The Sea and Thee.
Many times we have shared thoughts about the sea.12 total reviews
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is a lovely poem which expresses Brooke's giving and shiny personality to a tee. I hope you'll both invite me to join you on that trek along the seaside for it is one of my favorite places too. Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.
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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
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Comment Written 30-May-2015
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
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You are welcome to join our jaunt in spirit. And thanks for your kind review. Love, K.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a nicely done message for Brooke. The rhyme and flow are good. I like the picture, too. Your message is stated well.
In your author notes you state, "one day we will both fly free." I would delete that part. It seems depressing even though it is the truth.
Good job and thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
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This is a nicely done message for Brooke. The rhyme and flow are good. I like the picture, too. Your message is stated well.
In your author notes you state, "one day we will both fly free." I would delete that part. It seems depressing even though it is the truth.
Good job and thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 30-May-2015
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
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Thank you for reading jannypan. I have nursed MS and know what the future holds. I live in pain everyday and will be glad to be free in spirit. Blessings, K.
