Get Well, Brooke!
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Comment from Chrissy710
A lovely poem for Brooke and I hope will give her the inspiration to get well. I like your double meaning related in this poem, one could either look at it as the time of day or as the darkness in Brooke's life at the moment. A nice triolet. I hope I have interpreted this correctly. Well chosen words. cheers Christine
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
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A lovely poem for Brooke and I hope will give her the inspiration to get well. I like your double meaning related in this poem, one could either look at it as the time of day or as the darkness in Brooke's life at the moment. A nice triolet. I hope I have interpreted this correctly. Well chosen words. cheers Christine
Comment Written 01-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
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Thank you for the great review, and yes, you are so right about the meaning. Jan
Comment from judiverse
What a lovely photograph! This poem does offer hope and encouragement. Things may look dark to us, but there's always a ray of hope. The darkness can hide treasures, as you write. People do have to take the first step if they want to get better. Sometimes they have to do therapy or other things that require effort, but they help in the long run. Excellent word choices. judi
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
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What a lovely photograph! This poem does offer hope and encouragement. Things may look dark to us, but there's always a ray of hope. The darkness can hide treasures, as you write. People do have to take the first step if they want to get better. Sometimes they have to do therapy or other things that require effort, but they help in the long run. Excellent word choices. judi
Comment Written 01-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
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Thank you so much. I really appreciate your support. I am glad you liked my triolet dedicated to Brooke. I agree with what you say about one helping themselves on the road to recovery. Thanks again.
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You're welcome. Lots of encouragement from others, helps, too. judi
Comment from Lovinia
Hi Jannypan
I found this first before the counting poems in your profile. ;] A triolet was the first form Brooke inspired me to write ... because I loved hers so much. You've listened well to Miranda's note. She said Brooke would prefer to be encouraged to have the strength to face her challenge rather than pray for a 'cure'. You've achieved that here in this fine triolet. Great concept and presentation. Your emotions for Brooke and her recovery stand out clear. Hugs - Lovi xox
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
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Hi Jannypan
I found this first before the counting poems in your profile. ;] A triolet was the first form Brooke inspired me to write ... because I loved hers so much. You've listened well to Miranda's note. She said Brooke would prefer to be encouraged to have the strength to face her challenge rather than pray for a 'cure'. You've achieved that here in this fine triolet. Great concept and presentation. Your emotions for Brooke and her recovery stand out clear. Hugs - Lovi xox
Comment Written 01-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
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WOW! I am so pleased that you thought my poem worthy of reading. Your kind comments are amazing to me that someone would see that in my poem. Thank you for your review and great comments. You are so encouraging to me.
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I wish I had more time to read ... so much pleasure in reading a poem written from the heart. Hugs - Lovi xoxo
Comment from pharp
A beautifully written triolet . I am still trying to master this type of poetry. I love the message, I am sure Brooke will enjoy it as well. The artwork chosen is simply beautiful; LOL Portia thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
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A beautifully written triolet . I am still trying to master this type of poetry. I love the message, I am sure Brooke will enjoy it as well. The artwork chosen is simply beautiful; LOL Portia thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
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Thank you o much. The first time I wrote this, I had the format upside down. I had a lot of revising to do. This is the final form. Jan
Comment from TAB_that's me
great triolet form and tribute to Brooke. It is uplifting and encouraging in its message. beautifully done Jan.
~~~teresa~~~
reply by the author on 31-May-2015
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great triolet form and tribute to Brooke. It is uplifting and encouraging in its message. beautifully done Jan.
~~~teresa~~~
Comment Written 31-May-2015
reply by the author on 31-May-2015
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I so appreciate your kind comments and great review. Jan
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem! The poem flows and connects well. The words are beautiful, creative and thought provoking. The artwork is perfect and reflects the theme of your poem well.
reply by the author on 31-May-2015
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Excellent Poem! The poem flows and connects well. The words are beautiful, creative and thought provoking. The artwork is perfect and reflects the theme of your poem well.
Comment Written 31-May-2015
reply by the author on 31-May-2015
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Thank you so much for your kind words and review. Jan
Comment from emkoutny
I like the first verse about "the beauty that will unfold as the light reflects to your eyes." The picture is very fitting for the poem also. The rhyme scheme works well also.
reply by the author on 31-May-2015
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I like the first verse about "the beauty that will unfold as the light reflects to your eyes." The picture is very fitting for the poem also. The rhyme scheme works well also.
Comment Written 31-May-2015
reply by the author on 31-May-2015
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Thank you for your kind comments and great rating. I appreciate both.
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You got it!
Comment from cbat
another beautiful rendition.
Sometimes I am not sure of the correct word.
I plan to follow all you write, and when time allows seek out past ones.
I am sure I enjoy your writing.
reply by the author on 31-May-2015
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another beautiful rendition.
Sometimes I am not sure of the correct word.
I plan to follow all you write, and when time allows seek out past ones.
I am sure I enjoy your writing.
Comment Written 31-May-2015
reply by the author on 31-May-2015
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I am so glad you are a fan of mine. I appreciate everything you say. You are always so positive. Thank you.
Comment from gypsymoth
Lovely poem you've written for Brooke. I've haven't checked
into FS for about 2months. I'm sorry to know that Brooke
is having some kind of difficulty. I know with all the prayers we will say on her behalf, she will bring back her sunshine.
Gypsymoth
reply by the author on 31-May-2015
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Lovely poem you've written for Brooke. I've haven't checked
into FS for about 2months. I'm sorry to know that Brooke
is having some kind of difficulty. I know with all the prayers we will say on her behalf, she will bring back her sunshine.
Gypsymoth
Comment Written 31-May-2015
reply by the author on 31-May-2015
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Thank you very much for the great review. [check out Forum general for info on Brooke]
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Thank you ,I will.
Comment from Jackarrie
Hi Jan
I love this beautiful poem you have dedicated to Brooke.
the darkness before the sunrise
hides the beauty that will unfold
These two lines say it all.
Well written,
Mary
reply by the author on 31-May-2015
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Hi Jan
I love this beautiful poem you have dedicated to Brooke.
the darkness before the sunrise
hides the beauty that will unfold
These two lines say it all.
Well written,
Mary
Comment Written 31-May-2015
reply by the author on 31-May-2015
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I appreciate you time. Thank you so much. Jan
