line. More character development as c-daddy and Candace reveal personal info to each other. Candace commits to helping him search for Sarah. 8-)
School out for the summer?
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2015
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Good job, Rhonda, with the continuation of your story line. More character development as c-daddy and Candace reveal personal info to each other. Candace commits to helping him search for Sarah. 8-)
School out for the summer?
Comment Written 09-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2015
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Yes, school is out!!! Now, time to work in the garden and write. Thanks for reviewing and commenting. It's kind of hard in this venue to keep up with what happens in the story myself. Lol
Comment from Mike Stevens
a very good addition to the story, Rhonda, that C-Daddy, I hope he knows what he's doing--just a C-note on C-Daddy, he seems like he does!
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2015
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a very good addition to the story, Rhonda, that C-Daddy, I hope he knows what he's doing--just a C-note on C-Daddy, he seems like he does!
Comment Written 09-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2015
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Thank you so much, Mike. Yes, his true nature is beginning to pop out. Thanks for reading,
Rhonda
Comment from Chrissy710
This sounds like an interesting story , but I feel I have missed some previous episodes of your book Destiny's Angel where can I go to catch up . This has caught my attention easy to read and your characters seem to be caught in some intriguing web. Would like to follow Cheers Christine
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2015
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This sounds like an interesting story , but I feel I have missed some previous episodes of your book Destiny's Angel where can I go to catch up . This has caught my attention easy to read and your characters seem to be caught in some intriguing web. Would like to follow Cheers Christine
Comment Written 09-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2015
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Thank you Christine, for the comments and desire to look further. All you have to do is click on my name and go to "all posts" and bring up the book, Destiny's Angel, and click on "see all chapters". Thanks again'
Rhonda
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Thanks Ronda I will so so Cheers Christine
Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr
Hello good friend and a great day to you.
I wanted to come by and check out your post and to thank you for using my artwork. I wish you the best in your work. Loyd
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2015
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Hello good friend and a great day to you.
I wanted to come by and check out your post and to thank you for using my artwork. I wish you the best in your work. Loyd
Comment Written 09-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2015
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Thank you. Artists so seldom do drop by. Thank you for letting me use it. It's beautiful!
Rhonda
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You are very welcome. I also have written work here on Fanstory.com. I would be honored to have you check my work out here if you would. Thanks, Loyd C. Taylor, Sr.
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It would be my pleasure!
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Thanks!
Comment from Lesley Collier
A very intriguing story of a high school teacher wanting to help out the children of her high school with a donation of money given to the treasurer Sarah who has desappeared and with the help of a homeless man decides to set out on an adventure battling a group of gods called the Serpants who are trying to spread evil over the world and in the process finding the school treasurer in order to fulfill the needs of the schoolchildren. Wonderfully written with a great plot of good versus evil!
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2015
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A very intriguing story of a high school teacher wanting to help out the children of her high school with a donation of money given to the treasurer Sarah who has desappeared and with the help of a homeless man decides to set out on an adventure battling a group of gods called the Serpants who are trying to spread evil over the world and in the process finding the school treasurer in order to fulfill the needs of the schoolchildren. Wonderfully written with a great plot of good versus evil!
Comment Written 09-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2015
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Wow, Leslie, I couldn't have summarized it better myself. Thanks for the brilliant review!
Rhonda
Comment from chasennov
Cadence decides to run the race set before her.A chapter in the book Destiny's Angel. The Strong at Heart.' Yep, another very good chapter that you have created here, and one that seems structurally sound. Well done.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2015
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Cadence decides to run the race set before her.A chapter in the book Destiny's Angel. The Strong at Heart.' Yep, another very good chapter that you have created here, and one that seems structurally sound. Well done.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2015
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Thank you so much for the review and your most learned opinion. I appreciate the comments,
Rhonda
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You are most welcome, Rhonda.
Comment from MelB
C-Daddy is definitely very interesting. It seems Cadence keeps finding things they have in common. I'm still curious what is in that package the Serpents are looking for. Good chapter and good dialog between Cadence and C-Daddy.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2015
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C-Daddy is definitely very interesting. It seems Cadence keeps finding things they have in common. I'm still curious what is in that package the Serpents are looking for. Good chapter and good dialog between Cadence and C-Daddy.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2015
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Thank you so much. I'm afraid you won't know what is in the mysterious package for awhile, or what they really want, but it will all tie together. Thanks for reading and commenting,
Rhonda
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I kinda figured it would be a while:)
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Good thing is, it's a Novella and not a novel!
