Comment from Cindy Warren

Excellent

Oh-oh, I forgot it was Alex's body Luke was using. I guess she can't just leave Luke tied up for a while, maybe in the loony bin claiming to be supreme commander. That wouldn't be fair to Alex. The burns should heal, since those things wouldn't have burnt Alex in the first place.

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2015

Thanks, Cindy. The burns are real, even if meant to stop Lucifer and not intended for Alex.

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

Sebastian blames Blaze because Lorna is with another man. He really tears into her and tells her being an angel is just a façade. Great dialogue there. Blaze apologizes, and Sebastian realizes that anger won't help. He does seem to be ready to turn himself in. But they've got to deal with Luke. Wonder what Sebastian will think of the Hellevator? This is really interesting. judi

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2015

Thanks so much, Judi. :)

reply by judiverse on 03-Jun-2015

You're very welcome. Luke hasn't done too well on this trip to earth. judi

Comment from Fridayauthor

Excellent

Some good back and forth dialog here to convince him of her intentions. Now, what's next?

I'm sure we'll see soon.

Thank you!

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2015

Thanks a bunch, Ray. :)

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Oh, boy what a touching chapter. You really know how to get into the hearts and heads of people, Phyllis.

Now I also need to know why they need to go to the shower, but the next chapter title sounds rather ominous.

Guess I best read it and find out.

Grrrrrrrreeeeeeat writing, you.

Gloria

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2015

Thank you soooo much for the terrific review. The shower? Maybe you weren't here when Ginger and Blaze used their showers. Do you remember what comes and goes there? If not, read on. The next chapter is posted. :)

Comment from Alan K Pease

Excellent

Sebastian has some points, but is not in any position to do anything but complain. Blaise has figured things out most of what she does, plenty of experience there especially with Luke.

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015

Thanks for reading, Alan. Luke is not going to be happy when he learns the man who stole his money helped Blaze to make him helpless. :)

Comment from Curly Girly

Excellent

Sebastian now knows that Lorna is with Kevin. He is mad about it and reckons that Blaze set it up deliberately.
Blaze needs to get Alex to a shower. I am not sure what she plans to do there. We'll see.
All good, no spags spotted.

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015

Thanks, Nicole. Not any shower, but her shower. Do you remember what comes and goes there? :)

Comment from boxergirl

Excellent

Hopefully a fresh start for the both of Blaze and Sebastian.
I like the message here that sometimes it is not the right kind of love between two people.
And here goes Luke down the hellovator! Yea!!

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015

Thank you so much. Yes, Luke will not be happy when he lands back in Hell, having failed. :)

Comment from Connie C

Excellent

Being pretty much out of touch with the story for some time now, I can only comment on your writing. That's easy to do because you continue to amaze me with the way you use dialogue to move the story along, and I can never find one single spag in your writing! (Darn--if only I could offer some constructive criticism.) Now I'm wondering just where Alex is being taken to if this is the hospital Luke prefers. You do have a way, my friend, of occasionally leaving the reader wondering . . . .
Connie

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015

Thanks for stopping in, Connie. Luke would use the hospital in Hell, which means Blaze will have to send for the Hellevator to take him down. :)

Comment from seaglass

Excellent

Loosing Lorna was the best punishment for him. It's natural karma for his corrupt he was in, and immoral behavior. If he turns over names of others involved in any corruption he might cut a deal with the prosecution.

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015

Good point, Carolyn. Thanks for reading and for your comments. :)

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi Phyllis,

This is a good chapter. I've forgotten what happened to Alex . . . how he got burns. It is so awful not to remember things and it isn't one bit funny. I wish that my forgetfulness would take a leave and never return.

Kat

 Comment Written 01-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015

Thanks, Kat. I have a bad memory too. Getting worse with age. :)

reply by MizKat on 03-Jun-2015

Yes, the older I get the more I forget.