Destiny's Angel
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "C-Daddy's Treasures"A fantasy novel set in modern day Baltimore
7 total reviews
Comment from Walu Feral
G'day mate. Welcome back to my favorite book, I've missed it and I am still miles behind in reviewing. That is so sad about her son and the vision that you painted of her missing him. The dialogue is super once again, great job my friend....
I think this is a typo....
"The worse(worst). At one time she was okay, I mean we all hung around together,"
Well done and cheers Fez
NEXT!
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2015
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G'day mate. Welcome back to my favorite book, I've missed it and I am still miles behind in reviewing. That is so sad about her son and the vision that you painted of her missing him. The dialogue is super once again, great job my friend....
I think this is a typo....
"The worse(worst). At one time she was okay, I mean we all hung around together,"
Well done and cheers Fez
NEXT!
Comment Written 08-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2015
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Thank you so much, my friend, for the wonderful review and most welcome 6 star rating! You're the best!
I will fix that typo. Thanks for bringing it to my attention! Cheers back to you,
Rhonda
Comment from MelB
Great dialog between the two characters. It just became clear we have one angel here and perhaps a couple of fallen angels. I wonder if Cadence has recognized this fact?
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2015
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Great dialog between the two characters. It just became clear we have one angel here and perhaps a couple of fallen angels. I wonder if Cadence has recognized this fact?
Comment Written 08-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2015
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Not yet, and more players will show up. She's a bit naive through most of the story, but becomes dynamic all at once. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Rhonda
Comment from boxergirl
This is an interesting conversation between Candace and C-Daddy.
Bringing the picture from his past to help connect the twins to him was a great idea.
I did have one question and I may have missed it earlier or maybe it doesn't matter. :-)
If Sarah is still missing, wouldn't her parents and/or the police be involved?
Karen 8-)
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2015
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This is an interesting conversation between Candace and C-Daddy.
Bringing the picture from his past to help connect the twins to him was a great idea.
I did have one question and I may have missed it earlier or maybe it doesn't matter. :-)
If Sarah is still missing, wouldn't her parents and/or the police be involved?
Karen 8-)
Comment Written 07-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2015
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Yes, they are involved, so C-Daddy takes Cadence on their own investigation as he feels he has evidence the police will ignore.
Thanks for reading and keeping up. I will post another chapter soon. I actually cut the chapter in half to post it so it wouldn't be too long.
Rhonda
Comment from amahra
Another good installment, Davisr. And great dialogue that really bring characters to life.
"Deep people are made of many layers.[really like this line.]
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2015
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Another good installment, Davisr. And great dialogue that really bring characters to life.
"Deep people are made of many layers.[really like this line.]
Comment Written 06-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2015
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Thank you so much! As always, I cherish your reviews,
Rhonda
Comment from royowen
There were some explanations in this episode of the people in the serpent's group that hadn't surfaced until now, this one gives an explanation, of them probably being fallen Angels, while C-Daddy, is probably a "current angel! As the phot shows them to be, well done, Rhonda, now we know what we're up against, but does Cadence? Well done, my friend, blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2015
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There were some explanations in this episode of the people in the serpent's group that hadn't surfaced until now, this one gives an explanation, of them probably being fallen Angels, while C-Daddy, is probably a "current angel! As the phot shows them to be, well done, Rhonda, now we know what we're up against, but does Cadence? Well done, my friend, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2015
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Thank you, Roy, and I'm afraid Cadence has only just begun to find out what she's up against. Spot on about the major players. I cut this chapter in half due to its size, so I will post the other half shortly. Thanks for following!
Rhonda
Comment from Mike Stevens
A quite-excellent chapter Rhonda, I like the saying "deep people are made of many layers." Of course, it has nothing to do with me, but for others, I fits!
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2015
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A quite-excellent chapter Rhonda, I like the saying "deep people are made of many layers." Of course, it has nothing to do with me, but for others, I fits!
Comment Written 06-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2015
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I think it fits you, perfectly, thanks for the super review!
Rhonda
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Well, thank you, shucks!
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Comment from chasennov
Chapter 13 of the book Destiny's Angel Cadence and C-Daddy examine interesting pictures. "C-Daddy's Treasures" I have enjoyed the chapter you created here. I particularly liked; 'She had her own special picture that she carried in her purse, but hadn't the strength to look at it often.' Well done.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2015
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Chapter 13 of the book Destiny's Angel Cadence and C-Daddy examine interesting pictures. "C-Daddy's Treasures" I have enjoyed the chapter you created here. I particularly liked; 'She had her own special picture that she carried in her purse, but hadn't the strength to look at it often.' Well done.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2015
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Thank you so much for the great review and comments, especially pointing out your favorite part.
Rhonda
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You are most welcome, Rhonda.
