The Sea and Thee.
Many times we have shared thoughts about the sea.12 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Dear Kay, this is so touching. I feel your emotion come through in this lovely poem for Brooke. I still cannot get my head around the thought that she will have to spend her life in a nursing home, she has always been so vibrant, and just does not deserve what life has now dished out for her. We haven't heard anymore from Miranda, I just cannot understand why she can't stay in touch with us by laptop. MS does not affect the mind. I just don't understand this at all. But, that aside, I know she will love this poem from you, my lovely friend. :) Sandra
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015
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Dear Kay, this is so touching. I feel your emotion come through in this lovely poem for Brooke. I still cannot get my head around the thought that she will have to spend her life in a nursing home, she has always been so vibrant, and just does not deserve what life has now dished out for her. We haven't heard anymore from Miranda, I just cannot understand why she can't stay in touch with us by laptop. MS does not affect the mind. I just don't understand this at all. But, that aside, I know she will love this poem from you, my lovely friend. :) Sandra
Comment Written 02-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015
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How did the hospital go? Yes, I can't understand no follow up from Miranda. Some people think she will get better, she won't, she could live for years as the body breaks down. What a dreadful life sentence. Anyway, thanks for reading, I appreciate your review. Love, K. :-)XX
Comment from Gunner Lil
A well written poem. It has very good pace and paints a great picture of
a sandy beach with gentle rolling waves.
A easy read that has been written with a lot passion and love.
Thank you.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015
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A well written poem. It has very good pace and paints a great picture of
a sandy beach with gentle rolling waves.
A easy read that has been written with a lot passion and love.
Thank you.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015
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Thank you Lil, glad you enjoyed. Blessings, Kay.
Comment from Nosha17
Lovely tribute to Brook, we on this site are all missing her and wishing her well. Nice imagery and good use of rhyming to convey your message. In verse 2, it should be creatures' lee. Most enjoyable. Faye
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015
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Lovely tribute to Brook, we on this site are all missing her and wishing her well. Nice imagery and good use of rhyming to convey your message. In verse 2, it should be creatures' lee. Most enjoyable. Faye
Comment Written 01-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015
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Faye, Thanks for reading, yes, well all miss her. Blessings, Kay.
Comment from Alan K Pease
Thank you Kay for telling of Brooke battle with MS. For someone who continually write her poems with love it seem to be unfair, but life is a mixture of good and bad. We also have Maureen and possibly Artemis who have been away from us for a while. Maureen definitely with MS.
Lovely thought of yours with a lovely poem
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
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Thank you Kay for telling of Brooke battle with MS. For someone who continually write her poems with love it seem to be unfair, but life is a mixture of good and bad. We also have Maureen and possibly Artemis who have been away from us for a while. Maureen definitely with MS.
Lovely thought of yours with a lovely poem
Comment Written 31-May-2015
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
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Alan, I believe our fate is marked out before we are born; she is one feisty lady. I don't hold high hopes for recovery, most Fanstorians think she is bullet-proof, nobody is. My love to you and Marilyn. :-)K XX
Comment from l.raven
OH Kay, this is so beautiful...Brooke is so going to love it...you know sweetie girl...one day we will all meet by the sea...and walk in the sand together...beautiful you...so very nicely written...love ya Linda luff...xxoo
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
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OH Kay, this is so beautiful...Brooke is so going to love it...you know sweetie girl...one day we will all meet by the sea...and walk in the sand together...beautiful you...so very nicely written...love ya Linda luff...xxoo
Comment Written 31-May-2015
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
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Sigh...thank you best friend. We all love the sea and she is no exception. Love, K.
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no she isn't...I really miss her Kay...it must have been bad whatever happened when they found she had this MS...hummmm...you are sooooooo welcome bestest friend...luff xxoo
Comment from jlsavell
Kace, as always you present not only a stunning and visual presentation of word artistry but your heart and soul flood and spill from every work. Brooke will cherish this work for many many years to come. To honor her with such beauty is to honor you with immense love and character. Beautiful.. you friend and fan always.. Jimi
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
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Kace, as always you present not only a stunning and visual presentation of word artistry but your heart and soul flood and spill from every work. Brooke will cherish this work for many many years to come. To honor her with such beauty is to honor you with immense love and character. Beautiful.. you friend and fan always.. Jimi
Comment Written 31-May-2015
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
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Dear Fidget, Thanks so much for your kind words. We Fanstorians need to stick together. Love, K.
Comment from mumsyone
Kay, Your poem is a nice tribute to Brooke and shows how the two of you must have "talked" at times. Your "rock pools" bring back memories of Australia for me.
Lois
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
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Kay, Your poem is a nice tribute to Brooke and shows how the two of you must have "talked" at times. Your "rock pools" bring back memories of Australia for me.
Lois
Comment Written 31-May-2015
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
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Luverly Lois, Thanks so much for reading. Glad you remember Oz.
love, K.
Comment from Eigle Rull
Wow! This is a beautiful tribute to your friend Brooke. It is full of love and good wishes. It has great rhyming and excellent flow. Nicely done, my friend.
I've read many poems from those on FS all going to Brooke. I don't know her, however, I can feel that she is a well loved person. I'm sure she will love this poem, my friend.
Always with respect,
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
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Wow! This is a beautiful tribute to your friend Brooke. It is full of love and good wishes. It has great rhyming and excellent flow. Nicely done, my friend.
I've read many poems from those on FS all going to Brooke. I don't know her, however, I can feel that she is a well loved person. I'm sure she will love this poem, my friend.
Always with respect,
Comment Written 31-May-2015
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
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Thanks Eigle, she is a fanstory icon. Struck down with a devastating disease. Love, K.
Comment from Sasha
This is absolutely lovely. Yes, Brooke loves the sea and has told me many times how she envies that I live just a few blocks from the Pacific Ocean. I am sure she will enjoy this one.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
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This is absolutely lovely. Yes, Brooke loves the sea and has told me many times how she envies that I live just a few blocks from the Pacific Ocean. I am sure she will enjoy this one.
Comment Written 30-May-2015
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
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You and I share the Pacific Ocean (me, 20 mins away) thanks for reading. :-)K XX
Comment from walbc
This is a beautifully tender and heartfelt tribute to your friend Brooke.
Exceptionally well done, Aussie, thanks so much for sharing.
warm regards, wendy.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
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This is a beautifully tender and heartfelt tribute to your friend Brooke.
Exceptionally well done, Aussie, thanks so much for sharing.
warm regards, wendy.
Comment Written 30-May-2015
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2015
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Wendy, Thanks so much for reading neighbour. Brooke is an icon on FS. Getting cold tonight. :-)xx K.
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I know about Brooke and how she's been #1 poet for forever. She sure has a natural talent. It's so sad that she is so unwell. I hope she improves soon.
This morning it is Freezing! have got seven layers on plus the air conditioner. I've got a thermostat problem with my body, can't handle the cold. xo
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I too can't control my body thermostat; did you know that the Govt. will give you $80 every three months towards A/C? Pensioner I think you have to be.
