Comment from danpald

Excellent

The smile of the dolphin
Comes to show it's play
When reading this little poem
The royal becomes the tamed

Well done with the picture
The princess is beautiful
As two jump in the sea
The royal bows to love

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2015

Thanks for the review danpald, I appreciate your thoughts on this, cheers

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

This meets the contest requirements nicely with a spot on line and syllable count. You deliver a delightful piece which brings a smile to the reader's lips. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you for sharing it.

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2015

Thanks for the sweet review Mystic Angel. that is nice of you to say.... It is not funny, 'ha ha,' bit I thought the idea was nice....they do remind me of little princes,,...cheers

Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

A very good entry into the humorous contest, all syllables correct. A fabulous photo to go with your 5-7-5 poem. I wish you the very best of luck
Mary

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2015

Thanks for the kind review, not so funny ha ha though, cheers

Comment from Brett Matthew West

Excellent

Neptune's daughter standing guard over the little princes while they are playing. Your 5-7-5 is short, sweet, and well written describing this scene nicely.

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2015

Thanks for the kind review Brett. not so funny though, cheers